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Aptis Writing: problems
(Ms Mai Hien – GV Aptis – 0975864971)
B1
- I am writing this email regarding the problem mentioned in the recent
announcement from our club.
- I was a bit sad/ worried/disappointed to hear that news because it can
negatively affect the image of our club (vấn đề nội bộ)
+ Because I have been waiting for this event for months
+ Because this is really dangerous for people who travel on the road
(walking)
+ Because this can discourage people to join our club
+ I know that we need money to run our club and maintain the facilities,
however increasing the membership fee is not the best solution (bài tăng
phí thành viên)
+ Selling tickets/Charging money is not the best solution and this can
reduce the number of people to come to our event (bài thu vé)
+ The sudden change may cause inconvenience for members/everyone
(language)
+ Inconsistent activities may make members feel uncomfortable and see no
value in being part of the club. (fitness)
+ Frequent argument and ineffective activities may discourage members
(technology)
+ It is high time we should do something to deal with the problem or at
least improve the situation.
- Being a member of the club, I would like to offer some solutions
+ It is advisable for us to reschedule the meeting with Mr. David until he
gets better because everyone really wants to meet him (gardening, film)
+ Install a device that can reduce the noise (music)
+ Change the time and place of the concerts. (music)
+ Encourage people to respect others (technology)
+ Issue stricter rules (technology)
+ Have a talk show and invite a famous speaker to come and share with
them about the benefits of debating(/reading books/home-made food/..)
+ It helps people develop critical thinking which is important for decision-
making and problem-solving skills (debate)
+ Hire some trainers to support members when the club trainers are away
(health)
B2 - I am writing this email regarding the issue mentioned in the recent
announcement from our club.
- I was quite sad and concerned to hear the news, as it could negatively
impact the image of our club due to internal issues.
+ I have been looking forward to this event for months, so this news was
especially disappointing.
+ Additionally, the change could discourage potential members from joining our
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club.
+ The issue is also particularly dangerous for pedestrians and others traveling on
the road.
+ While I understand that we need funding to operate the club and maintain our
facilities, increasing the membership fee may not be the best solution.
+ Similarly, selling tickets or charging entry fees might reduce attendance at our
events.
+ Sudden changes like this can cause inconvenience for our members.
+ Inconsistent scheduling or unclear communication might make members feel
uncomfortable or question the value of staying in the club.
+ Frequent arguments and ineffective activities may lead to member
dissatisfaction and reduced participation.
+ It is high time we take action to address this issue—or at the very least, improve
the situation.
- There are several solutions we can take into account
It might be advisable to reschedule the meeting with Mr. David until he
feels better, as many members are eager to meet him. (gardening/film)
For the music club, we could consider installing soundproofing devices to
reduce noise.
Alternatively, changing the time and location of concerts may help
minimize disturbances.
In technology-related activities, we should encourage members to respect
each other’s opinions.
It might also be helpful to introduce stricter rules to maintain order.
Hosting a talk show with a well-known speaker could help promote
activities like debating, reading books, or preparing homemade food.
Debating, for example, helps participants develop critical thinking—an
essential skill for decision-making and problem-solving.
When our club trainers are unavailable, hiring temporary trainers could
ensure consistent support for our members.
Khung viết thư - chủ đề Problems liên quan đến CLB
(Ms Mai Hien – 0975864971)
Dear Manager,
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My name is Mary, and I have been an active member of the club for the past six
months. I am writing this email regarding the problem mentioned in the latest
announcement from our club.
I have been informed that (problem). To be honest, I was very
(sad/worried/disappointed) to hear that because (reason). I believe it is high time we
did something to address the issue or at least improve the situation.
Here are some solutions we could consider. Firstly, it would be advisable for us to
(suggestion 1), as (reason). In addition, we could also (suggestion 2), since (reason).
I believe these solutions are feasible and not difficult to implement. I sincerely hope we
can handle the problem soon and make positive changes together.
Best regards,
Mary
VD
Part 4: Technology
You are a member of the Technology Club. You received this email from the club's
manager.
Dear member,
Members are active online by posting and commenting on posts. However, some members
are commenting negative (tiêu cực) things about others. The postings on our system are
anonymous (hệ thống ẩn danh) so we are thinking about changing the system to identify
(định danh) who comments. What do you think? Do you have any alternative method?
Provide your suggestions and reasons.
From the manager.
1. Write an email to your friend who is also a member to talk about your suggestions.
2. Write an email to your manager about your suggestions and reasons.
Dear Manager,
My name is Mary, and I have been an active member of the club for the past six
months. I am writing this email regarding the problem mentioned in the latest
announcement from our club.
I have been informed that some members are commenting negative things about
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others. To be honest, I was very worried to hear that because it can badly affect the
image of our club. I believe it is high time we did something to address the issue or at
least improve the situation.
Here are some solutions we could consider. Firstly, it would be advisable for us to have
stricter rules about posting and commenting. In addition, we could also encourage people
to respect others
I believe these solutions are feasible and not difficult to implement. I sincerely hope we
can handle the problem soon and make positive changes together.
Best regards,
Mary
Dear Manager,
My name is Mary, and I have been an active member of the club for the past six
months. I am writing this email regarding the problem mentioned in the latest
announcement from our club.
I have been informed that some members are commenting negative things about
others. To be honest, I was very worried to hear that because it may negatively impact
the image of our club. I believe it is high time we did something to address the issue or
at least improve the situation.
Here are some solutions we could consider. Firstly, it would be advisable for us to have
stricter rules about posting and commenting and warn members about the
consequences of the problem. In addition, we could also encourage people to respect
others’ perspectives because this can reduce the conflicts among members
I believe these solutions are practical and not difficult to implement. I sincerely hope we
can handle the problem soon and make positive changes together.
Best regards,
Mary
Part 4: Health Club
You are a member of the Health club. You received this email from the club's manager.
Dear Member,
The club's instructors will be absent for the next 2 weeks. You can still use the club's
equipment, but there won't be any instructor support. Please kindly understand this
situation.
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1. Write an email to your friend. Tell your friend about your feelings and opinions. 50
words.
2. Write an email to the manager of the club. Tell the manager about your feelings
and suggestions. 120-150 words.
Part 4: Museum Club
You are a member of the museum club. You have received this email from the club.
Dear members,
The museums are free of charge but next year museums will require tickets and this might
decrease visitors. What do you think? Make suggestions and explain.
Bests,
Club Manager.
1. Write an email to your friend. Write about your feelings and what you think the
club should do about the situation. Write about 50 words. Recommended time: 10
minutes.
2. Write an email to the president of the club. Write about your feelings and what you
think the club should do about the situation. Write 120-150 words. Recommended
time: 20 minutes.
Part 4: Power Fitness Club
You are a member of the Power Fitness club. You received this email from the club's
manager.
Dear Member,
Unfortunately, in order to cut costs we are forced to reduce the facilities that we can offer
our members. Some members have suggested that we close the club shop, where we sell
sports equipment. Another suggestion is to close the cafe selling sandwiches and soft
drinks. We would be interested to hear what you think. Please write to the manager with
your suggestion and your reason for suggesting it.
Bests,
Club Manager.
1. Write an email to your friend. Tell your friend what the club should do and why.
Write about 50 words.
2. Write an email to the manager of the club. Say what you think the club should do
and why. Write about 120-150 words.
Part 4: Music club
Version 1
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Dear members,
Recently, our club has had some concerts and plays music at night. However, residents
living nearby our club complain about the noise from our concerts. Please give me
some suggestions to solve this problem,
1. Write an email to your friends. Write about your feelings and ask for advice on how
to deal with them. Write about 50 words. You have 10 minutes.
2. Write an email to CLUB, write about your feelings and to find a solution. Write about
120-150 words. You have 20 minutes.
Part 4: Book Club
You are a member of the book club, you received this email from the club.
Dear members,
The local authorities have announced that the public library may close next year because
there are few people going there to read books. This may affect communities who like
reading. What do you think about this? Do you have any other suggestions?
1. Email to your friend
2. Email to the club
Part 4: Language Club
Nowadays more and more new words and phrases are added to the language, so many
people have strong reactions to this issue. Some people gladly accept while those who
argue that there should be rules for language.
1. Write an email to your friend
2. Write an email to the club manager to express your views and explain why so many
people react like this.
Part 4: English Club (Version 2)
Dear members,
We are sorry to inform you that the talk show has been canceled as the guests are
unexpectedly busy. We do not have any backup plan, so there will be no meeting this
week. We will inform you of the reopening of the talk show as soon as we can. We are
sorry for the inconvenience.
1. Write an email to your friend to express your feelings
2. Write an email to the president of the club to express your feeling
Part 4: College Club
You are a member of a college. You received this email from the college administrator.
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Dear student,
We are writing to inform you that the end of course exams will now take place two weeks
earlier than originally planned. Your exam, which was scheduled for the 21st of next
month, will now take place on the 7th of next month. We apologize for any difficulty this
may cause.
1. Write an email to your friend. Write about your feelings and what you think the
college should do about the situation. Write about 50 words.
2. Write an email to the college administrator. Write about your feelings and what you
think the college should do about the situation. Write about 120 – 150 words.
Part 4: Writing Club
You are a member of a writing club. You received this email from the club.
Dear members,
Many people complain that the website is unprofessional and difficult to use.
Please send us your suggestions.
1. Write an email to your friend.
2. Write an email to the manager of the club.
Part 4: Walking Club (Version 2)
Nowadays, many people use their phones while walking so they don't focus on
walking.
The club wants members to make suggestions on this issue.
1. Write an email to your friend. Write about your feelings and what you
would like to do. Write about 50 words
2. Write an email to the manager of the club. Write about your feelings and
what you think the club should do about the situation. Write about 120 - 150
words.
