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LO1 & LO2 Feedback and Resubmission Guide

The student received feedback on Learning Outcome 1 (LO1) and Learning Outcome 2 (LO2) indicating incomplete work. For LO1, the student needs to add a total to the budget, add a storyboard, and add a production schedule. For LO2, the student is missing the recce and risk assessment from their blog. The feedback recommends ensuring all work is uploaded clearly labelled and provides a resubmission deadline of June 15th.

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LO1 & LO2 Feedback and Resubmission Guide

The student received feedback on Learning Outcome 1 (LO1) and Learning Outcome 2 (LO2) indicating incomplete work. For LO1, the student needs to add a total to the budget, add a storyboard, and add a production schedule. For LO2, the student is missing the recce and risk assessment from their blog. The feedback recommends ensuring all work is uploaded clearly labelled and provides a resubmission deadline of June 15th.

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LO1 & LO2 FEEDBACK

Sam Ehret-Pickett LO1 & LO2 Feedback. 5/6/2018

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You may have missing
items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please improve this. If you require help with any of
this work, or need to show me work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

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Remember – Don’t overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are clearly labelled with
the words “Re-Submission”.

LEARNING OUTCOME 1.

Current Grade for LO1: Fail


You have some very good work, but there are a few things missing, so I cannot yet pass this
learning outcome.
Add a total to the budget.
Add storyboard
Add production schedule

LEARNING OUTCOME 2.
Current Grade for LO2: Fail
Again, the start of some good work – just not fully complete.
The recce is not on your blog. Possibly an error with uploading?
The risk assessment is also missing, make sure you explain the risks in all locations and make
it very clear which ones apply to each place. (Woods, office, street etc)

The resubmission deadline for both learning outcomes is: June 15th

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