Final 2nd Lesson Ovservation Assignment - Hickman
Final 2nd Lesson Ovservation Assignment - Hickman
Zachary Hickman
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Ellis Elementary 3rd Grade 4-digit Subtraction Mathematics Lesson Plan
Component 1: Learning Context
Teacher Candidate Name: Zachary Hickman Section Number: 204
Cooperating Teacher Name: Jennifer May
School: Ellis Elementary School Room: 23
Date: 11/16/21 Grade level: 3rd Time Needed: 30 Minutes
Mathematical Topic/ General Concept: Subtraction of four-digit by four-digit numbers
Teacher Candidate Role: Lesson Duration:
Students have some knowledge of subtracting with four-digit by four-digit numbers. Their lesson on this is complete, but there is not a
proficient understanding by all students.
Van DeWall (2019) lists some misconceptions that I encountered in our math textbook:
“When subtracting two multi-digit numbers, student always subtracts the smaller number (digit) from the larger number (digit)
rather than regrouping.” (p. 271)
“Student makes mistakes when regrouping across zeroes in a subtraction problem.” (p. 271)
Class Demographics:
During the lesson, there were not a lot of opportunities to add personal information. I did however add some conversation during our
drop in the bucket about sports jerseys when we were picking out numbers on the sheet that was on shirts. I did mention the picture of
turtles looking like local box turtles you might see around our home area. I also talked about the money section and how math relates to
money. How buying and saving money can be like adding and subtracting numbers when you are thinking about numbers. Lastly, we
used a problem about fractions, and we talked about a pizza being a “whole” and when you share it, that is a part. Pizza is a good way
to understand fractions because you want every piece to be equal so you can be fair.
Materials Needed for the Students Materials Needed for the Teacher
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Pencils Pencil
*The student I interviewed had interest assets in the following areas that are different from mine:
_X_interest in school __interest in lesson topic __interest in class colleagues _X_interest in teacher
*The student I interviewed had knowledge assets in the following areas that are different from mine:
_X_skills mastered _X_knowledge of lesson topic _X_interpersonal skills needed to learn with others X_ prior life experience
*The student I interviewed had cultural assets in the following areas that are different from mine:
_X_race _X_social class _X_gender __language _X_culture
*The student I interviewed had community assets in the following areas that are different from mine:
_X_school cultural diversity _X_student knowledge diversity _X_economic class of school neighborhood _X_teacher/administrator experience
Component 2: Learning Objective with Common Core State Standards for Mathematics Identified
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Fluently add and subtract within 1000 using strategies and algorithms based on place value, properties of operations, and/or the
relationship between addition and subtraction.
The student can successfully complete the Drop in the bucket worksheet for review and practice of prior concepts. The student will also
demonstrate proficiency with subtraction of four-digit by four-digit numbers.
What do we want students to learn when we teach and learn this lesson with them? How does your response to this question align with
the lesson standard and objective you gave me for this lesson?
Initial and Elaborated Response:
Me (ZH) – What do we want students to learn when we teach and learn this lesson with them?
Ms. May (M) – So, this lesson that you’re doing today is just a review of ten different types of skills that there are in 3 rd grade. So,
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just… we do these drops in the bucket to keep their skills honed. Then after you finish the drop in the bucket, you’re just going over
more subtraction because if we don’t keep the skills of subtraction across borrowing and just regular subtraction, they will lose it and
they will forget it, and then we will have to reteach the whole entire thing again right before the IAR test.
ZH: OK
M: So that’s why we keep on practicing these skills even though we are done with the subtraction unit. Then we keep on working on it
and going over more and more and making it harder and harder to challenge them.
ZH: OK, I think that you already answered the second portion of this with that question, but if you just want to kind of, re-elaborate
specifically on, how does the response to the first question that I asked to align with the lesson standard and the objective you gave me
of the drop in the bucket and 4-digit by 4-digit subtraction?
M: ok, in the third-grade curriculum we have to do subtraction and some of these skills so that they are with our standards, so that’s the
reason you are going over these skills and that we picked the drop in the bucket worksheets years ago. Because they are third-grade
standards.
ZH: So, we are meeting the standards across the board with the review, and they are secondarily we are going to go further into the
subtraction to bring them up to speed with where they should be for the end of the year standards?
M: Correct, Correct.
What do you want to learn from this math lesson? How do you want me to teach mathematics to you?
Me (ZH): So, we are going to do four by four subtraction today, What do you want to learn about in this lesson
Student (S): Umm, I don’t know?
ZH: ok, are you really good at this? Do you need some practice?
S: no, I need some practice because I don’t know what like, ten, umm, like, umm…. subtracting like what 21 is or something like that.
ZH: OK, so you don’t understand how to subtract larger numbers from smaller numbers, so you need to learn how to break
down and regroup the tens, or hundreds, or thousands? To carry over and borrow numbers?
S: Yes, because I only know the little numbers, like 2 times 4 or maybe ten if I had a paper.
ZH: Ok, so just for the subtraction portion, you are saying that you need more practice and to see more about how to borrow
and regroup numbers?
S: Yes, head-nod
ZH: How do you want me to teach it to you? What do you think is the easiest and best way to learn it?
S: Umm, I think that it would be with paper and umm with umm so like we would just use a paper. I mostly just do it with my hands
because my mom said that it might be a little bit easier with my hands.
ZH: Ok. So, you like to use… well we call using things to count with, manipulatives. Ok, so you like to use your fingers to help
you with subtraction.
S: Yes
ZH: Do you think it would help you if I had something else, like blocks or crayons for you to count with, other than your fingers?
S: I like using my fingers.
ZH: Because then you can use them anywhere and anytime?
S: Head nod
ZH: ok, is there anything else at all that you think that I could do to help you learn this easier, or do you think that just showing
examples and practicing with you is good?
S: Head nod, yes.
So initially, my first thought is that I felt like the focus from my CT was pretty much on getting the students to a point where they can
perform well on the IAR test at the end of the year. I didn’t get much from the idea that we are teaching or reviewing all of this for
individual needs or because it was something that they were not proficient at. In our textbook it says:
“Too often, testing and accountability drive the educational system so that the main message communicated to students is that they
should provide “the right answer.” Paul (1986) contends that the right answer should not be the end product of education, but rather that
an inquiring mind should show:
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A passionate drive for clarity, accuracy, and fair-mindedness, a fervor for getting to the bottom of things, to the deepest root issues, for
listening sympathetically to opposite points of view, a compelling drive to seek out evidence, and intense aversion to contradiction,
sloppy thinking, inconsistent application of standards, a devotion to truth as against self-interest – these are essential components of the
rational person. (p. 1)”
I understand that this is something that we need to be aware of, and conscious that is a part of the job, I think it should be less of a
focus when you are lesson planning. I think if we get to know our students, we can help make these plans based on individual needs and
to help build foundations for later learning, not just to meet testing standards. My student was not super talkative, but she was very
kind. She was a pretty good math student but was not challenged very much. I noticed this when we were speaking and thought that
this would give me the opportunity to focus on her during the lesson and keep an eye on her work to ensure that she was following along
and understanding everything that we discussed. She has the base idea of borrowing while subtracting but was not fully grasping that
she was carrying a group of ten over when she borrowed that. So, I emphasized that during my lesson. While researching different
pedagogies, I found an article by Wynne Harlen that said on page 11 “Learning science and mathematics through inquiry can serve the
personal interests of individual learners and be of benefit to society. For learners as individuals, it enables them to develop the
understanding, powers of reasoning and attitudes that help them to lead physically and emotionally healthy and rewarding lives.”
(2013). This is about inquiry-based pedagogy that is student-centered and helps excite the desire to learn in the students. After my pre-
interviews, I am excited about the lesson and moving forward. I do think that I could do a better job trying to pull information from
both parties in these interviews, and I will focus more time on that in the future. I think that sometimes it is difficult to pull info from
someone if they seem apprehensive about speaking, I will look into that part of the Simonds and Cooper chapter to see how I can
contribute to a more inviting type of conversation flow. On the opposite side, I think I will look into ways to strategically limit the
amount that the CT speaks because I felt dominated in that conversation. I needed to engage more, but when she spoke so much, it did
not leave much room to ask for elaboration or to paraphrase and ask for additional ideas or inputs.
General Academic Vocabulary That Could Be Used to Build Mathematics Vocabulary Specific to 4-digit by 4-digit
the Mathematics Concepts of 4-digit by 4-digit subtraction. subtraction that Could Be Used to Build the Mathematics
Concept of 4-digit by 4-digit subtraction.
Problem, equation, provide evidence, estimate, show, answer,
demonstrate, regroup, explain, digits, decompose, break apart, Estimation, Place value, ones, tens, hundreds, thousands, borrow,
carry, regroup, break apart
equation.
Addition, Subtraction
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General Academic Vocabulary That Was Used to Build the Mathematics Vocabulary Specific to the Concept of 4-digit by 4-
Mathematics Concept of 4-digit by 4-digit subtraction. digit subtraction. That Was Used
Demonstrate – used to ask students to show their work to the Equation – this is what we called the problem that we were solving
group or me. for
Regroup – used to show the kids how to “borrow” a ten and Demonstrate – used to ask students to show their work to the group
regroup it into ones with the current ones they have. or me.
Explain – asking them to elaborate on what they did or showed Regroup – used to show the kids how to “borrow” a ten and regroup
me. it into ones with the current ones they have.
Prove – when asking them to show me that what they said was Explain – asking them to elaborate on what they did or showed me.
the solution, was correct. Borrow – Taking a group of ten from the place forward of the
Equation – what we refer to when we are building out what the number you are subtracting and regrouping it to allow you to
word problem is asking for. subtract correctly.
Place Value – This is the part of the number when you break it down
into expanded form.
Students will be given a “Drop in the Bucket” worksheet when they come into class. This will be done as a group in front of the class.
It will gauge the depth of knowledge of each student by having it completed and correct. It will also help by showing us who is willing
to volunteer to come to the board for the different types of problems. This shows comfort or confidence in completing that type of
problem. Taking note of that will show me where I need to focus time and energy toward individuals. Some may need a pat on the
back, others may need my time and help to get up to speed. While others may just not be comfortable in front of the class for other
reasons, and that will allow me some time with them individually to understand that they may or may not need help with math, but with
confidence and comfort in the spotlight.
Results of this method of assessment: What general patterns of learning did you observe as you evaluated assessment products
with your cooperating teacher? What exceptional patterns of learning did you observe?
So, when we started this, I was a little worried that we may have problems getting students to volunteer and come up to the front of the
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class to participate. We did not! They all were very engaged and excited to show off their skills. About halfway through I was told that
normally Ms. May doesn’t let them come up to write the answers in, she just asks them to answer, and she writes it in. That was kind of
them, to be honest. I kept doing it my way because Ms. May didn’t seem to mind and the kids were engaged and behaving well.
Something that I noticed that was a general pattern was reminding the students to write down their work while they were engaged with
what was being done on the board, students willing to participate with a new teacher, and good attitudes toward learning. What I
noticed that I consider being exceptional, students volunteering without knowing how to do the problem, students supporting their peers
when they were at the board with no idea how to finish the equation, and all students willing to make attempts for the entire 30+ minute
lesson. There were two students who during this time raised their hand to work a problem, got up there, and did not know how to do it.
That took courage and I was more than happy to support and allow other students to help walk them through by asking thought-
provoking questions and allowing the volunteer to pick a “friend” to help them with the next step. This was great to show the class that
struggles and failing is no reason not to participate, in fact, it allows everyone to learn together. Simonds and Cooper make a list to help
you “React to student responses”. (p.113-114) They give an in-depth review of how this can take place and how you can “use a variety
of responses” (p.113-114) to keep the students engaged whether they are correct or incorrect. They even give details for apprehensive
students when they say, “I don’t know”. What I think helped me the most from this list, was the way that you can “Discourage the
students who monopolize the discussion.” (p.113-114) This is a way that you can lose some of the quiet or apprehensive students; when
they think that they won’t be included because that person is always the center of the class.
The second part of this lesson will be done as a large group and at their desks. Each student will have a piece of paper and write down
the equations that I give on the whiteboard. Then I will allow them time to work on the question and choose someone to come to the
front of the class and complete the problem as I label each step with academic and mathematical terminology, so we become more
familiar as a group. I will occasionally ask questions about why they did a step and ask them to label what they are doing and why
using the same types of language to encourage them to use it in conversation and to make that connection from me speaking it, to them
labeling their actions. While we are doing this, I will walk through the room observing and assisting the students at their desks ensuring
that we are covering all the bases for each student. This will ensure that I get 100% coverage, including the students that do not
volunteer to go in front of the class, or did not have the opportunity to do so.
Results of this method of assessment: What general patterns of learning did you observe as you evaluated assessment products
with your cooperating teacher? What exceptional patterns of learning did you observe?
Simonds and Cooper quote J.T. Dillon “Questioning is, perhaps, the single most influential teaching practice because teacher questions
promote student involvement and are central to the analysis and synthesis of ideas” (p. 107). This is what I centered my idea of this
assessment around. When you are questioning you not only can see what the individual student is thinking but you can gauge what the
students know, then choose further questions to push their learning individually. This idea also comes from the same area in our
textbook, “We need them (lower-level questions) to help guide students’ thinking patterns and to help eliminate comprehension
problems.” (p. 109). It also says, “If one of our goals as teachers is to help students develop their cognitive abilities, we need to ask
them questions that require higher-level cognitive processes than mere recall.” (p. 109). With this in mind, I just looked over the tables
that followed and that preceded these quotes to keep in mind how to guide those that are very familiar with this lesson and to help guide
those that are still learning the intricacies of it. What I saw that was normal are things like, redirecting the students as we got more
repetitive, reminding them to keep writing down and working each problem on their own, and reminding them of classroom etiquette.
What I saw that was exceptional to me, the student that I interviewed turned that corner and made the connection with borrowing and
regrouping. I gave her the problem that was the most difficult and she did it without any assistance or questions. When she was
complete, I just asked her to explain what she did, and she walked me through each step, and I only had to correct her when she was
speaking about regrouping. She didn’t use that term, but by the end of her explanation, she was using it herself. I started by asking
lower-level questions about basic comprehension, then ended by asking higher-order questions and allowing her to elaborate on not just
the math, but the steps of the standard algorithm of subtraction and a deeper understanding of why the algorithm applies and works.
What different ways did you see your students demonstrate their learning of your objective today? How do you get to value these
different ways of learning through the grades your school asks you to assign to each student? To what extent do you think your students
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agree with the way your school values learning differences through its grading system? Why?
ZH: What different ways did you see your students demonstrate their learning of your objective today? So, the objective that we
originally came up with?
M: So, they were able to go up to the board and do hands-on writing the answers down, as well as doing it by themselves writing on
their paper.
ZH: How do you get to value these different ways of learning through the grades your school asks you to assign to each student?
M: So, the activity that you did today was non-graded, because it was during math power hour. We were told that anything that’s done
during math power hour we could not grade because we lose kids who get extra help. So, this is a reinforcement so that when they see
these concepts, like the fractions and the times, it's gonna help them. So, we pre-teach some of these things, so that when we get to
these lessons, actually, in our workbook, it’s a lot faster and easier to do.
ZH: So, it helps keep the grades…
M: It helps keep the grades accurate because then they have had more experience with it. It’s not just a “one time on a workbook page”
and that’s it. Now, yes, we did have some kids out of the room because of, umm IEP’s. But when we get to that part, like the fractions
and the times, they will have done something right beforehand, like the week beforehand during math power hour. Because some of
them have short-term memory skills, or long-term memory as well, and they can’t remember what we do three weeks ahead of time
versus 30 minutes ahead for some of them. So, this, kind of just helps them because the first time they see it, some of them have no
clue. This gives them repetition, repetition, repetition, to get them ready for our one page on fractions, or our two pages on fractions.
ZH: Ok. The last question that I have is, to what extent do you think your students agree with the way your school values learning
differences through its grading system and why?
M: At this age, I don’t think that they understand the grades because they are used to O,S, and U’s, and just because of the grading
system last year, so many of them were not here at school, they were at home learning. The grading system to them, they never saw
grades on a paper. They had parents who did the work for them. Some of them are shocked this year because of the low grades and
they started having outbursts, like you see, because “I can’t do this, I need to be perfect.” Well, because, last year they were perfect at
home because they were working one on one with an adult and now, they have to do it themselves. So, grades to these groups are not a
factor because they don’t get it. Parents have a meltdown when they see the grades. We have one student making D’s and Fs on
spelling tests and they think “That’s fine”. They have no concept of what a “D” and an “F” are even though, explaining that, this is a
failing grade. They don’t understand what failing is, because for the last year and a half these kiddos have never failed papers or
subjects because they have been pushed off.
Both- ...
M: Does that make sense?
ZH: It does I’m just trying to think…. Umm, I guess the students' lack of understanding about it is just kind of an inability to
agree or disagree, so…
M: Right, but I mean this is, this is, third grade is hard because this is the first year that they are doing grades and some of these kids
were not here in 2nd grade and neither in 1st grade, they left early. So, they have no concept of what a grade is and that’s the reason on a
lot of things we don’t put a letter grade because that letter grade goes right over their head. Minus 4 or 4 out of 12 they get right. So,
we do it both ways, for some kids, we will have to do 10 out of 13, and for some kids, we have to do a -3. 10 out of 13, that looks like a
good grade for them, if I put -3 or -10 on them, they have a meltdown, but if I put +3, these kids don’t have a concept of how many
points were on the page. Because otherwise, if I did -10, -5, -whatever for (student name), do you want to hear a screaming meltdown?
It’s the same thing with (student name), it’s like “What do you mean I missed 2?”. So, +12 sometimes.
ZH: ok
M: So, then he doesn’t have as big of a meltdown because he sees how many he got right, as opposed to how many he got wrong
because he looks at the negative part.
ZH: Hmm, ok.
M: I mean, sometimes you know, it means the same thing, but you just have to twist it with these kids for them not to understand what
is really going on sometimes.
What did I say or do during the lesson that made the most sense to you? Why?
ZH: What did I say or do during the lesson that made sense to you?
S: about the multiplication and stuff, to multiply.
ZH: Oh, I’m sorry. I wasn’t talking about the other homework that I helped you with. I am asking you about the lesson that I taught to
the class, the drop in the bucket, and the 4-digit by 4-digit subtraction.
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S: It was really easy, and it made sense.
ZH: Before, you told me that the big numbers were what you needed help with, did the lesson help fix that for you, because you
just said that not it was easy and made sense. Did it help make it more clear when I was talking about the borrowing numbers
from one spot and then regrouping them as groups often? So, that way you had big enough numbers to subtract from the next
column?
S: Yeah, Ms. May taught us that, and I knew that for a while, but it was getting a little bit hard.
ZH: Yeah? You said it was getting hard when I made the terms “regrouping” more clear and explained that we were moving
groups often from one place value to the next to make it easier to understand and help you clear up what did not make sense to
you?
S: Yes.
ZH: Great, thank you for all of your help.
Is there anything that I could have done better or differently that would have helped you learn better? What do you think is the best way
to learn math and become more skilled? You said that you liked to use your fingers as manipulatives, after my lesson, is that still what
you prefer?
ZH: Is that anything that I could have done better or differently that would have helped you learn better?
S: maybe, but for now this was good, and it made it easy.
ZH: Now you think that the subtraction is really easy?
S: Yes
ZH: Ok, do you think that the best way to learn math and become better at it, is to do it more, like do it a lot? Like, do the
problems over and over in different ways so that you can keep learning, or do you think that the best way for you is to have
someone help you and show you want you are doing wrong or right?
S: The student nodded that she thinks that both are effective ways for her to learn.
ZH: In our last conversation, I explained manipulatives when you talked about how you learned and remembered how to do
subtraction without any help, do you still think that your fingers are the easiest way for you to learn and do subtraction? Is that
still what your go-to helper is?
S: Yes.
After speaking to Ms. May and hearing her adamant response about group work, and knowing the focus of it in this class, I went to the
textbook again. I looked at the section on collaborative learning and the teacher roles for that. Simonds and Cooper (2011) quote
Bruffee (1997) “The basic idea of collaborative learning is that we gain certain kinds of knowledge best through a process of
communication with our peers.” (p. 130). I took time and read that part a few times and applied that theory to my learning, and it
resonated with me. It was one of those ideas that kind of made me think, “How did I now understand that before?” I think, had I known
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that before this class maybe I would have pushed a little more or questioned a little more, or played devil’s advocate a little more when I
was doing projects in high school. I was not an active student in high school, I was more of a class clown. With my student interview
question, again it just made me feel like I had made a difference in her comfort with this type of math. It was the end of the day, and
most students are rushing to get out of class, and she was very happy to just sit with me and talk about the lesson. She all smiled. She
didn’t have much to elaborate with, being that she is only a third-grade student, but I think that she was happy with her progress. I was
very happy with her progress and mine as well. I felt that I met the goals I was working towards for this lesson. Moving forward, I
think that I will continue to focus on speaking clearly and using academic language, but I will look into ways to diversify how I do that.
More time spent reviewing the material and looking into possible questions, along with time and experience should help me feel like I
am being more complete in my instruction and assessments.
References: Chapters and page numbers in course texts are needed for this field assignment. APA format required.
A., V. de W. J., Karp, K. S., Bay-Williams, J. M., Wray, J. A., & Brown, E. T. (2019). Chapter 12. In elementary and middle school
mathematics: Teaching developmentally (pp. 273–298). essay, Pearson.
HARLEN, W. (2013). Inquiry-based learning in science and mathematics. Review of Science, Mathematics and ICT Education, 7(2), 9-
33. doi:[Link]
Simonds, C., & Cooper, P. J. (2011). Communication for the classroom teacher. Allyn & Bacon.
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Lesson Participation and Observation Self Evaluation
Assignment meets preconditional writing convention requirements (10 points) * 10 8 6 4 2
The assignment is formatted as a complete American Psychological Association (APA) document [see APA format at Purdue X
OWL website] with a title page, electronic templates provided by CIED 312 instructors, a reference section, and an appendix
(as needed) that includes: 1) required demographic information, including four types of student learning assets, specified by
templates; 2) required content specified by templates; 3) meaningful font and spacing; 4) meaningful references and appendices;
5) concise and precise writing with complex sentences. AND... Two patterns of convention errors or less.
Templated Academic Vocabulary Chart and Lesson Plan includes the following elements: 1) academic 10 8 6 4 2 0
vocabulary; 2) cooperating teacher lesson objective and observations (written in bold print) of candidate
instruction; 3) teaching learning sequence description with contextual observations; 4) assessment product
descriptions with reflections on student work and appended artifacts. (30 points)
Academic vocabulary defines the lesson’s conceptual content: 1) CCSS and/or other content area standards that generated the X
academic vocabulary for the lesson are copied in a meaningful way; 2) a comprehensive list of general academic vocabulary
that could be used in the lesson is aligned with CCSS and/or other content area standards; 3) a comprehensive list of subject
specific vocabulary that could be used in the lesson is aligned with CCSS and/or other content area standards; 4) general
academic vocabulary that was actually used in the lesson is listed and defined, including one example of how this vocabulary
helped students learn the lesson objective; 5) subject specific vocabulary that was actually used in the lesson is listed and
defined, including one example of how this vocabulary helped students learn the lesson objective.
Teaching and learning sequence: 1) orders events according to assignment template; 2) includes verbatim reporting of key X
teacher statements during the lesson that are valued by the Simonds and Cooper (2011, p. 137, Table 7.1) CIED 312 textbook;
3) includes verbatim reporting of key student responses during the lesson valued by the Simonds and Cooper (2011, pp. 80-157)
textbook; 4) includes other mathematics lesson components described by the Van de Walle, Karp, & Bay-Williams (2010, pp.
142-581) CIED 441 textbook; 5) includes lists of materials used by teachers and students.
Description of assessment products used by the cooperating teacher and reflections on student work: 1) are accurate and aligned X
with the lesson objective; 2) reveal patterns of learning behavior; 3) reveal exceptions to patterns of learning behavior; 4)
describe student work that is acceptable; 5) describe student work that is unacceptable.
Post-lesson interview question responses and commentaries include teacher, student, and participant 10 8 6 4 2 0
observer reflections (50 points)
Each of three interviewer written reflective commentaries about lesson events and interviewee responses is at least 200 words X
and includes all required criteria: 1) one relevant concept from a CIED 312 text that is explained, related to the interview, and
cited in APA format; 2) one relevant concept from another text that is explained, related to the interview, and cited in APA
format; 3) other observations of instruction that are explained and related to the interview; 4) vivid, precise sentences; 5) a main
idea, or claim, that synthesizes points of view presented.
Each of three interviewer written reflective commentaries make claims about instructional improvement that are backed by one X
additional piece of evidence from experience or textbooks for a total of at least two pieces of textbook evidence, and no more
than two pieces of evidence from experience, per commentary.
Interviewer written reflective commentaries describe thoughtful, actionable ways to improve instruction. X
Teacher interview documentation is complete: 1) demonstrates that a conversation about the lesson, rather than a simple X
accounting, has occurred; 2) demonstrates that the interviewer has actively listened to the interviewee; 3) includes follow-up
questions appropriate to the interviewee; 4) engages a reader of the interview transcript to feel emotions, see pictures, hear
voices and/or experience other sensations that were part of the interview; 5) communicates the interviewee’s initial and
elaborated response to each question in ways that are accurate, distinct, and comprehensible in at least 150 words.
Student interview documentation is complete: 1) demonstrates that a conversation about the lesson, rather than a simple X
accounting, has occurred; 2) demonstrates that the interviewer has actively listened to a student interviewee with different
learning assets; 3) includes follow-up questions appropriate to the developmental abilities of the student interviewee; 4) engages
the reader of the interview transcript to feel emotions, see pictures, hear voices and/or experience other sensations that were part
of the interview; 5) communicates the interviewee’s initial and elaborated response to each question in ways that are accurate,
distinct, and comprehensible in at least 150 words
Matrix assignment includes a self and peer evaluation that uses this rubric (10 points) 10 8 6 4 2 0
Attached self-evaluation is completed with ratings on the same form by teacher candidate and a peer evaluator OR candidate X
and peer evaluator fill out form together at a supervised class session. A self-evaluation must be electronically attached.
*Drafts that do not meet these preconditions at an average acceptable score of “3” are returned ungraded and marked late. Late drafts are reduced by 20% of total
points for each missed submission opportunity. A zero grade will be assigned at the third missed opportunity.
Rubric Points Possible: 100 Comments
Rubric Points Received: __98___
Rubric Points Reduced: __ 2___
Rubric Points Earned: ___98__
Assignment is formatted as a complete American Psychological Association (APA) document [see APA format at Purdue x
OWL website] with a title page, electronic templates provided by CIED 312 instructors, a reference section, and an
appendix (as needed) that includes: 1) required demographic information, including four types of student learning assets,
specified by templates; 2) required content specified by templates; 3) meaningful font and spacing; 4) meaningful references
and appendices; 5) concise and precise writing with complex sentences. AND...Two patterns of convention errors or less.
Templated Academic Vocabulary Chart and Lesson Plan includes the following elements: 1) academic 10 8 6 4 2 0
vocabulary; 2) cooperating teacher lesson objective and observations (written in bold print) of candidate
instruction; 3) teaching learning sequence description with contextual observations; 4) assessment
product descriptions with reflections on student work and appended artifacts. (30 points)
Academic vocabulary defines the lesson’s conceptual content: 1) CCSS and/or other content area standards that generated x
the academic vocabulary for the lesson are copied in a meaningful way; 2) a comprehensive list of general academic
vocabulary that could be used in the lesson is aligned with CCSS and/or other content area standards; 3) a comprehensive
list of subject specific vocabulary that could be used in the lesson is aligned with CCSS and/or other content area standards;
4) general academic vocabulary that was actually used in the lesson is listed and defined, including one example of how this
vocabulary helped students learn the lesson objective; 5) subject specific vocabulary that was actually used in the lesson is
listed and defined, including one example of how this vocabulary helped students learn the lesson objective.
Teaching and learning sequence: 1) orders events according to assignment template; 2) includes verbatim reporting of key x
teacher statements during the lesson that are valued by the Simonds and Cooper (2011, p. 137, Table 7.1) CIED 312
textbook; 3) includes verbatim reporting of key student responses during the lesson valued by the Simonds and Cooper
(2011, pp. 80-157) textbook; 4) includes other mathematics lesson components described by the Van de Walle, Karp, &
Bay-Williams (2010, pp. 142-581) CIED 441 textbook; 5) includes list sof materials used by teachers and students.
Description of assessment products used by the cooperating teacher and reflections on student work: 1) are accurate and x
aligned with the lesson objective; 2) reveal patterns of learning behavior; 3) reveal exceptions to patterns of learning
behavior; 4) describe student work that is acceptable; 5) describe student work that is unacceptable.
Post-lesson interview question responses and commentaries include teacher, student, and participant 10 8 6 4 2 0
observer reflections (50 points)
Each of three interviewer written reflective commentaries about lesson events and interviewee responses is at least 200 x
words and includes all required criteria: 1) one relevant concept from a CIED 312 text that is explained, related to the
interview, and cited in APA format; 2) one relevant concept from another text that is explained, related to the interview, and
cited in APA format; 3) other observations of instruction that are explained and related to the interview; 4) vivid, precise
sentences; 5) a main idea, or claim, that synthesizes points of view presented.
Each of three interviewer written reflective commentaries make claims about instructional improvement that are backed by x
one additional piece of evidence from experience or textbooks for a total of at least two pieces of textbook evidence, and no
more than two pieces of evidence from experience, per commentary.
Interviewer written reflective commentaries describe thoughtful, actionable ways to improve instruction. x
Teacher interview documentation is complete: 1) demonstrates that a conversation about the lesson, rather than a simple x
accounting, has occurred; 2) demonstrates that the interviewer has actively listened to the interviewee; 3) includes follow-up
questions appropriate to the interviewee; 4) engages a reader of the interview transcript to feel emotions, see pictures, hear
voices and/or experience other sensations that were part of the interview; 5) communicates the interviewee’s initial and
elaborated response to each question in ways that are accurate, distinct, and comprehensible in at least 150 words.
Student interview documentation is complete: 1) demonstrates that a conversation about the lesson, rather than a simple x
accounting, has occurred; 2) demonstrates that the interviewer has actively listened to a student interviewee with different
learning assets; 3) includes follow-up questions appropriate to the developmental abilities of the student interviewee; 4)
engages the reader of the interview transcript to feel emotions, see pictures, hear voices and/or experience other sensations
that were part of the interview; 5) communicates the interviewee’s initial and elaborated response to each question in ways
that are accurate, distinct, and comprehensible in at least 150 words
Matrix assignment includes a self and peer evaluation that uses this rubric (10 points) 10 8 6 4 2 0
Attached self-evaluation is completed with ratings on the same form by teacher candidate and a peer evaluator OR candidate x
and peer evaluator fill out form together at a supervised class session. A self-evaluation must be electronically attached.
*Drafts that do not meet these preconditions at an average acceptable score of “3” are returned ungraded and marked late. Late drafts are reduced by 20% of total
points for each missed submission opportunity. A zero grade will be assigned at the third missed opportunity.
Rubric Points Possible: 100 Comments
Rubric Points Received: _____
Rubric Points Reduced: _____ My only comments would be that I believe the professor is looking for more information in
Rubric Points Earned: 100_____ the lesson plan part of component #5. You might go back and add more information.
Otherwise this plan looks great! Nice work Zack.
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