Thank You For Downloading This Product : Stacey Lloyd
Thank You For Downloading This Product : Stacey Lloyd
CONTENTS
Punctuating Direct & Indirect Speech: This worksheet requires students to examine a little cartoon and then
transcribe the spoken words of the cartoon in both the direct and indirect forms.
Pre-knowledge required: Students should know how to punctuate dialogue & use quotation marks.
Extension Idea: Ask students to record snippets of conversations on their cellphones and then transcribe
them. They should correctly punctuate the written interactions.
Understanding Comma Splices*: This worksheet guides students through the definition of a comma splice, with
examples. The activity requires them to identify whether the sentences are correctly punctuated or if there are comma splices.
Pre-knowledge required: Understanding of independent clauses and uses of the comma. However,
actual knowledge of what a comma splice is, is not required as it is included.
Extension Idea: Once they have identified the incorrect sentences, instruct students to write the corrected
versions in their notebooks.
* The font on this page is rather large, so in the interest of saving paper, you could easily print 2 to a page.
Using the Apostrophe: This worksheet contains examples of apostrophe errors in advertising. Students have to
identify the errors and correct them, but they are also required to go one step further and explain the corrections.
Pre-knowledge required: Students should know the 2 uses of the apostrophe: omission and possession.
Extension Idea: Ask students to find examples of such errors in their daily lives: twitter posts, adverts,
Facebook statuses etc. – they are not hard to find!
Using Commas Correctly: This worksheet contains various sentences which contain commas – some correctly
punctuated, others incorrectly punctuated. Students have to identify whether the commas are used correctly or not, and then
go further to explain why or why not.
Pre-knowledge required: Students should know and understand the main uses of the comma.
Extension Idea: Ask students to write their own sentences displaying the different uses of the comma.
Using Colons and Semicolons: This worksheet contains 2 exercises: in the first, students have to fill in the missing
colons and semicolons; in the second, students have to identify the correctly punctuated sentences (multiple choice).
Pre-knowledge required: Students should know and understand the function of the semicolon and the
colon, and how they differ.
Extension Idea: Ask students to rewrite the sentences in exercise 1, eliminating the colons and semicolons
by rearranging the words and construction.
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Wrestling with the hose, the firefighter shouted that he couldn’t control the blaze.
the blaze!
Indirect:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
1 I am going to Direct:__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
ask Sue to prom.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
She will
probably
Indirect:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
No, I
just Indirect:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
ate.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Tom?
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Indirect:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4
I’m Direct:__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
going
to drop ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
it.
Indirect:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Indirect:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7
on ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Friday.
Indirect:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8 Thank you all
Direct:__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
for coming.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Indirect:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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For each of the following, write both the direct and indirect versions of what is spoken. You can name
the speaker, and give additional information such as how the words are spoken. EY
PLEASE INOTE:
can’t Direct:This is__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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can’t control blaze!” therefore
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firefighter as heanswer key. However,
wrestled with the the hose.
EXAMPLE
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following are example answers to illustrate what is required and to guide discussion after the exercise.
Wrestling with the hose, the firefighter shouted that he couldn’t control the blaze.
the blaze!
Indirect:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
“I am going to ask Sue to prom,” said Bob. Then he thought to himself, “She will
1 I am going to Direct:__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
ask Sue to prom.
No, I
“No,” squeaked Sally, “I just ate.”
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
just In his gravelly voice, the man asked Sally if she was hungry. Sally said that she
Indirect:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
ate.
was not and then explained that she had just eaten.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3 Jim looked at his son and asked, “Are you having fun Tom?”
Are you Direct:__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
having fun
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Tom?
While looking at his son, Jim asked Tom if he was having fun.
Indirect:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4 “I’m going to drop it,” thought the moving man, while carrying the heavy box.
I’m Direct:__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
going .
to drop ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
it.
Indirect:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The moving man worried that he would drop the heavy box that he was
carrying. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Ralph, with his five thousand dollar camera in his hand, thought, “How do I say no?”
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
How
do I Excitedly, Joshua asked Ralph if he would take a picture of him. Ralph, with his
Indirect:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
say no?
five thousand dollar camera in his hand, wondered how to decline.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The already overly excited children declared that they wanted to play.
Indirect:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
on
Friday.
Indirect:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The teacher declared that the test would be on Friday.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8 Thank you all Jeff walked onto the stage and said, “Thank you all for coming,” to the adoring
Direct:__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
for coming.
audience.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Jeff walked onto the stage thanked the adoring audience for coming.
Indirect:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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COMMA | COMMA | COMMA | COMMA | COMMA | COMMA | COMMA | COMMA | Understanding COMMA SPLICES
In written English, the comma splice is one of the most frequent errors. Learn
what it is, and how to avoid it, and your writing will be all the better for it.
WHAT IS IT?
A comma splice is the use of a comma to join two independent clauses.
EXAMPLE: It is late, we will not make the bus on time. NG
✗ W RO
Either side of this comma, we
have independent clauses – sentences in their
own right, which can stand alone.
In English, t his is considered incorrect. In order t o join t oget her t wo independent
clauses, we need t o use a comma and a coordinat ing conjunction ( such as and, so or
but ) . Or we can writ e t hem as t wo separat e sent ences, or join wit h a semicolon.
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EXAMPLES: It is late, and we will not make the bus on time. ✓ RIIGGHHT
It is late; we will not make the bus on time. ✓ R HT
It is late. We will not make the bus on time.
✓ RIG
PRACTICE
For each of the following, decide if they are complete sentences or if there are comma splices.
Comma
Splice
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Many people make errors when using the apostrophe, and it is particularly embarrassing when
these errors appear in print or business advertising. Examine such errors below, and rewrite the
1
adverts, making the corrections. Then explain the corrections.
Explain: ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Youll no
_
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2
Your welcome
to taste our
Rewrite: _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Explain: ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
cheeses _
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3 Rewrite: _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Explain: ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4 m inu te’s
Rewrite: _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Explain: ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
B
ack in 5 _
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5 Farmers a
pp
sold herele’s
Rewrite: _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Explain: ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7 W om e n s ’ meetin
e on
held heray’s
g Rewrite: _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Explain: ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thursd _
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8 NEW sunglass’s
in store NOW
Rewrite: _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Explain: ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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USING THE APOSTROPHE ANS
W ER
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such errors below, and then rewriteEY
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Many people make errors when using the apostrophe, and it is particularly embarrassing when
these errors appear in print or business advertising. Examine
1
them, making the corrections. Then explain the corrections.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2
Your welcome
to taste our
You’re welcome to taste our cheeses.
Rewrite: _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4 m inu te’s
Back in 5 minutes
Rewrite: _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5 Farmers a
pp
sold herele’s
Farmers’ apples sold here
Rewrite: _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7 W om e n s ’ meetin
e on
held heray’s
g Women’s meeting held here on Thursdays
Rewrite: _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thursd _
8 NEW sunglass’s
in store NOW
New sunglasses in store now
Rewrite: _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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USING
COMMAS
For each of the following sentences, identify whether commas have been
used correctly or incorrectly and then explain your choice.
e.g. While she was reading the newspaper, Joe announced that he was leaving.
Correct
Identify:_____________________________________________
Here the comma is being used to separate
Explain:_____________________________________________________________________________________
an introductory element – in this case, a subordinate clause.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
1. However, I do think that you made many good points.
Identify:_____________________________________________
Explain:_____________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2. He held in his hand a round shiny antique, diamond ring.
Identify:_____________________________________________
Explain:_____________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3. I know that I will never be a good cook, I have no sense of taste.
Identify:_____________________________________________
Explain:_____________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4. “ I would never date you” , she cruelly stated without restraint.
Identify:_____________________________________________
Explain:_____________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5. The dress, which had never been worn was lying on the floor.
Identify:_____________________________________________
Explain:_____________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6. My uncle, who is my mother’s brother, is a mechanic.
Identify:_____________________________________________
Explain:_____________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7. My sister went to college four years ago and, she is about to graduate.
Identify:_____________________________________________
Explain:_____________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8. Bethany loves to read, write, and tell stories.
Identify:_____________________________________________
Explain:_____________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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USING
COMMAS W ER
For each of the following sentences, identify whether commas have been KE
used correctly or incorrectly and then explain your choice. Y
e.g. While she was reading the newspaper, Joe announced that he was leaving.
Correct
Identify:_____________________________________________
Here the comma is being used to separate
Explain:_____________________________________________________________________________________
an introductory element – in this case, a subordinate clause.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
1. However, I do think that you made many good points.
Correct
Identify:_____________________________________________
Here the comma is being used to separate
Explain:_____________________________________________________________________________________
an introductory element (‘however’).
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2. He held in his hand a round shiny antique, diamond ring.
Incorrect
Identify:_____________________________________________
Here there is a list of adjectives -
Explain:_____________________________________________________________________________________
commas should be used to separate the list (after the first two adjectives).
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3. I know that I will never be a good cook, I have no sense of taste.
Incorrect
Identify:_____________________________________________
This is an example of comma splice - the
Explain:_____________________________________________________________________________________
sentence requires a coordinating conjunction after the comma.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4. “ I would never date you” , she cruelly stated without restraint.
Incorrect
Identify:_____________________________________________
The comma should be placed inside of the
Explain:_____________________________________________________________________________________
quotation marks.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5. The dress, which had never been worn was lying on the floor.
Incorrect
Identify:_____________________________________________
There needs to be commas on either side
Explain:_____________________________________________________________________________________
of the parenthetical information (after ‘worn’).
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6. My uncle, who is my mother’s brother, is a mechanic.
Correct
Identify:_____________________________________________
The commas enclose a parenthetical
Explain:_____________________________________________________________________________________
element. In this case, additional information about who the speaker’s uncle is.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7. My sister went to college four years ago and, she is about to graduate.
Incorrect
Identify:_____________________________________________
This is a compound sentence, and so the
Explain:_____________________________________________________________________________________
comma should come after the first independent clause and before the ‘and’.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8. Bethany loves to read, write, and tell stories.
Correct
Identify:_____________________________________________
The commas here correctly separate a
Explain:_____________________________________________________________________________________
list of three items.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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:; USING COLONS & SEMICOLONS
1
Exercise One
For each of the following, fill in the missing colons or semicolons (choose the correct one):
1. One needs many things to be a good teacher_ an abundance of patience_ a passion for one’s subject_
lots of creativity_ and a loud voice.
2. He saw that he had two choices before him_ marry her or break up.
3. The school play was cancelled_ three of the actors had food poisoning.
4. My mother just kept repeating_ “Why don’t you ever listen to me?”
5. My hands stopped shaking_ the audience came into focus_ I felt relieved.
6. My uncle Gerald works late every night_ being the director of a large company is a demanding job.
10. The following items are required_ blankets, pillows, torches and candles.
2
Exercise Two
Identify the correct sentence in each of the following:
a) It was raining heavily: the game was
cancelled; I was devastated.
a) She heard her mother’s voice in her head;
b) It was raining heavily; the game was
“Always believe in yourself.”
cancelled; I was devastated.
b) She heard her mother’s voice in her head:
“always believe in yourself”. c) It was raining heavily; the game was
cancelled: I was devastated.
c) She heard her mother’s voice in her head:
“Always believe in yourself.”
a) The students experienced a feeling they had
never felt before: excitement.
a) Beth speaks French; Jim speaks English. b) The students experienced a feeling they had
never felt before; excitement.
b) Beth speaks French: Jim speaks English.
c) The students experienced: a feeling they
c) Beth speaks French; but Jim speaks English.
had never felt before; excitement.
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:; USING COLONS & SEMICOLONS
1
Exercise One
For each of the following, fill in the missing colons or semicolons (choose the correct one):
: , ,
1. One needs many things to be a good teacher_ an abundance of patience_ a passion for one’s subject_
,
lots of creativity_ and a loud voice.
:
2. He saw that he had two choices before him_ marry her or break up.
;
3. The school play was cancelled_ three of the actors had food poisoning.
:
4. My mother just kept repeating_ “Why don’t you ever listen to me?”
; ;
5. My hands stopped shaking_ the audience came into focus_ I felt relieved.
;
6. My uncle Gerald works late every night_ being the director of a large company is a demanding job.
;
7. My sister loves fruit_ my brother loves vegetables.
:
8. You need to remember_ if you think it, you can do it.
;
9. Contact me on Saturday_ I will give you an answer then.
:
10. The following items are required_ blankets, pillows, torches and candles.
2
Exercise Two
Identify the correct sentence in each of the following:
a) It was raining heavily: the game was
cancelled; I was devastated.
a) She heard her mother’s voice in her head;
b) It was raining heavily; the game was
“Always believe in yourself.”
cancelled; I was devastated.
b) She heard her mother’s voice in her head:
“always believe in yourself”. c) It was raining heavily; the game was
cancelled: I was devastated.
c) She heard her mother’s voice in her head:
“Always believe in yourself.”
a) The students experienced a feeling they had
never felt before: excitement.
a) Beth speaks French; Jim speaks English. b) The students experienced a feeling they had
never felt before; excitement.
b) Beth speaks French: Jim speaks English.
c) The students experienced: a feeling they had
c) Beth speaks French; but Jim speaks English.
never felt before; excitement.
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