Teaching Professional and Technical Communication: A Practicum in a Book
By Tracy Bridgeford (Editor)
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This practicum features chapters by prominent PTC scholars and teachers on rhetoric, style, ethics, design, usability, genre, and other central concerns of PTC programs. Each chapter includes a scenario or personal narrative of teaching a particular topic, provides a theoretical basis for interpreting the narrative, illustrates the practical aspects of the approach, describes relevant assignments, and presents a list of questions to prompt pedagogical discussions.
Teaching Professional and Technical Communication is not a compendium of best practices but instead offers a practical collection of rich, detailed narratives that show inexperienced PTC instructors how to work most effectively in the classroom.
Contributors: Pam Estes Brewer, Eva Brumberger, Dave Clark, Paul Dombrowski, James M. Dubinsky, Peter S. England, David K. Farkas, Brent Henze, Tharon W. Howard, Dan Jones, Karla Saari Kitalong, Traci Nathans-Kelly, Christine G. Nicometo, Kirk St.Amant
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Teaching Professional and Technical Communication - Tracy Bridgeford
Teaching Professional and Technical Communication
A Practicum in a Book
Edited by
Tracy Bridgeford
Utah State University Press
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Title: Teaching professional and technical communication : a practicum in a book / edited by Tracy Bridgeford.
Description: Logan : Utah State University Press, [2018] | Includes bibliographical references and index.
Identifiers: LCCN 2017025372| ISBN 9781607326793 (pbk.) | ISBN 9781607326809 (ebook)
Subjects: LCSH: Communication of technical information—Study and teaching. | Technical writing—Study and teaching.
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Contents
Acknowledgments
1 Introduction to Teaching Professional and Technical Communication: A Practicum in a Book
Tracy Bridgeford
2 Rhetorical Analysis: A Foundational Skill for PTC Teachers
James M. Dubinsky
3 Teaching Students about Style in Technical Communication
Dan Jones
4 Teaching Content Strategy in Professional and Technical Communication
Dave Clark
5 Teaching Genre in Professional and Technical Communication
Brent Henze
6 What Do Instructors Need to Know about Teaching Information Graphics? A Multiliteracies Approach
Karla Saari Kitalong
7 Designing Teaching to Teach Design
Eva Brumberger
8 Designing and Writing Procedures
David K. Farkas
9 A Primer for Teaching Ethics in Professional and Technical Communication
Paul Dombrowski
10 What Do Instructors Need to Know about Teaching Collaboration?
Peter S. England and Pam Estes Brewer
11 Teaching Usability Testing: Coding Usability Testing Data
Tharon W. Howard
12 What Do Instructors Need to Know about Teaching Technical Presentations?
Traci Nathans-Kelly and Christine G. Nicometo
13 Teaching International and Intercultural Technical Communication: A Comparative Online Credibility Approach
Kirk St.Amant
About the Authors
Index
Acknowledgments
A book is no easy task. Many people helped me along the way. From the very beginning, Kelli Cargile Cook contributed in immeasurable ways to my preliminary thinking and planning. Joan Latchaw and Kathy Radosta listened to me talk about it ad nauseam and provided valuable feedback on the introduction. Pavel Zemliansky and Karla Saari Kitalong also read the introduction, offering feedback from the field. Finally, Jonathan Santo helped me figure out how to conduct and read the results of a survey I conducted. And even though I didn’t end up using the survey results, I learned much-appreciated lessons about quantitative research.
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Introduction to Teaching Professional and Technical Communication
A Practicum in a Book
Tracy Bridgeford
Teaching Professional and Technical Communication: A Practicum in a Book grew out of my efforts to create a technical communication pedagogy course for local secondary education teachers, part-time teachers, and graduate students who knew little to nothing about the subject, let alone how to teach it. This book delivers what I didn’t have when I first taught technical communication—a practicum that enabled me to see pedagogical approaches in action before stepping into the classroom. This collection is intended to help inexperienced instructors understand the classroom experience of the PTC instructor and how to be professional and technical communication instructors in face-to-face classrooms. Inexperienced instructors refers to instructors from academia with no industry experience, industry professionals with no academic training, or graduate students with neither. To address this gap, I thought it was important to require readings of the landmark essays that provide a theoretical foundation informing pedagogical approaches (see Suggested Readings at the end of this introduction), but which also provide pragmatic knowledge about instruction. Because many of us in the field learned to teach Professional and Technical Communication (PTC) through trial and error, hallway conversations, conference presentations, and discussions with colleagues—all of which address important theoretical information about teaching professional and technical communication—many of the practical aspects of teaching the subject have not been available in print since the 1980s, and so much has changed since those early days.
Although it does not aim to be a compendium of best practices, this collection does provide plenty of practical advice and examples. To that end, I asked contributors to shape their chapters as if they were observers in a classroom recording classroom practice. They describe what teaching a particular PTC competency, such as information design, looks like in actual practice by establishing a scenario; providing a theoretical basis as a foundation for interpreting the scenario; illustrating the practical aspects of applying the approach, method, or practice; and describing assignments or activities that instructors can generalize to use in their own classrooms. Each chapter concludes with a list of questions for pedagogical discussions. It delivers a deeper level of training—a practicum that prepares instructors to walk into the professional and technical communication classroom with confidence. The term practicum can suggest a purely practical approach to teaching, or it can refer to the cumulative knowledge and skills acquired over the course of an education. For this collection, practicum signifies both the theoretical and practical aspects of preparing to teach PTC. This practicum in a book
guides instructors through the teaching of topics normally covered in service or introductory courses in professional and technical communication.
I begin this practicum in a book by describing the problem-solving approach used most frequently in professional and technical communication classes followed by a description of the various competencies taught in these classes. Technical communication instructors must be aware of the role these competencies play in writing technical documents so they will be better able to guide student learning. These general competencies include audience analysis and purpose, information design, project and content management, style, and ethics. Although I discuss each competency separately, they are typically taught simultaneously. That is, it is difficult to teach ethics without also considering rhetorical devices such as audience and purpose or to teach genre without also addressing design and content strategy. Likewise, it is impossible to teach any of these competencies without also tending to style issues. And given the nature of globalization, it would be difficult to prepare technical documents for international contexts without also considering the impact of these competencies on those audiences. This problem-solving approach helps instructors situate these competencies within a context of social action.
Problem-Solving Approach
Sometime in the 1980s, we moved from a forms-based approach focused on the various parts of a form that students followed like a template with little consideration for the action involved to more socially based approaches that examine the contexts and influences on that document—what I’m calling a problem-solving approach. This approach is a critical thinking method that guides students through the various iterations of a technical document. It asks students to approach their writing from the standpoint of solving a communication problem. For example, while a memo as a form has identifiable, common parts (i.e., To, From, Date, and Subject), it is equally important to consider the various social aspects of that piece of communication and why, for example, this or that word, heading, or design was chosen. Documents grow out of a context and a situation, which affect all aspects of the writing. Social aspects refers to the various contexts in which PTC is involved, such as examining the power relations between the addressee and the writer, or the role of professional and technical communicators in an organization’s hierarchy, or how the creation and organization of content (seen as a product) can help define those relationships. These examples demonstrate the value of focusing on the social approaches of PTC in ways that engage students in their own learning and help them develop an awareness of audience, purpose, and situation. Lloyd Bitzer (1968) calls this the rhetorical situation.
The exigency of a rhetorical situation, Bitzer says, is what calls the writing into existence
(its purpose or reason for existing) and what informs the writer’s choices about the appropriate style, tone, register, design, and graphics to be used given a particular situation (2). When students learn about writing in a context, or reacting to a situation, they begin to see how communication happens in the workplace. It’s not simply the creation of a genre; it is a form of social action that grows out of a particular situation. In the workplace, events often require a document of some sort (e.g., a trip report, an activity log, an instruction set, a user manual, a memo, a letter, and so on) that communicates various actions to a specific internal or an external audience (e.g., new policies are enacted, updates are communicated, marketing materials are made, and so on). Creating assignments that focus on a situation students can then use to direct their writing (e.g., writing a progress report for a group project) has become common pedagogical practice. Shaped by the nuances of the rhetorical situation, instruction has evolved into a pedagogy focused on problem solving, and this approach is what enables students to become agents writing in situ.
The various stages of this approach include preparatory work of such considerations of audience, purpose, research, genre, and situational analysis, that is, how the document will be used and in what context. For example, when I assign instruction sets, I often begin by showing students images from NASA that show an astronaut making repairs outside the International Space Station. In this image, an astronaut is consulting the pages of a book attached to his wrist; the book is a big picture book made out of plastic. In another image, an astronaut is consulting a portable tablet attached to her wrist. Both images are powerful reminders that documents (print or digital) created for space must address how they will be used by the intended audience. Given the confines of space travel, astronauts need large text and images that are easy to see despite the huge helmet and big buttons that are easy to push with large gloves on. This example illustrates the importance of social context and the kinds of knowledge writers need when drafting documents that will be used for a particular purpose.
Following this preparatory work, instructors can then instruct students to begin drafting the document, using what they learned from the preparatory work to craft sentences and organize the document’s content. Students then must think about how best to organize the content in ways that make it easy to find information because technical documents are not often read from beginning to end as one would read a novel. They are scanned by readers looking for specific information. For example, astronauts repairing a loose joint on the International Space Station may bypass some information about what the joint is and how it works in order to get to the repairs more quickly. Given their limited time outside the space station, astronauts must make repairs quickly and cannot spend time on information not useful to the specific task. Students must then think about the wording of each step, which requires using the imperative voice, providing feedback statements when necessary, shaping the content into manageable chunks. Following the drafting and organization stages, students would complete the writing process by copyediting and proofreading the content, paying close attention to sentence and paragraph structure and style.
Students would then ensure that the design of the document aids usability. By discussing this step as if it were a last part of the process, I do not mean to suggest that design instruction is saved for the end of the process as if it is an afterthought or purely decoration. Design issues are raised throughout the process and are certainly a part of all steps in the problem-solving approach. Design issues involve the presentation of content for a specific audience’s use. As mentioned earlier, astronauts working outside the space station need large pictures and text to work effectively. Instructions must be designed with one step per page/screen to accommodate a larger font or image size as well as huge gloves. In this way, writers must provide comprehensive information in each step, all while being succinct, so an astronaut would not have to continually page/move back and forth from step to step. The problem-solving pedagogical approach I just described is evident in each chapter of this book no matter what competency the PTC authors discuss in the pages to follow.
Audience Analysis and Purpose
Audience analysis is the primary competency PTC students must engage in if they are to become effective communicators on the job because it influences every other aspect of technical documentation, such as style, tone, organization, and design. In my own and many other instructors’ experiences, students tend to skip the necessary audience-analysis work, mostly because it involves changing from an I
to a you
attitude, as both Jim Dubinsky (chapter 2) and Dan Jones (chapter 3) describe in their respective chapters. Switching viewpoints is challenging for students because past experiences in composition, for example, have shown them that prewriting activities such as invention heuristics, critiquing both strong and weak writing, and instructor comments on drafts are the means for getting started on writing or on designing projects. Once students understand the value of the exigency of audience awareness,
as Tharon Howard calls it in chapter 11, the more effective their documents or presentations will be. As a central tenet, audience analysis is the most important work of writing a technical document in that it is what lends credibility to the writing. When a document is well written, the work of the user can continue without interruption and without questions to a call center. The credibility of a well-written document is especially evident when translating documents for international audiences because understanding the culture of a communication problem, whether familiar or unfamiliar, is a necessary step toward writing and designing technical documents.
Information Design
Creating technical documents involves various aspects of the design process, including genre, visual cues, graphics, and information design. Part of solving the problem of the design of a document is conducting a genre analysis, choosing the appropriate genre, and shaping its design in ways that address the audience and situation. As a starting point, we might ask, What does the genre look like? How will it be used? What social action is it addressing? We might look at models, but we must be prepared to adjust the design as needed based on what we’ve learned from other analyses as well as the situational requirements. Fundamentally, genre is a social, rather than an individual, process, a process that can help instructors fight the ivory-tower conception of writing most students harbor.
Design also involves examining how people use text and images to provide visual cues about a document’s structure and organization, such as text, pictures, italics, boldface, type size, white space, and positioning of elements on a page—all of which should make it easier for the reader to find the needed information. These symbolic aspects of a document are important because technical documents are scanned, not read in their entirety. For example, when assigned a proposal or report on the effects of global warming, students must understand that different people will read the document in different ways. The executive will probably only read the executive summary, while a financial agent may only be interested in the budget. As such, the various areas of the report must use visual cues such as bolded headings or bulleted lists to designate different parts and use white space effectively in order to highlight important information such as facts and figures or graphics. Design is even more important when preparing documents for translation because credibility is an important factor: design expectations may differ depending on the culture. It is important to know, for example, what colors or images are appropriate to use. Design has become more centralized in PTC pedagogy because readers have become more visually oriented.
Design should not be separated from any other competencies when writing technical documents because it is as much a part of documentation as writing, so it’s important to emphasize its rhetorical nature. For students, this competency may seem largely minor at first, but it is every bit as rhetorical as writing. The design of a document is not merely applying decorative characteristics as a finishing touch. Design should provide instruction to the user in ways that demonstrate how to read the document. In this way, it compels the user to act in a certain way and, therefore, should be emphasized throughout the course, not just in a special chapter or unit. Design decisions can mean the difference between the text being taken seriously or ignored. For example, choosing a font indicates the type of information presented. When the Higgs boson particle discovery announcement was made, the most significant scientific advance in forty years, it was marred by the use of the font Comic Sans, a childlike font typically used in informal situations. Using it to announce a formal, major scientific advancement gave the impression of frivolity and not the seriousness the situation called for. Design competency is addressed in both service and major’s courses because technical documents are not just written; they are designed to ensure readability, legibility, and usability. Readability refers to how easy it is for users to find the information they need, while legibility refers to a font’s appearance and its ability to be deciphered. Usability refers to how well the document can be used to find what’s needed. Everything about a document, or information design, is about how content is presented to an audience.
Content and Project Management
Whether the task is content management, or project management, students most assuredly spend a significant time managing their tasks, which Dave Clark in chapter 4 calls content strategy. Content strategy is a movement,
he says, that emphasizes single sourcing of content in ways that enable it to be used more than once and in more than one context. This management component then becomes a necessary part of work in the twenty-first century as workers connect large masses of information among various departments, all of which contribute to the overall content created for technical products. This information is repeatable
in that it shapes information into repeatable blocks of content. Key to content strategy and its management is the use of modular chunks
in topic areas that ensures they can be used in a variety of contexts, especially content written for translation. As a component of the problem-solving approach, content strategy involves completing a needs assessment, content inventory, and content audit—all of which involve situation, audience, and design analyses. Planning in these areas keeps students focused on writing as solving a problem.
Ethics and Style
Two competencies integral to the first three previously described—audience analysis, design, and management—are ethics and style. Ethics plays a role in all situations, including power relations, organizational structures, credibility issues, stylistic choices, content-management strategies, and genre choices. Sometimes ethical dilemmas can seem small and insignificant (e.g., stealing a pen from an employer) while other issues are major, affecting many people (e.g., ignoring warnings for faulty O-rings, such as with the Challenger disaster). Some instructors discuss ethics in a specialized unit while others include ethical discussions throughout the course as a part of each assignment. Because ethics cannot be separated from the rhetorical situation, engaging in its discussion throughout the term is pedagogically responsible.
I recommend that instructors research a local situation, bringing into class real documents and asking students to analyze them for ethical considerations. In 2002, while a graduate student at Michigan Tech, I used a novel about a global environment issue in conjunction with a case study about Torch Lake in the Upper Peninsula of Michigan in order to engage students in an ethical discussion involving a memo they were writing to an environmental-agency supervisor. Specifically, I have used Scott Russell Sanders’s novel Terrarium as a context for assignments because it tells a dystopian story of a global environmental crisis that has forced humans to move inside gigantic, domed enclosures in order to protect them from the toxins of the earth. I used the Torch Lake case study alongside the novel because it had been designated by the Environmental Protection Agency as an Area of Concern due to its deteriorating water quality resulting from all the copper mining in that area. In preparation for an assignment, I asked students to discuss the ethics involved in both narratives. One student wrote that "Torch Lake is the exigency of Terrarium," meaning that if humans continue to pollute the water as demonstrated in the Torch Lake case study, they could end up in an enclosure as depicted in Terrarium.
Instructors might use the example memo in Stephen Katz’s (1992) article The Ethics of Expediency: Classical Rhetoric, Technology, and the Holocaust,
or the memos provided in Carl G. Herndl, Barbara A. Fennell, and Carolyn Miller’s chapter Understanding Failures of Organizational Discourse
in Textual Dynamics of the Professions: Historical & Contemporary Studies of Writing in Professional Communities (Herndl, Fennell, and Miller 1991). As Katz says in his article, the memo he discusses, for all intents and purposes, is a good example of a well-written memo. However, it is ethically corrupt in that the memo is talking about human beings on one of the trains en route to concentration camps using a euphemism (merchandise
) to refer to them. Herndl, Fennel, and Miller analyze memos concerning the accident at Three Mile Island and the shuttle Challenger disaster. In both cases, they found that the accidents happened due to misunderstanding and miscommunication
(279). One of the memos about the Challenger disaster and the faulty O-rings, for example, was not taken seriously because the author, a budget analyst at NASA, had only been with NASA for a few weeks. He was seen as a newbie without the proper training and knowledge because he lacked detailed data, quantified budget estimates, and subheads; used nontechnical language; and mentioned safety concerns in a budget memo, so he was regarded as an outsider
(299–300). His memo was therefore dismissed. These memos are just a few examples that have proven successful as examples of ethics in the technical communication classroom.
Another competency distinctly a part of audience, design, and management analysis is an embedded competency that is always present even when no one mentions it: style. Style refers to the choices we make when writing and designing a document. In his book Technical Writing Style, Dan Jones’s (1998) definition of style can help us contextualize this competency: Style is your choices of words, phrases, clauses, and sentences, and how you connect these sentences. Style is the unity and coherence of your paragraphs and larger segments. Style is your tone—your attitudes toward your subject, your audience, and yourself—in what you write
(Jones 1998, 3). Although Dan Jones also discusses style comprehensively for this collection, each author in this collection directly or indirectly addresses style issues because it is impossible to engage in any other competency without also addressing the stylistic issues that affect meaning, such as comma placement and sentence-level changes. Because technical documents almost always start with a definition, I like to begin the content of the course by asking students to write definitions. For example, using Terrarium, I ask students to write a definition of a term used in the novel. Students sometimes invent terminology within the context of the story, such as, Retina Scan Sign is a device confirming comprehension of the Mating Ritual statues.
Weaknesses in this definition include using vague language (device) and illogical connections (how can you measure comprehension with a retina scan?). Another student wrote, The Intragaming System is a system in which players compete within a community.
This definition is repetitive (system) and vague (a community). However, in the following example, a student wrote, A belt transect quadrant is a measured and marked rectangle used in ecological studies to divide a larger section of land into smaller, equally sized subparts.
This definition is more effective in that it properly identifies the type (measured and marked rectangle) and its difference from other belts (used in ecological studies) and uses exact language (equally sized subparts). Style, then, is a matter of making decisions about language use.
Style and ethics, as I see them, are issues of credibility. Credibility is, as Kirk St.Amant says in chapter 13, what drives us
to present documents in ways that accurately address the culture of the audience, which is what determines what is and is not credible. If instructions are not clear, users will not use them. If information is buried, readers may miss important content. From both a style and an ethics perspective, if the design interferes with the reading of a document, users will ignore the document. If an information graphic is duplicitous, the content might be regarded suspiciously. If a website shows bias toward a particular culture, users will click away from it. For example, the O-ring warnings to the manufacturers of the shuttle Challenger were presented in a text-heavy PowerPoint slide, buried within other, more informative information—as opposed to emphasizing this warning. It was easily missed or ignored. Attention to style always involves making ethical choices—major and small—and how these decisions are made determines the level of the document’s (print or digital) credibility.
Chapter Summaries
Instructors teaching technical communication tend to teach what’s referred to as the service course, a course that mostly serves nonmajors. Because PTC service courses often constitute the required third writing course for STEM and other nonmajors such as criminal justice or aviation, emphasis on the situational and contextual aspects of writing in the workplace is, indeed, an important and appropriate stance to take in the classroom. Students who take PTC service courses, and even majors taking introductory PTC courses, have little to no knowledge about workplace writing and the dynamic contexts in which it occurs. They may be familiar with some workplace genres but will need convincing that audience and situational analyses are important and necessary. Altogether, the chapters in this collection constitute a term’s course in action.
The chapters probably work best when combined; that is, you could ask students to write and design documents for an international audience and discuss the appropriate style and tone as well as the appropriateness of their designs based on the culture. You could ask students to write a set of instructions and engage in usability testing with other students on campus or analyze and create information graphics, all the while discussing ethical ramifications of word choice and instructional design. You might ask students to work on collaborative projects that require them to research an historical context such as Dombrowski’s cigarette ads or Dubinsky’s Challenger memos and discuss the cultural influences on language use. My own approach grows out of communities of practice theory; I ask students to read and interpret a narrative context (e.g., Terrarium) for assignments in ways that engage the social and ethical considerations of a particular culture, as I mentioned in an earlier section (see Bridgeford 2007 for further description). Any one of these assignments/approaches could then require students to present their information in class using slides. Although I recommend starting with chapter 2 given its rhetorical focus on audience and situation, the chapters that follow do not necessarily need to be read in the order in which they appear.