Mixed Metaphor Notes
Grades 11
What is a Mixed Metaphor?
A mixed or misused metaphor is a metaphor that combines different
images or ideas in a way that is foolish or illogical.
Example
At first, she was a weighted barge, then a sunflower tracking the light.
The metaphor starts out on water with a boat and ends up on land with
a flower, leaving the reader with a confused and scattered image. This
could be revised to unify the imagery and create an extended
metaphor:
Mixed Metaphors
Mixed metaphors are often the result of inappropriate merging of two
common metaphors.
Examples of misused or mixed metaphor includes:
• Milking the temporary workers for all they were worth, the manager
barked orders at them. (In this, the first image suggests cows and
the second image is associated with dogs).
• Unless we tighten our belts, we'll sink like a stone. (Unrelated
comparison of belts and stone).
• The fullback was a bulldozer, running up and down the field like an
angel. (Unrelated comparison of bulldozer and angel).
• We were swamped with a shocking barrage of work, and the extra
burden had a clear impact on our workflow. (Combining many
different images such as electrocution (shocking), a military attack
(barrage), weight (burden), water (flow) and so on.)
• The subject of global warming seems clouded in a sea of research.
(Here, there are the conflicting images of cloud and sea).
• The test is easy; it’s not rocket surgery. (Here, two clichés are mixed
viz. ‘rocket science’ and ‘brain surgery’).
• Barking out signals, the Los Angeles Spirit quarterback took the
ball and flew down the field. (“Barking” refers to dogs, but “flew”
suggests birds.)
• He clawed his way out of the traffic jam on Vine Street by slithering
around cars, buses, and trucks. (“Clawed” might suggest a bear,
but “slithering” refers to snakes.)
• Riverfest is the venerable elephant of river festivals, a decades-old,
ever present tortoise on the banks of the Ohio River. (“Elephant”
and “tortoise” are completely different animals.)