Last Name 1
Macario Rosas
Tubbs
ENGL 1302-129
3/31/20
“Daddy” Annotations
Line 2- black shoe- images
Line 3- “I have lived like a foot”- simile
Line 4- “For thirty years, poor and white- images, probably old stressed person.
Stanza 1- ABABA rhyme pattern
Line 6- Daddy, I have had to kill you- words, kill is a really strong word and ties into the
poem.
Line 8- Marble-heavy, a bag full of God- Metaphor, God is like marbles.
Line 8- God- religious symbol
Line 9- Ghastly- Definition- great horror or fear.
Line 9- Ghastly statue with one gray toe- images
Line 10- Big as a Frisco seal- simile
Line 11- head in the freakish Atlantic- images
Line 12- bean green over blue-word choice, green over the oceans, beautiful scenery.
Stanza 3- ABABB rhyme pattern
Line 17- Scraped flat by the roller- images
Line 18- Of wars, wars, wars- repetition, emphasizing the importance of the war.
Last Name 2
Line 20- Polack-Definition- Person from Poland
Line 21- My Polack friend, says there are a dozen or two- Maybe the number of soldiers?
Line 25- The tongue stuck in my jaw- Couldn’t speak?
Line 26- It stuck in a barb wire snare- Emphasizing or significance?
Line 27-Ich- repetition, also definition for “I”, stutter
Line 29- I thought every German was you- Speaking about her dad.
Stanza 6- ABCAC rhyme pattern
Line 32- chuffing-definition- regular sharp puffing sound
Line 32- Chuffing me off like a Jew- Simile
Line 35- I think I may well be a Jew- phrase, she feels sympathy for the Jews.
Line 38- gypsy-ancestress- maybe comparing her luck to witchcraft?
Line 41- I have always been scared of you- towards Nazi Germans.
Stanza 9- AABAA rhyme pattern- also, describes Germans
Line 47- So black no sky could squeak through- metaphor
Line 53- Cleft chin- definition- Y shaped dimple chin
Line 62- Stuck me together like glue- Did not let her leave and die
Line 69- Black telephone’s off at the root- maybe black telephone is the communication
with her dad
Line 76- There’s a stake in your fat black heart- Not thinking of her “Vampire-like”
father anymore.
Line 80- Daddy, daddy, you bastard, I’m through- No more thinking of her dead Nazi
vampire father.