Hyland Researching Writing
Hyland Researching Writing
Researching Writing
Ken Hyland
Chapter Overview
Assumptions, Writing and Research
An Overview of Methods
A Sample Study
Resources for Further Reading
References
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dierent things about writing, but they always start with our preconceptions.
Simplifying a complex picture, it is possible to group research methods according to their principal focus and whether they are concerned with illuminating
our understanding of texts, writers or readers.
Text-Oriented Research
This views writing as an outcome of activity, as words on a page or screen and
can be descriptive (revealing what occurs), analytical (interpreting why it
occurs) or critical (questioning the social relations which underlie and are
reproduced by what occurs). Texts can also be examined in a variety of ways,
looking at particular features or their themes, cohesive elements or move structures. We can examine a text in isolation or as a sample from a single genre, time
period or writer, and we can collect a number of texts together as a corpus and
aggregate those features as representative of other texts.
Traditionally, research into texts followed views inherited from structuralism and implicit in the Transformational Grammar of Noam Chomsky. Texts
were seen as langue, or a demonstration of the writers knowledge of forms and
grammatical rules rather than a empts to communicate, and methods were the
means of revealing principles of writing independent of any actual contexts or
users. From this perspective, writing improvement is measured by counting
increases in features seen as important to successful writing and calculating the
syntactic complexity of texts by counting the number of words or clauses per
T-unit and the number of T-units per sentence. There is, however, li le evidence
to show that syntactic complexity or grammatical accuracy are either the
principal features of writing development or the best measures of good writing.
Essentially, viewing texts in this way ignores their role as communicative acts
and how they function as a writers response to a particular communicative
se ing. Because all texts include what writers suppose their readers will know,
and how they will use the text, no text can be fully explicit or universally
appropriate. Rather, they need to balance what needs to be said against what
can be assumed.
Writer-Oriented Research
This emphasizes the actions of writers rather than the features of texts.
Champions of this approach believe that writing constitutes a process, or at
least a complex of activities, from which all writing emerges and that this is
generalizable across contexts of writing. Interest here is on what good writers
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do when they write, principally so that these strategies can be taught to students.
Early work assumed that writing is more of a problem-solving activity than an
act of communication and drew on the tools and models of cognitive psychology and artificial intelligence to reveal how people engage in a writing task to
create and revise personal meanings. More recent work has given greater
emphasis to the actual performance of writing in a particular context, exploring
what Nystrand (1987) calls the situation of expression, to investigate the personal
and social histories of individual writers as they write in specific contexts.
The goal is to describe the influence of this context on the ways writers
represent their purposes in the kind of writing that is produced. As Prior (1998,
p. xi) observes:
Actually writing happens in moments that are richly equipped with tools
(material and semiotic) and populated with others (past present, and
future). When seen as situated activity, writing does not stand alone as the
discrete act of a writer, but emerges as a confluence of many streams of
activity: reading, talking, observing, acting, making, thinking, and feeling
as well as transcribing words on paper.
By using detailed observations of acts of writing, participant interviews, analyses of surrounding practices, and other techniques, researchers seek to develop
more complete accounts of local writing contexts.
A range of methods have been employed to explore and elaborate the composing process, moving beyond text analysis to the qualitative methods of the
human and social sciences. Case study research has been particularly productive, focusing on natural scenes rather than on experimental environments, and
o en seeking to describe writing from an emic perspective, privileging the views
of insiders or those participating in a situation. These studies have thus made
considerable use of think aloud protocols, or writers verbal reports while
composing (e.g., Smagorinsky 1994), retrospective interviews (e.g., Nelson and
Carson 1998) and task observation (e.g., Bosher 1998), sometimes involving
keystroke recording during composing (e.g., Sullivan and Lindgren 2006). O en
research is longitudinal, following students over an extended period (e.g.,
F. Hyland 1998) and uses multiple techniques which may include recall protocols, and analyses of several dra s.
However, while these descriptions give significant a ention to the experiences of writers and to their understandings of the local features of the context
they deal with as they write, concentrating on the local se ing fails to capture
the culture and event within which the action is embedded and which their
writing must invoke. Texts do not function communicatively at the time they
are composed but when they are read, as they anticipate particular readers and
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the responses of those readers to what is wri en. Texts evoke a social milieu
which intrudes upon the writer and activates specific responses to recurring
tasks and as a result most current writing research takes a more reader-oriented
view to explore the ways writers see their audience and engage in cultural
contexts.
Reader-Oriented Research
This looks beyond individual writers and the surface structures of products to
see texts as examples of discourse, or language in use. Discourse approaches
recognize that texts are always a response to a particular communicative se ing
and seek to reveal the purposes and functions which linguistic forms serve in
texts. Here texts are not isolated examples of competence but the concrete
expressions of social purposes, intended for particular audiences. The writer is
seen as having certain goals and intentions, certain relationships to his or her
readers, and certain information to convey, and the forms a text takes are
resources used to accomplish these. Writing is therefore seen as mediated by
the institutions and cultures in which it occurs and every text is embedded in
wider social practices which carry assumptions about writer-reader relationships and how these should be structured. These factors draw the analyst into
a wider paradigm which locates texts in a world of communicative purposes,
institutional power and social action, identifying the ways that texts actually
work as communication.
One way writers are able to construct an audience is by drawing on their
own knowledge of other texts and by exploiting readers abilities to recognize
intertextuality between texts. This view owes its origins to Bakhtins (1986) view
that language is fundamentally dialogic, a conversation between writer and
reader is an ongoing activity. Writing reflects traces of its social uses because it
is multiply linked and aligned with other texts upon which it builds and which
it anticipates. Each u erance refutes, arms, supplements, and relies on the
others, presupposes them to be known and somehow takes them into account
(Ibid., p. 91). A key idea here is that of genre, a term for grouping texts together
and referring to the repertoire of linguistic responses writers are able to call
on to communicate in familiar situations. Genre reminds us that when we write
we follow conventions for organizing messages because we want our readers
to recognize our purposes. Research into genres therefore seeks to show how
language forms work as resources for accomplishing goals, describing the
stages which help writers to set out their thoughts in ways readers can easily
follow and identifying salient features of texts which allow them to engage
eectively with their readers.
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An Overview of Methods
While I have divided methods up according to the paradigms with which they
are mainly associated, much writing research combines several methods, o en
both quantitative and qualitative, to gain a more complete picture of a complex
reality. In fact, the concept of triangulation, or the use of multiple sources of data,
or approaches, can bring greater plausibility to the interpretation of results.
It obviously makes sense to view research pragmatically, adopting whatever
tools seem most eective and a researcher may, for example, gather student
opinions about their writing practices through a questionnaire and supplement
this with interview or diary data, and with the dra s of their essays, mixing
methods to increase the validity of the eventual findings.
Another feature of writing research is that it tends to favour data gathered in
naturalistic rather than controlled conditions. This is not to say that methods
that elicit data through questionnaires, structured interviews or experiments are
not employed or that they have nothing to tell us about writing. It is simply that
there has been a strong preference for collecting data in authentic circumstances
not specifically set up for the research, such as via classroom observations or
analyses of naturally occurring texts. The main methods for researching writing
are summarized in Figure 14.1 (Hyland 2003) and discussed briefly below.
Questionnaires:
Interviews:
Verbal reports:
Written reports:
Observation:
Texts:
Case studies:
Figure 14.1 Main data collection methods for researching writing (Hyland 2003,
p. 253)
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slow task progress or distort the process being reported on. But despite
these criticisms, the method has been widely used, partly because the alternative is to deduce cognitive processes solely from subjects behaviour, and this
would obviously be far less reliable. Think aloud techniques have been
extremely productive in revealing the strategies writers use when composing,
particularly what students do when planning and revising texts. In one study,
for example, de Larios et al. (1999) used the method to examine what students
did when they were blocked by a language problem or wanted to express
a dierent meaning, tracing the pa erns they used in searching for an alternative syntactic plan.
Diaries oer an alternative way of gaining introspective data. These are
first-person accounts of a language-using experience, documented through
regular entries in a journal and then analysed for recurring pa erns or
significant events. Diarists can be asked to produce narrative entries which
freely introspect on their learning or writing experiences, or be set guidelines to
restrict the issues addressed. These can be in the form of detailed points to note
(write about what you found most/least interesting about this class) or a loose
framework for response (note all the work you did to complete this task).
Alternatively, researchers may ask diarists to concentrate only on critical
incidents of personal significance or to simply record dates and times of
writing. While some diarists may resent the time and intrusion involved,
diaries provide a rich source of reflective data which can reveal social and
psychological processes dicult to collect in other ways. Thus Nelson (1993)
used diaries to discover how her students went about writing a research paper,
following their trail through the library, how they evaluated sources and took
notes, the conversations they had with others, decisions they made, and so on.
This approach provided a rich account of writers reflections, suggesting why
they acted as they did and how they saw contextual influences.
Observations
While elicitation and introspective methods provide reports of what people say
they think and do, observation methods oer actual evidence of it by systematic
documentation of participants engaged in writing and learning to write. They
are based on conscious noticing and precise recording of actions as a way of
seeing these actions in a new light. Once again there are degrees of structure the
researcher can impose on the data, from simply checking pre-defined boxes at
fixed intervals or every time a type of behaviour occurs, to writing a full narrative of events. The most highly structured observations employ a prior coding
scheme to highlight significant events from the mass of data that taped or live
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observation can produce (see Hyland 2003 for examples). All observation will
necessarily privilege some behaviours and neglect others, as we only record
what we think is important, but while a clear structure is easier to apply and
yields more manageable data, such pre-selection may ignore relevant behaviour that wasnt predicted.
Observation is o en combined with other methods, as in Cami as
(1993) three-year study of vernacular writing among adolescents. She observed
and interviewed writers of dierent races and genders between the ages
of 14 and 18 outside school, in free school time when they clustered in groups
to talk and write, and in writing surreptitiously in class. She found that
these students produced a wide variety of genres and that when writing was
free of school constraints it generated considerable interest and much oral
sharing.
Text Data
Finally, a major source of data for writing research is writing itself: the use of
texts as objects of study. While texts can be approached in a variety of ways,
most research now seeks to discover how people use language in specific contexts. The main approaches to studying wri en texts are currently genre and
corpus analyses.
Genre Analysis
This embraces a range of tools and a itudes to texts, from detailed qualitative
analyses of a single text to more quantitative counts of language features.
Sometimes researchers work with a single text, either because it is inherently
interesting or because it seems representative of a larger set of texts or particular genre. A major policy speech, a newspaper editorial or an important
scientific article can oer insights into forms of persuasion, particular syntactic
or lexical choices, or the views of text writers. More generally, a sample essay
may shed light on students uses of particular forms or the assumptions underlying dierent choices. Bhatia (1993) suggests some basic steps for conducting
a genre analysis which emphasize the importance of locating texts in their
contexts as presented in Figure 14.2.
Such an approach forms a case study, but while this is a widely recognized
method, it raises questions about how far a single can be representative of a
genre. Representativeness is strengthened if several texts are analysed, and
corpus analyses, drawing on evidence from large databases of electronically
encoded texts, are the main way of achieving this.
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1 Select a text which seems representative of the genre you want to study.
2 Place the text in a situational context, i.e., use your background knowledge and text clues to guess where the
genre is used, by whom, and why it is written the way it is.
3 Compare the text with other similar texts to ensure that it broadly represents the genre.
4 Study the institutional context in which the genre is used (through site visits, interviews, manuals, etc.) to
better understand its conventions.
5 Select a focus for analysis (moves, lexis, cohesion, persuasion, etc.) and analyse it.
6 Check your analysis with a specialist informant to conrm your ndings and insights.
Figure 14.2 Steps in genre analysis (after Bhatia 1993, pp. 2234)
Corpus Analysis
A corpus is simply a collection of naturally occurring language samples
(o en consisting of millions of words) which represent a speakers experience
of language in some restricted domain, thereby providing a more solid basis for
genre descriptions. A corpus provides an alternative to intuition by oering
both a resource against which intuitions can be tested and a mechanism for
generating them. This enables analysts to depict what is usual in a genre, rather
than what is simply grammatically possible, and helps to suggest explanations
for why language is used as it is in particular contexts.
Corpus studies are therefore based on both qualitative and quantitative
methods, using evidence of frequency and association as starting points for interpretation. Frequency is based on the idea that if a word, string or grammatical
pa ern occurs regularly in a particular genre or subset of language, then we can
assume it is significant in how that genre is routinely constructed. Association
refers to the ways features associate with each other in collocational pa erns.
A concordance programme brings together all instances of a search word or
phrase in the corpus as a list of unconnected lines of text and so allows the
analyst to see regularities in its use that might otherwise be missed. In other
words, we can see instances of language use when we read these lines horizontally and evidence of system when we read them vertically, pointing to common
usage in this genre.
In a study of the acknowledgement sections from 240 masters and doctoral
dissertations, for example, I found a strong tendency to use the noun thanks in
preference to other expressions of gratitude (Hyland 2004). Sorting concordance lines on the word to the le of this search word revealed this noun was
modified by only three adjectives: special, sincere and deep with special making
up over two-thirds of all cases. Figure 14.3 is a screen shot from the programme
MonoConc Pro showing part of the results of this sorting.
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A Sample Study
To illustrate some of these ideas and to show what one approach to writing
research looks like in practice, the remainder of this chapter reports on a study
of Hong Kong undergraduates writing I conducted a few years ago (Hyland
2002). I will discuss the main stages under four headings: framing issues, selecting methods, collecting data and analysing data.
Framing the issue: The study emerged from a sense that my undergraduate
students had considerable problems constructing a credible representation of
themselves and their work in their research writing. They seemed reluctant to
claim an appropriate degree of authoritativeness in their texts and to get behind
their statements, making their work seem anonymous and disembodied.
I decided to pursue these impressions by investigating how these students used
authorial pronouns, framing the issue by relating the use of first person to rhetorical identity. This sees identity as less a phenomenon of private experience
than a need for aliation and recognition in particular social networks. When
we write in particular genres there is strong pressure to take on their forms and
represent ourselves in a way valued by that community. This does not mean
that writers simply slot into ready-made identities, but it limits individual
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Explanation involves selecting texts and features through the filter of our theories and research interests and si ing out the ways that writers interests, beliefs,
aliations, experiences, values and practices appear to influence their writing.
Because these are not things that can be directly observed, the researcher must
select from a repertoire of interpretations rather than hit on the truth, but by
grounding these interpretations in wri en and oral data we help to ensure that
they are not pure speculation either. Ultimately, all we can claim for our research
is that our findings are a plausible interpretation of some aspect of a given
context of communication.
References
Bakhtin, M. (1986), Speech Genres and Other Late Essays. Austin, TX: University of
Texas Press.
Bhatia, V. K. (1993), Analyzing Genre: Language Use in Professional Seings. London:
Longman.
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