10 - Chapter 5 PDF
10 - Chapter 5 PDF
CHAPTER - V
A Universal Story
(No One Writes to the Colonel)
No one writes to the Colonel is one of the finest short stories written
aging war hero who has spent the last 60 years waiting for a pension check
from the government while he and his wife struggle against poverty and
political oppression in their small town. Though the text is less than 100
novella, which is the title story, and eight other ones, which are dense with
resigned to utter hopelessness. After every story, the mood seems to get
memories and false hopes. In the title story, the colonel patiently waits for
his pension for a decade and a half. He keeps visiting the post office for
any letter from the government. They have nothing; they even pretend to
cook by boiling stones dupe the neighbors in finding out that they do not
have anything to eat. The story line was inspired from Garcia Marquez‟s
grandfather, a colonel who also never received any pension. It was also
boldly published shortly after the civil war in Colombia between the 1940s
and 1950s. The political turmoil going on in the country is reflected in this
In the last story, „Big Mama‟s Funeral‟, people clean up the garbage off
the streets right after Big Mama, an absolute burial power. This collection
will remind people to keep sweeping away any trash on the streets.
The story is set during the time of la violence in Colombia. Characters live
underground newspapers.
Marquez‟s novel, Evil Hour is notable for its portrayal of la violencia with
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La violence has been focused on many works of fiction. Many critics have
pointed out Evil Hour and No One Writes to the Colonel is in some
respects represents as a single novel. But both of them had the same
Marquez does portray the corrupt nature and the injustices of times like la
For him, the duty of the revolutionary writer is to write well, and the ideal
novel is one that moves its reader by its political and social content, and, at
the same time, by its power to penetrate reality and expose its other side.
flawed full- length novel, Evil hour. The materials took on life of their own
and became the author‟s first mature and realistic stories in big mama
funeral. At the same time the length allows for a larger and fuller town
subjects: fighting cook, military dictatorship, and the old couple‟s solitude
and hunger.
is remarkable for its formal and stylistic economy, which contrasts with the
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to Leaf Storm, the basic narrative ingredients of which it reprises and takes
events that had taken place in the national arena a full half- century ago,
the legacy of which weighs heavily on the community. Their moral and
existential dilemmas provide the main source of narrative interest from the
They are the eponymous and anonymous colonel and his wife, a
septuagenarian couple of survivors, who have been waiting for over half a
century for the state to pay the colonel the pension that is his due after the
fighting, on the losing side, in a civil war (the War of Thousand Days).
The preposterous amount of time that the colonel has been waiting for a
letter from the authorities indicates the absurdity of his situation. It also
his will, and drives him mindless with hunger; although times are hard the
authorities and hoping they would do something, but they remain the same
mysterious system that one cannot do anything about, but simply accept
that the terms are never clear or explicit. The colonel does the same. He
knows he fought in the war, he knows he submitted all the documents and
now it is only up to the state to find his file and grant his rights. Money is
important indeed, but the whole issue of getting that letter implies more
than that. It is about the colonel´s past, his sacrifices, putting his life into
danger for a cause that he believed in and fought for. It is a matter of pride.
He needs his country to recognize this officially and prove him that what
he did for his people was worthwhile. But the letter still does not come.
office waiting to see whether there will finally be something dropped into
his mailbox. The colonel will again return home, to his asthmatic wife to
tell her that if it was not meant to be on that day, then it might be next
Friday. Next Friday will be very likely to be the lucky one, because after
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having waited for so many years now the day when the letter comes is
definitely closer.
ambiguity. On one hand, the colonel, his wife and countless other citizens
suffer hardship, loss and repression, and endure a political and nature
climate that exacts a heavy mental and physical toll. In Biblical terms that
are echoed in the texts itself, they live in a fallen world without prospect of
justice or redemption. On the other hand, the family and most of the
who shot Augustin (son of Colonel) and other members of the security
forces) feed off the will and example of Augustin, who caters to their
spiritual and political hunger. In the midst of hardship, people find an inner
strength that enables them to resist and survive. In Biblical terms, they
novella, which speaks in equal measure about life and death, corruption
and transcendence, as forces that frame and define the very essence of the
human condition.
and lonely couple, Colonel and his wife presumably in the same age. Their
son, murdered by the military nine months earlier, had been their sole
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support- hence her wistful remark, “we are the orphans of our son” (13).
With the colonel‟s copartisans, all either exiled or dead (some violently),
little conveyed on both his isolation- the original actually signifies “the
colonel has nobody to write him”- and his empty pockets. Of course the
item of the mail most awaited by the colonel is the fabled notice of a
government pension, five decades overdue and now quite urgent. On four
different Fridays one can see him heading down with high expectations to
the river port or the post office, only to have his hopes dashed by a terse
“Nothing for the colonel” (25). His only consolations are the friendly
mystique in No One Writes to the Colonel, but felt that he had failed again.
The town he created in his novella had no name. He put the manuscript
Despite his personal frustration with the manuscripts, one can trace
adventurer, and author of The Sun Also and For Whom the Bell Tolls.
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In 1961, when the novel was first published, the story was seen in
this light, that it was read on its most unmistakable level. More recently,
critics such as Peter Earle and Garciela Maturo have duly noted the
Marquez‟s novella, recognizing, how this author always delivers more and
mere appearances. Earle notes that at least three features are instrumental
illusion” 2) there is a dialectic between desire and death housed within the
concludes at Christmas.
caring for one‟s neighbor and the justice of poverty are given form. Two of
the three Christian elements he finds in the novel are of interest for the
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discussion: the idea of a corrupt and fallen world and the messiah figure
One Writes to the Colonel (13), is associated with the hopeless waiting for
Buendia suggests that the death of the Liberals cause the War of a
this light, the motifs of the Messiah and martyrdom, death and
resistance, hope and renewal: exactly those impulses and aspiration that
stir in the minds of the citizens of the town (a town which is not
Mancondo) on the day that it welcomes the first circus to visit in ten years.
the Colonel, Rene Prieto has viewed the colonel‟s expletive as providing a
has „fungus and poisons lilies taking root in his gut‟, the narrative pays
body as the locus of suffering. In addition to this, the body is where the
organically susceptible and in the same plane as the cock and other animals
that are fore grounded in the novel. At the same time, his defiant, one-
word shit on the grounds that it was unnecessary swearing. His own
recourse to the very same word at the close is a sign of frustration and of
determined to persevere and survive. The expletive that he utters at the end
and relatively by the rooster, since all signs converge on it, transforming it
exchange takes place between the absent subject of the writing indicated in
government pension.
It becomes the focus of the colonel‟s life. Its symbolism depicts the
is the talk of the town. The rooster is the sole hope of the colonel, the
doctor, the children, and everybody, except for the women. The colonel‟s
wife finds it ugly. To her it looks like a freak: “his head is too tiny for his
comment, “He‟s worth his weight in gold. He‟ll feed us for three
years”(46).
hope leads him to fight one more humiliating battle of having to wait for a
veteran‟s pension that never comes. Through the theme of corruption, the
novel also explores themes such as hope and despair, violence, the
country‟s people, and the theme of solitude. Garcia Marquez has portrayed
the corruption and violence that Columbia has undergone for two
generations from the civil wars of the nineteenth century right through to
the twentieth century. The old colonel and his wife, and those who are in
power represent the older generation. Augustine and his friends represent
The two final areas of the novel that requires comment are the first
„noncha lant‟ admission to his wife that he had been talking in his sleep
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with the duke of Marlborough. The narrative voice mimics that manner
when it reports that the colonel‟s wife seemed as if she had the power of
walking through the walls. But before twelve she had regained her bulk,
The second matter is the author‟s deep concern with the theme and
fortunes of America or the Americas, vis- vis Europe and other geo-
1987. For Jacques Gilard, this reference to current affairs signals not
and nations of the emerging Third World. Already present in some of the
journalism of the late 1940s, the post colonial sensibility will pervade in
secondly, the fact that the story is a rite of passage during which the
One Writes to the Colonel has the simple complexity of a gothic cathedral.
terms of the complex layering which spells out the message. Fortunately,
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all labyrinths have a centre and the novel is no exception. Not surprisingly,
the demons which appear in all works of fiction. Critics have concerned
themselves with the net result of Vargas Llosa‟s equation – the themes –
fighting cock, and the rain, and certain numbers are fundamental to the
development of this novel. They are pieces of the narrative puzzle but not,
as far as one can see, a central obsession from which the entire thematic
and obviousness do much to camouflage it, but it no way detracts the facts
Colonel.
more by forty years of bitterness (101). They are unable to make ends
meet, waiting for over fifteen years for a war pension which the man longs
for the recognition of his service. They have no money left, no provisions
and no guarantee for the future. Their son, Agustin, was shot nine months
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literature at the cockfights. His legacy to his parents is his fighting cock, a
sure winner at the fights scheduled for January. The problem is that,
having no resources, the couple will have to choose between feeding it and
feeding themselves.
The action begins simultaneously when the colonel takes the lid off
the coffee can and realizes that there was only one teaspoonful left. He
throws half of the boiling water down the drain and scrapes the inside of
the can with a knife, to get at the last coffee grounds mixed together with
rust from the can. This initial occupation with food and drink is only the
This novel comprises not one single ingredient but rather a kinship
fiction from in Evil Hour to One Hundred Years of Solitude. After all,
This thrust penetrates the novel from the first page, where the
poisonous mushrooms and lilies growing in his bowels. This same curse
reappears thirteen times throughout the tale. As had been noted by critics
gastritis.
hours in the privy, swatting ice, feeling that the flora of his viscera was
rotting and falling in pieces. The hero painfully learns that all was really a
section „Seven‟ after the colonel feels swallowed and rejected by his son‟s
Excrement becomes aliment. It is at this point that one can grasp the
From this theory, for example, one can observe that the oral phase is
instances of eating and drinking take place during the time the colonel
gentle, timid, wide-eyed, dreamy; unable to counter the wiles of the tricker
Don Sabas yet himself blessed with reservoirs of self- irony and belief that
are all but wondrous; peaceable, yet ultimately stubborn enough to say
“no” to the sale of the rooster, and then end up pronouncing the most
well as his excretory incapacities. His wife, similarly, is another for Gabo‟s
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gallery of shrewd, strong- willed, loyal women; She cuts his hair, suggests
ways of securing money, and indeed rather treats the colonel like a child.
Only in the bitter quarrel between them in the last pages will the colonel
takes a firm stand and rebel. Notwithstanding this tense and electrified
finale, the novel gives the reader one of the fullest and most loving
The first three chapters of the novella pay particular attention to the
colonel lawyers to better appeal for his veteran‟s pension. To carry the
narrative through to its dramatic end, the story of the rooster is added as a
parallel narration in the present and as a symbol of hope for both the
superficial or hurried reading may leave readers with the idea the whole
The fable begins as the Colonel lives with his wife, who suffers
from asthma, in a house in very poor conditions. Every day in the morning
Colonel used to pour the hot water in the house, to rescue his wife from the
cold weather. One morning when the people held a funeral, for which the
Colonel is preparing, his wife thought about the dead man. Dead man was
born in 1922, exactly a month after their son, who was born on April 7th.
Colonel and his wife are living as Orphan parents. She continuously thinks
of the dead man. October is the horrible month for Burial because of the
discomfort occurred for the couple. Funeral is the special event for the
people in the town because of natural death in the town after a long period.
The funeral procession hadn‟t come out of church yet. In that crowd, one
of them saw the colonel. He asked Colonel to sit under the umbrella.
Colonel said thanks! But he didn‟t accept the invitation. Colonel directly
went to the house to convey his condolences to the mother of the dead
man. The crowd had pushed him to the front, as Don Saba, the god father
of his dead son silently told in his ears „careful colonel‟. He is the only
continued to live in the country. The colonel and his friend Saba walked
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silently under the umbrella. They continuously talked about the situation in
apparent source of income, the only hope is the profit expected from
rooster fight that Colonel has been keeping his home for several months.
Colonel) was shot at the cock fight, when he is distributing the Clandestine
Literature. His wife worried about the lives of the people in the town
doctor, which was also in the Office, provided the newspaper, that has
been banned. He received the packet of news papers. He put the pamphlets
man who read the names in an alphabetical order. He asked him whether
he got the letter from the Government. Colonel is eligible for the pension
for his service in the civil war. Postman says that he didn‟t receive the
manner and says to the Postman, “No One Writes to Me” ( ). They
Colonel asked the doctor about the news in the paper. Doctor gave him few
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news papers to the colonel. The Colonel‟s wife counted twelve bells. She
(13) She said this in the context of father Angel who ranged the twelve
bells instead of seven bells for the censor movie classification. Movies are
very bad for everybody, because there is no morality in the film except
vulgarity.
George R. Murray in his argument says that, 1950‟s or 1956 are the
the 1930‟s and 1940‟s. In the following discussions of Colonel and his
wife, it is revealed that for many years, every week, Colonel expects to
receive a letter for pension of veteran by Colombian civil war of the wars
later, the Colonel and his wife discuss a little about what he should do with
the little money that is left, convincing her to buy corn to feed the rooster.
Colonel went to meet the friends of his son Augustin companions. Alvaro,
activities.
When Agustin was killed, he left behind his champion fighting cock,
innumerable humiliations in order not to have to sell the bird, which for
him and his son‟s friends becomes a symbol of dignity and resistance, as
medical treatment, disagrees with him and repeatedly urges him to sell the
rooster. The colonel still resists till the end. He bets with his wife that he
will sell the clock for forty pesos. Colonel‟s wife lost her patience for the
technique. Its narrative exposes a corrupt town and its institutions. The
process which conflates the private and the public substitutes the missing
organic link between domestic and political orders, the state and the
left by his murdered son, besides the sewing machine whose sale is the
“orphaned” couple‟s only source of income for nine months. The animal is
finally obtain his overdue compensation. The cock finally returns into a
ugly animal whose head is disproportionately small for his legs. Vargas
Llosa points out that Sabas too is an asymbolic reader, because he can only
Don Sabas is not identified with the town, he does not feel
economies within the same body politic. The economy based on the
against impossible odds. He portrays solitude at its best in this most lyrical
punctuated plot and its apt conclusion. Gerald Martin in The Cambridge