LE G7 English Q1 Wk6-7
LE G7 English Q1 Wk6-7
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Activating Prior DO: Let the learners do the DO: Make the students do the
Knowledge activity. activity:
1. Distribute sample poems with
Match column A with column B.
deliberate coherence and
cohesion issues (e.g., jumbled
Column A
stanzas, missing linking
1. Collections of poems by
words).
2. Provide sticky notes for various authors, often centered
students to write suggestions around a specific theme.
on how to improve coherence 2. Periodicals that publish poetry,
and cohesion. fiction, and essays.
3. Students work in pairs or 3. Websites and digital journals
small groups to annotate the
poems with their suggestions. that publish poetry.
4. Groups present their revised 4. Books published by poets
poems, explaining their themselves, often using self-
changes. publishing services.
5. Competitions where poets
Sample Poems with Deliberate submit their work for a
Issues chance to win prizes and
Poem 1: "The Lonely Night" publication.
Stanza 1:
The stars whisper secrets. Column B
The moon's glow soft. A. Online Platforms
Shadows dance on the ground, B. Literary Magazines
the night sings a lullaby. C. Poetry Contests
D. Self-published Books
Stanza 2: E. Anthologies
Whispers of dreams float.
Answers:
The world asleep, serene.
1. E
Soft breeze carries memories.
2. B
Tomorrow waits.
3. A
4. D
Stanza 3:
5. C
The dark sky sparkles.
The night blanket quiet.
Silence reigns supreme,
until dawn breaks.
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Identified Issues:
Stanza 2:
Petals on the wind.
Nature wakes from slumber.
Rain nourishes the earth,
colorful blooms everywhere.
Stanza 3:
Morning dew sparkles.
The garden breathes life.
New beginnings unfold,
as spring takes hold.
Identified Issues:
• Lack of cohesive devices
linking ideas.
• Abrupt transitions between
images.
• Repetitive descriptors
without clear
progression.
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Lesson SAY: For today, we will revise SAY: For today, we will find
Purpose/Intention our work from the previous out how we can publish your
week. I know that you are all original poems. Before that, let
excited to improve your original us have a checklist of the
poems, so let us have a objectives that we will
checklist of the objectives that accomplish today.
we will accomplish today for
you to produce a revised SHOW: Present the learning
original poem. objectives of the day.
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3. Which linking word best
completes the line?
The leaves fell from the
trees, _______ the ground
was covered in a golden
blanket.
A) although
B) because
C) so
D) while
Answers:
1. C
2. B
3. C
4. D
During/Lesson Proper
Reading the Key DO: Present the meanings of Exploring Publishing
Idea/Stem cohesion and coherence through
direct instruction. DO: Introduce different publishing
options for the students’ poems,
SHOW: Cohesion such as creating an online poetry
• Cohesion refers to the blog, submitting to a school
grammatical and lexical linking literary magazine, or organizing a
within a text or sentence that class anthology.
holds it together and gives it Discuss the advantages and
meaning. It is the use of considerations of each option,
linguistic devices to connect including audience reach,
ideas, ensuring that a text flows accessibility, and formatting
logically and is understandable. requirements.
Cohesion focuses on the Allow students to express their
relationship between words, preferences and brainstorm ideas
phrases, sentences, and for the publication process.
paragraphs. SHOW: Steps in the Publishing
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Coherence Process in the Classroom
• Coherence, on the other hand, 1. Choose the persons who will
is the logical structuring of a text act as the following:
that makes it easy to follow and a. Editorial Director: Oversees
understand. It is about the the entire publishing process.
overall sense and clarity of the b. Managing Editor: Manages
message being conveyed. schedules, costs, and the
Coherence is achieved when work of senior editors, copy
the ideas in a text are well- editors, and proofreaders.
organized and logically c. Senior Editors: Handle
sequenced, making the text publications on specific
make sense. themes.
Differences d. Copy Editors: Prepare text
• Cohesion is concerned with the for production according to
surface structure of a text. It house style.
deals with how sentences link to e. Proofreaders: Check text for
each other using cohesive errors and omissions.
devices like conjunctions, f. PictureEditors/Researchers:
pronouns, and lexical repetition. Source images, obtain
• Coherence is about the deeper permissions, and negotiate
structure of a text. It focuses on fees.
the logical flow and clarity of g. Production Director:
ideas, ensuring that the text is Responsible for production
easy to understand and logically quality, schedules, and costs.
organized. h. Marketing Manager: Plans
and manages campaigns for
Techniques for Cohesion imprints, series, and titles.
• Reference: This is using i. Promotion Managers: Create
pronouns or other references to physical and digital
link back to something promotional materials for
mentioned earlier. various platforms.
Example: "John lost his keys. j. Finance Director: Manages
He searched everywhere for them." budgets, payments, and
receipts.
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• Substitution: This is replacing 2. Preparing the Manuscripts
a word or phrase with another • Format the poems according to
to avoid repetition. the submission guidelines set by
Example: "I need a pen. Do you the publishing team.
have one?" • Copyread and proofread the
• Ellipsis: This is omitting parts poems to ensure that there are no
of a sentence that can be errors.
understood from the context. 3. Submission Guidelines
Example: "I’ll have the fish. And • Follow the specific instructions
you?" provided by the publication team.
• Conjunctions: This is using • This may include submitting via
connecting words to link an online form, email, or physical
sentences or clauses. printout.
Example: "She was tired, but she 4. Submission
finished her work." • Submit the poems according to
the guidelines.
Techniques for Coherence • Keep a record of the submissions.
• Logical Order: This is 5. Acceptance and Editing
arranging ideas in a logical • If the work is accepted, the
sequence. students may receive feedback or
Example: Chronological order for editing suggestions from the
events, cause and effect, etc. publication's editors.
• Consistent Point of View: • Be open to revisions and
This is maintaining the same collaborate with the editors to
perspective throughout the text. polish the poems.
• Clear Topic Sentences: This is 6. Publication
the beginning paragraph with a • The poems will be published
sentence that states the main according to the schedule of the
idea. publication.
• Transitional Phrases: This is Promote published works through
using phrases that help move social media, personal networks,
from one idea to another and poetry readings.
smoothly.
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Example: "Furthermore, in addition,
on the other hand."
Examples:
Cohesion Example:
Original: "Tom took his dog for a
walk. Tom likes to walk every
evening. The dog is very energetic."
Coherence Example:
Original: "To bake a cake, you first
put it in the oven. Mix the
ingredients thoroughly. Preheat the
oven to 350 degrees."
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Developing DO: Let the students analyze the DO: Guide the students in the
Understanding of the given poem and have them improve publishing process.
Key Idea/Stem it by using techniques in writing
coherent and cohesive poems.
Explanation of Improvements
• Cohesion through Pronouns:
Original: "The moon is bright. She
dances through the night."
Improved: "The moon is bright, she
dances through the night."
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The two sentences are connected
using a comma and the pronoun
"she" directly follows "the moon" for
clearer reference.
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The phrases are linked by related
themes of morning and the effect of
the sunrise, creating continuity.
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haiku)?
• Does the poem have a clear
beginning, middle, and end?
• Does the poem progress in
a logical and easy-to-follow
manner?
• Are the ideas and images
presented in a sequence
that makes sense?
• Is the point of view
consistent throughout the
poem (first-person, second-
person, third-person)?
• Are there any abrupt
changes in perspective that
disrupt the flow?
• Are there clear transitions
between lines and stanzas?
• Do the transitions help guide
the reader smoothly from
one idea to the next?
• Are pronouns used
effectively to refer back to
previously mentioned
nouns?
• Is it always clear what or
whom the pronouns refer to?
• Are conjunctions and
connectors used to link
ideas within and between
lines?
• Do these connectors help to
clarify the relationships
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between ideas?
• Is there appropriate
repetition of key words or
phrases to reinforce ideas?
• Are substitutions (e.g.,
synonyms, pronouns) used
to avoid unnecessary
repetition?
• Are related words or
phrases used to create a
sense of continuity?
• Do the lexical chains help to
reinforce the theme or
message of the poem?
• Does the poem feel
cohesive and coherent
overall?
• Are the coherence and
cohesion devices used
effectively to enhance the
poem's readability and
impact?
Making DO: The students will DO: The students will be graded
Generalizations and be graded based on based on the rubric in the worksheet.
Abstractions the rubric in the Note that this should be presented
worksheet. Note that before they start working on their
this should be publication process.
presented before they
start working on their
revisions.
Evaluating Learning DO: Let the students DO: Let the students do the activity.
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do the activity.
Write a four-paragraph reflection
Write a four- after doing the publishing process of
paragraph reflection your original poem. Focus on
after doing the answering the following questions:
revision process of
your original poem. 1. Describe how your class
Focus on answering planned and organized the
the following publishing process.
questions: 2. How did you ensure that all
1. Describe the steps members were on the same
you took to revise page and working towards
your poem. What the same goals?
specific changes 3. Reflect on your specific role.
did you make What were your
based on the responsibilities and how did
feedback you you fulfill them?
received? How did this experience impact on
2. How did the you as a poet and as a publisher?
revision process
help you
understand the
importance of
coherence and
cohesion in
poetry?
3. What challenges
did you
encounter? How
did you overcome
them?
How do you feel
about your revised
poem? What
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improvements are
you most proud of?
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Differences d. Copy Editors: Prepare text
• Cohesion is concerned with the for production according to
surface structure of a text. It house style.
deals with how sentences link to e. Proofreaders: Check text
each other using cohesive for errors and omissions.
devices like conjunctions, f. Picture
pronouns, and lexical repetition. Editors/Researchers:
• Coherence is about the deeper Source images, obtain
structure of a text. It focuses on permissions, and negotiate
the logical flow and clarity of fees.
ideas, ensuring that the text is g. Production Director:
easy to understand and logically Responsible for production
organized. quality, schedules, and
costs.
Techniques for Cohesion h. Marketing Manager: Plans
• Reference: This is using and manages campaigns
pronouns or other references to for imprints, series, and
link back to something titles.
mentioned earlier. i. Promotion Managers:
Example: "John lost his keys. He Create physical and digital
searched everywhere for them." promotional materials for
various platforms.
• Substitution: This is replacing a j. Finance Director: Manages
word or phrase with another to budgets, payments, and
avoid repetition. receipts.
Example: "I need a pen. Do you
have one?" 2. Preparing the Manuscripts
• Ellipsis: This is omitting parts of • Format the poems according
a sentence that can be to the submission guidelines
understood from the context. set by the publishing team.
Example: "I’ll have the fish. And • Copyread and proofread the
you?" poems to ensure that there
• Conjunctions: This is using are no errors.
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connecting words to link 3. Submission Guidelines
sentences or clauses. • Follow the specific
Example: "She was tired, but she instructions provided by the
finished her work." publication team.
• This may include submitting
Techniques for Coherence via an online form, email, or
• Logical Order: This is arranging physical printout.
ideas in a logical sequence. 4. Submission
Example: Chronological order for • Submit the poems according
events, cause and effect, etc. to the guidelines.
• Consistent Point of View: This is • Keep a record of the
maintaining the same submissions.
perspective throughout the text. 5. Acceptance and Editing
• Clear Topic Sentences: This is • If the work is accepted, the
the beginning paragraph with a students may receive
sentence that states the main feedback or editing
idea. suggestions from the
• Transitional Phrases: This is publication's editors.
using phrases that help move • Be open to revisions and
from one idea to another collaborate with the editors to
smoothly. polish the poems.
Example: "Furthermore, in addition, 6. Publication
on the other hand." • The poems will be published
• Repetition of Key Terms: This is according to the schedule of
repeating important terms to the publication.
emphasize the main ideas. Promote published works
through social media,
Example: "Education is vital for personal networks, and poetry
success. Without education, readings.
achieving success is difficult."
Examples:
Cohesion Example:
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Original: "Tom took his dog for a
walk. Tom likes to walk every
evening. The dog is very energetic."
Improved: "Tom took his dog for a
walk. He likes to walk every evening
because his dog is very energetic."
Coherence Example:
Original: "To bake a cake, you first
put it in the oven. Mix the
ingredients thoroughly. Preheat the
oven to 350 degrees."
Improved: "To bake a cake, first,
preheat the oven to 350 degrees.
Then, mix the ingredients
thoroughly. Finally, put the mixture
in the oven."
Remarks
Reflection
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