Dissertation Review 1 Comments
Dissertation Review 1 Comments
• Topic seems to lack clarity with usage of lots of terminologies / aspects considered .
• Consider population projection at 2031 - refer URDPFI guidelines -focus on recreation/open
1 AR.DEVIKA HEMALATHA DEVI
GOPIKA MOHAN spaces . PROCEED
• Compare projects proposed ( Smart City Projects ) with recreation spaces needed for
projected population .
• A Commentary ( either appreciation or criticism ) of the Identified Smart City projects after
comparision with Master Plan Recommendations - could be the Conclusion of the study .
• The study is most likely become a very literature oriented study based on a lot of well
researched and proven documents already available.
7 AR.LEVIN PRABHU J GAOURI KRISHNA • Indoor plantscaping in offices.Since a lot os study has already been done she needs to take PROCEED
it another higher level especially in this pandemic scenario
AR.LEVIN PRABHU J
• Interesting topic .
8 SANJUNA SUNIL • Would most likely be literature review based . PROCEED
• Methodolgy of the study needs more clarity .
• Topic - broad and unrealistic within a span of 3-4 months allotted for dissertation
• Narrowing down to topics within the aspects of resilience, working waterfronts etc can be
ANANTHA PADMANABHAN explored . PROCEED
• Suggested to focus on Resilience planning in alleppey
10 AR.SHINANA
SANGEETH S RAJAN REJECTED
Rejected - Absolutely No work Submitted .
• Topic is interesting.
• Student appears to have a clarity on what is the intended outcome
AFROOZA AZIZ M P • Methodlogy needs better clarity PROCEED
• Choice of case studies (live) could be better
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• Suggested to continue the dissertation from already existing studies.( Plastic brick)
SANANDHULAL FRANC • Identify the gaps/ shortfalls and continue study. PROCEED
• Making a brick prototype with modification will require good amount of technical support.
• The possibility of that needs to be thouroughly explored before proceeding with the study
• How exactly the student proposes to undertake the study is not clear since the topic appear
very broad and beyond the scope of a UG student .
• Alternative suggested - how CRZ rules have evolved over years .
• Assessing its impact on the developments and the natural damages that has occured at
Shangumugham .
BHAGYA BALAKRISHNAN • Reframe to coastal issues and study the damages or changes that has happened using PROCEED
google maps etc.
• SavingShanghumugham beach would be a very technical job and more cicvilengg oriented
• Discussion with the guide can help narrow down on the study area.
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Topic is very broad and vague.
ANAJ S LOWRENCE • What exactly the student proposes to do is not clear to the student . REJECTED
• Immediate detailed discussion with the guide is required to finalize topic
• Rather than focusing on multiple heading, it would be better if the student just concentrates
on child friendly design intiatives in railway stations.
• Why specifically the choice of railway station needs to justified as part of the study
MALU P intorduction though. PROCEED
• Can reframe her aim to child friendly initiatives in Railway stations.
• Can study on architectural spaces in stations to ensure natural survilleance etc
NEHA RAJ ASHA Nocturnal Terrain-Can study good examples and do a research on some architectural PROCEED
parameters which can be incorporated in urban areas promoting night life
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SANDRA MARY ANTONY Child friendly cities-Need to narrow down and have a clear focus PROCEED
REBECCA RAHIM Active living architecture-Can focus on a particular typology and research PROCEED
LIGY ANTONY War and architecture-Can include terrorism ect.Do a study on what type of buildings are PROCEED
targeted and what is the architectural impact before and after
14 AR.ARUN RAJ K I AKHIL RAJ Wabisabi-To reframe aim to relate this concept with interior spaces rather than doing it as a PROCEED
whole
CHRIS JOSEPH furniture and preschool children-Title to be reframed.To understand psychology, furniture and PROCEED
preschool children .
JOSHWA SOLOMON Vasthu shasthra-To select the right target group for questionnaire survey and conclude if it is PROCEED
logical or not.Can even focus on a particular typology of buildings too
15 AR.ANKUR BARDHAN
RIYA AJUMON To reframe the topic to understanding different concepts used in interiors and reach PROCEED
conclusions as to how certain concepts can be adopted in a particular context
ASWATH M.S Architecture modeling-To study on how modeling is done,its potentials etc PROCEED
16 AR VIVEK . V ABHIRAM S DEV Sports facilities-To rework on the topic at the earliest
REWORK
ALEENA YESUDAS The scope of the topic is too wide. Focus on one of the aim.Methodology has no clarity. PROCEED
1 AR. PRASEEN C.M. Scope of the topic has to be narrowed down. Stick to architectural or planning component .
GAYATHRI B.S PROCEED
Methodology has no clarity
SOUPARNIKA B. Contributing element to the reserach work is very limited. Hence reframe the topic REWORK
Topic needs more clarity. Origami as a construction technique is fine. But paper as a
SANGEETH SANIL PROCEED
construction material has to be changed
2 AR. RISHIE JOHN KURIEN ABHIJITH KRISHNAN D K Refocus the topic avoiding dead scrapers PROCEED
Focus on one of the research question only and study. Topic needs more clarity . More focus
KARISHMA BINOY PROCEED
on dance form
Topic needs more clarity and lessen the scope of study. Selected area of study is too wide.
FATIMA J REWORK
No clarity in the methodology.
NITHIN SUNIL Narrow down the scope of study to one of the objectives taken PROCEED
AJNA JAISON Topic needs more clarity. Needs to add more research elements in the dissertation topic PROCEED
Methodology developed needs more clarity and testing the material to understand its
4 AR. GRACE ELIZABETH ANAKHA JAYANTHI R .S REWORK
properties wont be possible.
NIBIN THAMPY Topic finalized. Narrow down to a particular user group PROCEED
EBY SOLLY Narrow down the study to one settlement by documenting them. PROCEED
RINAZ N.Md Refocus the topic based on the paramters developed and analyse known biophilic buildings PROCEED
5 AR. AMALA SALLY
Topic needs more clarity.Topic has been repeated a several times . Hence refocus the study
SIKHA.S.BIJAY to mapping out the urban voids in the city in trivandrum. Characteristics features of urban PROCEED
void can be systematically studied
B.S.ADARSH It is not viable to measure efficiency in a short span of four months. REWORK
Topic needs more clarity.Relevant topic but no architectural component in the topic.
6 AR. SUNAINA MARIAM JOHN ANNA GRACE BENNY PROCEED
Repharase the topic to any architecctural component and proceed.
Its a repeated topic since the senior batches. Collecting data might arise to be a issue within
NEERAJA REWORK
the time frame.
GOPIKA THILAK Narrow the scope of study to one objective and proceed. PROCEED
7 AR.MATHEW GEORGE NITIN C. GEORGE Repititive topic over the years. Scope of study needs to be narrowed down. REWORK
SHILPA THOMAS Topic needs to be streamlined down to a housing project or institutional project alone. PROCEED
ANAGHA J KUMAR Study area is very narrow hence widen the scope of study. REWORK
Rephrase the title, aim and objective. Narrow down to a specific region, and analyze. Too
EMIMA GRITY THOMAS many subjective aspects if religion is chosen hence needs to narrow down to a specific PROCEED
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context . Procced without overlap of topic with Kripa
Narrow done to one objective. Study kinetic buidings in different context and do
KAVYA .S PROCEED
comparitive study
RAIHANA S Narrow down the topic to any particular context and proceed with study PROCEED
9 AR.GAOUTHAM S Md.SAFUVAN Reframe the topic and study more gender related spaces if sticking to the same topic. REWORK
FABI FAISEL Topic requires talking to architects using collage based mostly abroad. Reframe the topic REWORK
Narrow down the study to a region or any old age home with any particular charater.
ADILA KHALEEL PROCEED
Analyse old age homes to find out if they are architecturaly suitable or not .
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AJISH YONAS Topic is too generic. REJECTED
ANILA K.R Reframe the topic to studying the layout of residential homes in coastal region. REWORK
SUHAIL AHMED F Need to narrow down the topic to some particular typology of hospital and proceed. REWORK
11 AR.LAKSHMI RAJ
KUMAR SURRAJ Reframe the topic and a comparitive study is to be taken up. PROCEED
Md.ABDULLA Reframe the topic and concise it to some particular region or context. PROCEED
Too vast objectives. Focus on one research queation . Pick an agrahram in trivandrum not in
12 PROF. BABY PAUL K. GOPIKA J. Fort area, probably in Karamana side where the analysis is not done Heritage, charateristics PROCEED
etc can the studied . Comparittive study with Kalpathy agrahram can be done
13 AR. SUJA KUMARI L. KRIPA ANNA CHERIAN Proceed without overlap of topic with Emima PROCEED
Scope of study is too wide . Either change topic or narrow the topic to one settlement in any
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city.
15 AR. GANGA KRISHNAN ABHIRAMI A R Study area is very generic and broad . Narrow down the topic and reframe the topic REWORK