Sophia Keith Dela Cruz Ong
Mrs. Scharf
APEL
2020 May 17
Santa Ana Winds Rhetorical Analysis Final Revision
Typically occurring between the months of October and March, dry and often hot winds
blow through Southern California toward the coast. Such winds are named “Santa Ana winds”
derived from the Santa Ana Canyons in Orange County, where the winds occur intensely. The
winds can often break tree limbs, send unsecured debris flying into windows, raise clouds of dust
and cause wildfires to ignite and spread rapidly. However, these are only some of the things that
are caused by the winds. In Joan Didion’s essay, “Los Angeles Notebook”, she provides a first
hand account on what it’s like to live and survive through the dreaded Santa Ana winds and why
so many people are affected by it through the use of imagery and simile.
In the beginning of the passage, Joan Didion visualizes the events that will soon happen
once the winds start to blow. In a very specific and detailed explanation, Didion illustrates the
Santa Ana winds, calling it “a hot wind from the northeast” that goes down the Cajon and
Gorgonio Passes and blows up “sandstorms out along Route 66”. By giving such an image, she
was able to give her audience an idea on what the Santa Ana winds feel like and why they are
different from regular winds that most experience. She then goes on and explains the eerie
feeling everyone in the neighborhood has: tension. “To live with the Santa Ana is to accept,
consciously or unconsciously, a deeply mechanistic view of human behavior.” she states. Didion
then lists some events that happen when the winds come; like when her neighbor’s husband
roams around with a machete, it makes the people affected by it somehow different. Once the
winds start to blow, “Anything can happen...That was the kind of wind it was” she said. Given
all of these details, Didion gives her audience a peek on how the winds affect not only her but the
other residents as well.
Joan Didion goes on and provides some other examples of winds from other countries to
use as comparison, also known as simile. Didion went on and said that the Santa Ana is a foehn
wind, “like the foehn of Austria and Switzerland and the 40 khamsin of Israel.” she states,
“perhaps the best known of which are the mistral of France and the Mediterranean sirocco”. By
listing some of the known foehns or winds, Didion gives her audience an idea on what kind of
winds the Santa Ana winds are. After doing so, she then continues and explains how foehns
affect people. Some examples of said effects are headaches, nausea, and allergies about
“nervousness [or] depression”. Not only that, but in worst cases like in the country of
Switzerland, “the suicide rate goes up during the foehn, and in the courts of some Swiss cantons
the wind is considered a mitigating circumstance for crime.” Clearly proving that Foehns like
Santa Ana affect their residents anatomically. Providing such information to her audience,
Didion fully explains why such behaviors that were mentioned earlier in the passage happen.
This being said, the Santa Ana winds clearly affect its residents terribly and result in some of the
events that Didion mentioned in the beginning.
All in all, Joan Didion accurately described and compared the Santa Ana winds to the
extent of persuading her audience that the Santa Ana winds affect them terribly and why she
thinks it happens. By describing her surroundings in detail, Didion was able to give her audience
a picture and a view of what it’s like when they go through the winds. Lastly, by describing that
the Santa Ana winds are foehns and what foehns are, she was able to smoothly introduce the idea
of what might have caused all the strange behaviour of her neighbors during the winds.