HeHadSuchQuiteEyes
ByBibsySoenharjo
Hehadsuchquieteyes
Shedidnotrealise
Theyweretwopoolsoflies
Layeredwiththinnestice
Toher,thosewuieteyes
Werebreathingdesolatesighs
Imploringhertobenice
Andtorenderhimparadise
Ifonlyshedbeenwise
Andhadlistenedtotheadvice
Nevertocompromise
Withpleasureseekingguys
Shedbefreefromthehowsandwhys
Nowheresabitofadvice
Besurethatnicereallynice
Thenyoullneverbelosingatdice
Thoughyouloseyourheartonceortwice
SYNOPSIS
Thispoemisaboutaladywhofallsinlovewiththewrongman.She
isfascinatedwithhiseyesthatseemtolurehertogivehimparadise.
Themanhasapairofquieteyesthatshedoesnotrealisetheyare
notthatquiet.Assheischarmedbytheeyes,shedoesnotlistento
theadvicegivenbyotherpeoplewhoareconcernedwithher
behaviour.Intheend,sherealiseshermistakesandisbroken
hearted.
THEME
Betrayaloflove
Personalexperiences
Relationshipsthataremeaningful
MORALVALUES
Dontbenaiveandbelieveeverythingwearetoldespeciallyin
mattersoftheheart.
Bewisewhenchoosingfriends.
Fallinginloveisnormalbutoneshouldbecareful.
Wemustlearnfromtheexperienceofotherpeople.
Weshouldbeverycarefulnottogiveinourprincipleinorder
topleaseotherpeople.
TONE,MOOD,ATMOSPHERE
Refelective
Sadandhappy
Sympathetic
POINTOFVIEW
Secondandthirdpersonpointsofview
LANGUAGE&STYLE
Simpleandeasytounderstand
Simplestylewithrhymingscheme
MEANINGOFWORDS
sighslong,deepaudiblebreaths
eyesapairoforgansofsight
adviceguidance
desolateunhappyanduninhabited
pleasureseekinglookingforafeelingofhappysatisfaction
diceasmallcubewitheachsidehavingadifferentnumber
rangingfrom1to6
layeredarrangedinlayers
liesintentionalfalsestatements
realisebecomeaware
compromiseagree
paradiseheaven
renderprovideorgivehelp
imploringbeggingdesperately
wisehavingknowledgeandgoodjudgement