Hortatory
exposition Text
Group 7
- Elisabeth A. M Djahimo
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- Theresia A. Putri Korebima
Why Should Wearing a Helmet when Riding
Motorcycle
Thesis : We often hear lots of stories from road regarding people taking spill on motorcycle when they are riding
without using helmet. Mostly the riders badly end up in mess. Wearing a fitted protective helmet offers many benefits
which reduces the negative aspects of riding.
Argument 1 : First and the most important is that wearing the correct helmet can save a rider’s life, physical ability,
family pain, and money. The recommended designs of motorcycle helmets can provide total protection. They not only
protect riders from getting a worse road injured accident but also from flying bugs, such as rain, sleet, mud and
other potential projectiles.
Argument 2 : Second, wearing a helmet can gives the raiders a matter of style. Helmets give the opportunity for rider
to express the image they may want to project when riding on they way. This benefit may not be important to some
people, but to others, it means a lot and important. By choosing the most appropriate helmet from all of the various
styles, such as beanie, shorty, German, and many others, wearing a helmet which can projecting an image is an
inherent crucial part of motorcycling and help riders feel more confident when riding on the road.
Recommendation : However, what most important is wearing helmet when riding is a matter of using it properly.
Bikers should use the helmets which are fixed to their head. It is really not good if they places simply the helmets on
the head without settling them properly. The bikers should fasten the helmet correctly to their head in order to get
safe and comfort.
Main Thesis Main Arguments
1 the importance of wearing
helmet 2 Wearing helmet gives a
total protection and giving
a chance in imaging self
Main
Recommendation
3 Bikers should wear helmet
properly to get the
benefits.
Language Features
Present Tense
● We often hear lots of stories from road regarding people taking spill on motorcycle when they
are riding without using helmet.
● First and the most important is that wearing the correct helmet can save a rider’s life, physical
ability, family pain, and money.
● By choosing the most appropriate helmet from all of the various styles, such as beanie, shorty,
German, and many others, wearing a helmet which can projecting an image is an inherent
crucial part of motorcycling and help riders feel more confident when riding on the road.
● However, what most important is wearing helmet when riding is a matter of using it properly.
Bikers should use the helmets which are fixed to their head.
● . It is really not good if they places simply the helmets on the head without settling them
properly.
Language Features
Conjunctives
● However
● First
● Second
● Not only
● But also
● If
● And
● But
● That
● When
Language Features
Evaluative Words
● They not only protect riders from getting a worse road injured accident but also from flying
bugs, such as rain, sleet, mud and other potential projectiles.
Language features
Compound Sentence
● First and the most important is that wearing the correct helmet can save a rider’s life,
physical ability, family pain, and money.
● They not only protect riders from getting a worse road injured accident but also from flying
bugs, such as rain, sleet, mud and other potential projectiles.
● Helmets give the opportunity for rider to express the image they may want to project when
riding on they way.
● This benefit may not be important to some people, but to others, it means a lot and important.
● By choosing the most appropriate helmet from all of the various styles, such as beanie,
shorty, German, and many others, wearing a helmet which can projecting an image is an
inherent crucial part of motorcycling and help riders feel more confident when riding on the
road.
Language Features
Complex Sentence
● By choosing the most appropriate helmet from all of the various styles, such as beanie, shorty, German,
and many others, wearing a helmet which can projecting an image is an inherent crucial part of
motorcycling and help riders feel more confident when riding on the road.
● However, what most important is wearing helmet when riding is a matter of using it properly
Thank
you
