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Writing Mistakes Identification Exercise

Instructions:​
Read each sentence.

1.​ Identify the type of error (from the list of writing mistakes you studied).​

2.​ Rewrite the sentence correctly.

Part A – Find the Error

1.​ The group of students are planning a surprise party.​

2.​ Walking down the street, the flowers smelled wonderful.​

3.​ She enjoys painting, to swim, and dancing.​

4.​ I like pizza, I also like pasta.​

5.​ After the meeting we discussed the next steps.​

6.​ It’s important to plan ahead because of the fact that it is necessary.​

7.​ The reason is because we need more time.​

8.​ Apple’s for sale in the market today.​

9.​ My brother however is not coming to the trip.​

10.​The book on the desk in the room near the kitchen in the big house is mine.​

11.​The cake was eaten by the children.​

12.​Their going to the park after school.​

13.​He excepted the award graciously.​

14.​Let’s eat grandma!​

15.​Every student must hand in their assignment on time.​

16.​Before eating the guests washed their hands.​

17.​The teacher, gave us homework for the weekend.​


18.​I was late the bus left without me.​

19.​Because I was tired.​

20.​i love learning english.​

Part B – Match the Error to Its Name

Match each sentence number from Part A with one of these error types:

●​ Subject–verb agreement​

●​ Dangling modifier​

●​ Faulty parallelism​

●​ Comma splice​

●​ No comma after introductory phrase​

●​ Wordiness​

●​ Redundancy​

●​ Misplaced apostrophe​

●​ Commas around interrupters​

●​ Overusing prepositional phrases​

●​ Passive voice​

●​ Commonly confused words​

●​ Wrong word​

●​ Punctuation error​

●​ Pronoun error​

●​ Comma error​

●​ Superfluous comma​

●​ Run-on sentence​
●​ Sentence fragment​

●​ Capitalization​

Part C – Correct the Sentences

Rewrite each sentence from Part A so it is correct.

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Subject-verb agreement errors occur when the subject of a sentence does not match the verb in number, leading to confusion about the sentence’s meaning. For example, in the sentence “The group of students are planning a surprise party,” the error is in the use of 'are' instead of 'is' because 'group,' being a singular collective noun, requires a singular verb. Correcting the error involves changing the verb to 'is': “The group of students is planning a surprise party.” This ensures that the sentence clearly communicates that it is the group as a single unit doing the planning .

Commas are used around interrupting elements to set off additional information that is not essential to the main clause, ensuring the clarity of the main message. In “My brother however is not coming to the trip,” the phrase 'however' is an interrupting element that should be offset by commas: “My brother, however, is not coming to the trip.” This punctuation correctly separates the interrupter, allowing the reader to easily identify the core sentence structure, thus maintaining clarity .

Faulty parallelism occurs when parts of a sentence that are meant to be parallel (e.g., in a list) do not follow the same grammatical structure. This can make the sentence awkward or unclear. For instance, in the sentence “She enjoys painting, to swim, and dancing,” the error lies in the inconsistency of verb forms. Correcting it involves making each part of the list parallel: “She enjoys painting, swimming, and dancing.” Each activity now has the same structure, which clarifies the sentence and improves readability .

Wordiness involves using more words than necessary to convey an idea, leading to redundancy and reduced clarity. In the sentence “It’s important to plan ahead because of the fact that it is necessary,” the phrase ‘because of the fact that’ is unnecessarily lengthy and can be simplified to ‘because.’ The improved sentence is “It’s important to plan ahead because it is necessary.” Identifying such excessive verbiage and simplifying it helps make writing more concise and direct, enhancing communication effectiveness .

Redundancy occurs when information is unnecessarily repeated, undermining the impact of writing and cluttering sentences. In the sentence “The reason is because we need more time,” both 'the reason is' and 'because' serve similar functions, making one of them redundant. Simplifying this sentence by removing redundancy results in “We need more time.” This streamlining makes the sentence clearer and more impactful, emphasizing the main point without repetition .

A comma splice occurs when two independent clauses are joined by just a comma, which is incorrect and creates a run-on sentence. For example, “I like pizza, I also like pasta” improperly uses a comma to connect two independent thoughts. This can be corrected by either separating the clauses with a period or semicolon, or by adding a coordinating conjunction: “I like pizza; I also like pasta” or “I like pizza, and I also like pasta.” These revisions break the incorrect sentence into separate complete sentences or properly connect them, improving clarity and grammatical correctness .

Misplaced apostrophes can change the intended meaning of a sentence, often creating confusion about possession or plurality. In the sentence “Apple’s for sale in the market today,” the incorrect apostrophe indicates possession rather than plurality. Correcting this involves removing the apostrophe to denote multiple apples: “Apples for sale in the market today.” Proper punctuation ensures the sentence accurately conveys the intended message, which is about availability, not ownership .

Incorrect capitalization affects the readability and professionalism of writing by violating standard grammar rules. In the sentence “i love learning english,” both 'i' and 'english' fail to follow capitalization conventions. Correcting this involves capitalizing the first-person pronoun and proper noun: “I love learning English.” Proper use of capitalization ensures that writing adheres to grammatical norms and aids in the clarity and formal presentation of text .

A dangling modifier is a word or phrase that modifies a word not clearly stated in the sentence, leading to confusion in meaning. In the sentence “Walking down the street, the flowers smelled wonderful,” the modifier ‘walking down the street’ incorrectly seems to modify ‘flowers’ instead of the intended subject. To correct this, the sentence should be rewritten to specify the intended subject: “As I was walking down the street, the flowers smelled wonderful.” This revision correctly pairs the action of walking with the person doing it, thus eliminating the confusion .

Passive voice often results in a sentence structure where the subject is acted upon rather than performing the action, which can obscure agency and reduce directness. For example, “The cake was eaten by the children” employs passive voice, which can be less engaging. Rewriting it in active voice, “The children ate the cake,” clarifies who is performing the action, creating a more vigorous and clear sentence. Active constructions generally enhance the readability and engagement of writing .

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