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Advanced English Writing Course Overview

Here are some key points about the writing task: - The task is asking you to write an essay comparing home ownership rates and the rental market in two countries. - In your essay, you should include an introduction stating the topic and main points you will cover. - The body paragraphs should have one paragraph comparing home ownership rates in the two countries, including relevant statistics, reasons for differences, etc. - The other body paragraph should compare the rental market in the two countries, again with statistics and explanations. - Your conclusion should briefly summarize the main differences found between the home ownership and rental situations in the two countries. - Your writing should be well organized with clear transitions between paragraphs. Statistics and examples

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Advanced English Writing Course Overview

Here are some key points about the writing task: - The task is asking you to write an essay comparing home ownership rates and the rental market in two countries. - In your essay, you should include an introduction stating the topic and main points you will cover. - The body paragraphs should have one paragraph comparing home ownership rates in the two countries, including relevant statistics, reasons for differences, etc. - The other body paragraph should compare the rental market in the two countries, again with statistics and explanations. - Your conclusion should briefly summarize the main differences found between the home ownership and rental situations in the two countries. - Your writing should be well organized with clear transitions between paragraphs. Statistics and examples

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ADVANCED

ENGLISH
WRITING – WEEK 1
ABOUT ME

 Nguyen Phuong Ha
▪ Mobile phone: 0986504480
▪ Email: [Link].1401@[Link]
COURSE OVERVIEW

 Name of the course: Advanced English


 Materials: Mindset for IELTS Level 2
 Course schedule:
 Session 1: Reading
 Session 2: Writing
 Session 3: Listening
 Session 4: Speaking
COURSE OVERVIEW
 Assessment:
 Participation: full attendance + 0.5 point for the mid-term test
 Mid-term test: 4 skills x 25% = 100% equal to 40% of your total score
 Speaking: Week 3 – week 9
 Listening,Writing, Reading: 2 tests (week 4 – week 7)

 Course policy
 You cannot be absent for more than 30% of the whole course
 No late than 15’
 No homework = No attendance check
 Your progressive score must be higher than 4 in order to be qualified for the final test
OVERVIEW OF THE WRITING TEST

 The Writing test takes 60 minutes. There are two tasks to complete.
 Task 1: at least 150 words in about 20 minutes
 test takers are asked to describe some information (graph/ table/ chart/ diagram) and to present a
summary of this information in their own words.
 Task 2: at least 250 words in about 40 minutes. Task 2 contributes twice as much as
Task 1 to the Writing score.
 test takers are required to write an essay in response to a point of view, argument or problem

 Responses must be written on the Writing Answer Sheet. Responses to both tasks
must be written in an academic style.
HOW THE TASK IS MARKED

 An examiner reads your answer and gives it points, from 1 to 9, for each of the
following features:
 • task achievement (How well did you answer the question?)
 • coherence and cohesion (How clearly do ideas relate to each other?)
 • lexical resource (Have you used accurate words and a wide range of vocabulary? Have you
spelled it correctly?)
 • grammatical range and accuracy (Have you used a wide range of verb forms and sentence
structures? Are they correct?)
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Horizontal axis
vertical axis
bar

bar chart key


title

segment

pie chart
row

table column
1. The world's most expensive cities
2. The cost per square metre in US dollars
3. Cities
4. The cost per square metre in each city
5. shortest -Monaco; tallest -New York/ Singapore
6. Monaco, Hong Kong and London very similar; New York and Singapore significantly more
expensive
7. Home ownership in some European countries
8. Percentage of people owning their own homes
9. Some European countries
10. Romania has the largest percentage of home owners and Switzerland the smallest.
11. Most of the countries have similar figures, except for Romania.
12. Romania has a much higher percentage of homeowners than the other countries.
13. Average house size in selected countries
14. Different countries
15. Australia/ Hong Kong
16. Australia/ USA
17. Average size of houses in selected
European countries
18. Two: country/ size
19. Denmark
20. Italy
21. France/Germany
The pie chart provides
information about the
average house size in
selected countries and
the table in selected
European countries
the USA
(correct) selected

most houses in
Europe are
much smaller than in Hong Kong
the selected non-
European countries

Opinion included
Increase Decrease
Climb Decline
Go up Go down
Rocket Plummet
Soar Plunge
Surge Drop
shoot up reduce
peak collapse
Tumble
Diminish
Sink
dip
Increase Decrease
Climb Decline
Go up Go down
Rocket Plummet
Soar Plunge
Drop

rocket, soar

plummet, plunge
rose
remains/ has remained/ remained
has decreased

are going to go up
have rocketed
The number of female students has increased in the last few years.

The number of female students has sharply increased in the last


few years.
There is an increase in the number of female students in the last few
years.
There is a sharp increase in the number of female students in the last
few years.
dramatic slight steady
substantial modest stable
significant unchanged
significant I substantial/ dramatic
steady

slight/modest

unchanged I stable
C
A
B
moderately gradually sharply
Dramatically slowly rapidly
substantially consistently
significantly I considerably/ substantially/
dramatically

slightlyI moderately

gradually I steadily/ slowly/ consistently

sharply I quickly/ rapidly


B Dubai
went up plummeted dramatically

C Hong Kong remained


peak
rise
A London increased steadily
decreased substantially
went up
Some structures that help you score higher
1. Whereas/ While X verb, Y verb (at the same time).
While the figure for factories in Japan went up dramatically to 120,000 in 2010, the quantity in Korea
plummeted to 12,000 at the same time.

2. Clause, followed by + Noun Phrase


There was a dramatic growth in the number of factories in Japan to 120.000 in 2010, followed by a sharp
decrease to 1,000 in 2015.

3. Clause, prior to/before Verb-ing


The number of factories in Japan experienced an increase to 120,000 in 2010, before hitting a free fall to
1,000 in 2015.

4. Clause, after Verb – ing


The figure for factories in Japan hit a free fall to 1,000 in 2o15, after undergoing an increase to 120,000 in
2010.

5. In comparison to/with X, which verb, Y verb.


In comparison with the number of factories in Japan, which witnessed a dramatic increase to 120,000 in
2010, the quantity in Korea plummeted to 12,000 at this time.

6. X verb, Verb-ing, (which verb).


The quantity of factories in Japan went through a period of dramatic increase to 120,000 in 2010, exceeding
ORGANIZATION
Introduction
Home owners (overview
and details)
Renter market (overview
and details)
conclusion
SAMPLE ANSWER

Introduction

Home owners
(overview and details)

Renter market
(overview and details)

conclusion
WRITING PRACTICE

Look at this Writing task, then answer the


questions below.

Common questions

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Understanding verb forms is crucial in enhancing both lexical resource and grammatical accuracy, key criteria in writing tasks. A grasp of various verb tenses and forms enables a writer to express time and aspect correctly, facilitating a more nuanced and accurate portrayal of events. For example, using present perfect tense to describe ongoing situations or past perfect for sequential past actions enhances clarity and reduces ambiguity. The correct application of verb forms helps in expanding vocabulary usage, as verbs often have synonymous expressions that vary in nuance and style, such as 'increase', 'ascend', 'skyrocket'. These variations allow for richer expression while maintaining grammatical integrity, which is critical for high scores in both lexical and grammatical criteria .

Participation plays a pivotal role in the final scoring system of the Advanced English course by directly influencing the mid-term test score through a 0.5 point contribution. This incentivizes full attendance and active engagement, as missing more than 30% of the course can jeopardize the student's eligibility for the final test. By integrating attendance and engagement into the assessment criterion, the course encourages consistent involvement, which is essential for language acquisition and skill reinforcement. This evaluative approach likely enhances classroom dynamics, fosters a commitment to learning, and maintains a steady pace of progression in skill development .

The Advanced English course is designed to ensure cumulative language proficiency through its comprehensive structure incorporating multiple language skills—reading, writing, listening, and speaking—in distinct sessions. Each skill is assessed separately but contributes interdependently towards overall language mastery. The course schedule from week to week, focusing on skill development sessions, ensures balanced attention. Regular assessments and progressive scoring criteria compel active participation and continuous improvement. Moreover, the course policy stipulates minimal absenteeism, fostering regular practice which is critical for language retention and proficiency. This integrated approach ensures students build competency incrementally across various dimensions of English language use .

To achieve a high score in coherence and cohesion on the Writing Test, students should adopt several strategic approaches. Firstly, organizing their writing using clear paragraphing with an introduction, body, and conclusion helps structure arguments logically. Employing connective words such as 'however,' 'furthermore,' and 'therefore' aids in the seamless transition between ideas. In Task 1, summarizing information from visuals like graphs or tables requires linking similar data points and ensuring descriptions flow logically from one point to the next. For Task 2, understanding and addressing all parts of the essay prompt while following an organized plan enables clarity throughout. These strategies ensure that ideas relate well to one another, a critical factor for higher scores in this criterion .

The assessment structure of the Advanced English course incorporates comprehensive evaluation methods by allocating specific weightage to multiple skills through a blended assessment approach. Participation, accounting for full attendance, provides an initial boost to the mid-term score. The mid-term test, covering all four English skills (reading, writing, listening, and speaking), contributes to 40% of the total score, ensuring that no single skill disproportionately affects the final mark. Tests are conducted in designated weeks, with speaking evaluations occurring between week 3 and week 9, and other skills assessed between weeks 4 and week 7. Such distribution ensures consistent engagement and monitoring across the course duration, culminating in a requirement that students maintain a progressive score above 4 to qualify for the final test, thereby balancing ongoing evaluation with end-term performance .

Course policies stipulating that students cannot be absent for more than 30% and must complete homework to have their attendance checked likely foster disciplined learning habits and ensure consistent engagement with course material. These policies underline accountability, compelling students to stay current with lessons, which is crucial for cumulative learning, especially in language acquisition. Consistent attendance and homework completion enhance the retention and application of knowledge, ensuring steady progress. Such structured policies may boost motivation and reduce dropout rates, translating to improved overall learning outcomes .

Task 1 and Task 2 of the Writing Test differ primarily in content, word requirements, and their contribution to the overall score. Task 1 requires candidates to describe and summarize information from a graph, table, chart, or diagram in at least 150 words, focusing on key features and trends. This should be completed in about 20 minutes. Task 2, more substantive, involves writing an essay in response to a point of view, argument, or problem, requiring a minimum of 250 words over approximately 40 minutes. It contributes twice as much to the Writing score as Task 1. Both tasks demand an academic writing style but emphasize different skills: descriptive analysis in Task 1 and argumentation or evaluation in Task 2 .

The grading criteria for the Writing test ensure a comprehensive evaluation by covering multiple facets of writing ability: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, lexical resource, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task achievement assesses how well candidates respond to the prompt, ensuring that answers are relevant and adequately addressed. Coherence and cohesion evaluate the organization and logical flow of ideas, critical for clear communication. Lexical resource examines the appropriateness and variety of vocabulary used, while grammatical range and accuracy consider the diversity and correctness of sentence structures. This multifaceted approach captures both content and form, providing a balanced assessment of writing proficiency .

Familiarity with the test format significantly impacts performance in the Writing Test of the Advanced English course. Knowing the structure of both tasks enables time management and strategic planning, essential for completing the tasks within the constrained 60-minute timeframe. Familiarity allows students to focus on content generation and quality rather than procedural uncertainties. Understanding assessment criteria such as task achievement, coherence, cohesion, lexical resources, and grammatical accuracy guides students in tailoring responses to meet examiners' expectations. Practicing with past tests and adhering to stipulated academic styles enhances efficiency and confidence, leading to better constructed and high-scoring submissions .

The use of diverse sentence structures contributes to a higher score in the grammatical range and accuracy criterion by showcasing the writer's ability to manipulate the syntax for various rhetorical effects. Employing a mix of simple, compound, complex, and compound-complex sentences allows for nuance and flexibility in expression, essential for sophisticated writing. This diversity demonstrates proficiency in sentence variation and structuring, which enhances readability and engagement. Accurate use of these structures attests to the writer's competence in the syntactic conventions of English, directly impacting the grammatical accuracy and contributing to overall writing quality .

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