Ethiopian Technical University
Faculty of Mechanical Technology-department of Manufacturing
                         Technology
       Technology Research Methodology (MAT510A)
                      Assignment - Two
               By: Bizuayehu Tadesse Azene
                ID.No. MTR/489/13 Section 1
        Submitted To Instructor: Dr. Sujit Singh (PhD)
                                                         June 2021
                                            Addis Ababa Ethiop
Acknowledgment
I would like to express sincere and special thanks to my instructor Sujit Singh Dr (PhD) for his
interested and critical question. I am review different recourses to know how to prepare evaluation
checklist so that its updates my knowledge, skill and aptitudes.
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Contents
Acknowledgment ............................................................................................................................................ I
The Selected Tittle To Evaluate ―Very Good‖ And ―Poor‖ Research Papers ................................................. 1
RESEARCH EVALUATION CHECKLIST 1 ................................................................................................ 2
RESEARCH EVALUATION CHECKLIST 2 ................................................................................................ 5
Conclusion: Using From Evaluation Checklists 1And 2 ................................................................................. 8
   Evaluation Summery for Paper of Effects of Processing Parameters on Wire Arc Additive Manufactured
   Inconel® 718 ............................................................................................................................................... 8
   Evaluation Summery for Paper of Recent Advances in the Prediction of Weld Residual Stress and
   Distortion — Part 1 ...................................................................................................................................... 9
Reference ....................................................................................................................................................... 10
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The Selected Tittle To Evaluate “Very Good” And “Poor”
                     Research Papers
    1. Effects of Processing Parameters on Wire Arc Additive
                   Manufactured Inconel® 718
          BY F. HEJRIPOUR AND D. K. AIDUN
WELDING JOURNAL / MARCH 2021, VOL. 100 Page 93-s
                     Published 03/2021
   https://doi.org/10.29391/2021.100.008Layout_Hejripour
2. Recent Advances in the Prediction of Weld Residual Stress and
                       Distortion — Part 1
                       By Y. P. Yang
   WELDING JOURNAL / MAY 2021, VOL.100 P 152-s
                     Published 05/2021
           https://doi.org/10.29391/2021.100.013
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                         RESEARCH EVALUATION CHECKLIST 1
       Tittle of Evaluation Paper: - Effects of Processing Parameters on Wire Arc Additive Manufactured
       Inconel® 718
No     ESSENTIAL COMPONENTS                                        SATISFACTORY      UNSATISFACTORY
                                                                         /YES              / NO
1.                           The Title
1.1    Title is sufficiently clear and concise to facilitate         
       indexing
1.2    Title identifies what was evaluated                           
1.3    Author(s)' names and affiliations are identified              
2.                        The Abstract
2.1.   Abstract is clearly and concisely written and                 
       includes purpose, methods, results, and
       conclusions.
2.2    Summarizes the whole experiment in one                                           
       paragraph.
2.3
2.4
3.                     The Introduction
3.1     Provides a context for the research.                         
3.2     Synthesizes information from the literature tracing          
        the development of knowledge of the problem and
        summarizes its present state.
3.3     Identifies gaps and inadequacies of current                  
        knowledge.
3.4     States the hypotheses as statements that can be              
        supported or refuted, and the prediction.
3.5     Briefly presents the approach used in the research.          
3.6     Excludes background information not directly                 
        related to the problem.
4.     The Materials and Methods
                                                               2
4.1   Research design and rationale, population studied,          
      sampling method, data collection, data analysis.
4.2   Completely, accurately and precisely presents an        
      exact process description used in the research in
      paragraph form
4.3    Provides enough details of the experimental            
       procedure to allow someone else to replicate the
       experiment.
5.                   The Results section
5.1   Results section that includes pertinent tables or       
      graphs and that are responsive to research
      questions(s) and methods used.
5.2    Presents the data I obtained. (NB. Report your         
       data even if it is contrary to the hypotheses or
       expectations.)
5.3    Summarizes the data using means,                       
       frequency tables, percentages, or other
       descriptive statistics. Figures/tables/graphs
       are used if they enhance clarity of
       presentation of information.
5.4    Makes a reference to the relevant self-                
       explanatory figures/table/ graphs in the text
5.5    Has captions above tables but below                    
       figures/graphs
5.6    Does not contain the same data presented twice in      
       different figures/tables/graphs.
5.7    Does not interpret the data.
6.                      The Discussion
6.1   Critical analysis and interpretation of findings,       
      including consideration of strengths and limitations
      of research design and methods
6.2   Starts with 1-2 sentences summarizing the overall       
      trend of the findings.
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6.3   Discussion section includes a critical, insightful,             
      well-reasoned and thorough review of findings,
      interpretation of principal findings in relation to
      prior   research,    discussion    of   methodological
      weaknesses and limitations of the study, as well as
      strengths, and significance of study.
7.                      The Conclusion
7.1   Conclusions (either as separate section or merged               
      with Discussion section as appropriate for the
      specified journal) are supported by data and include
      recommendations for future research.
8.                 The References Section
8.1   Contains accurate documentation of sources used.                
8.2   Follows convention of documentation of the field                
      consistently.
9     The Overall Quality of Presentation                             
9.1   The manuscript is well-organized, attractively                  
      presented with grammar and spelling that is
      consistently correct
      Evaluator Name -----------------------------------Sign----------------------Date----------------------------
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                         RESEARCH EVALUATION CHECKLIST 2
       Recent Advances in the Prediction of Weld Residual Stress and Distortion — Part 1
No     ESSENTIAL COMPONENTS                                        SATISFACTORY     UNSATISFACTORY
                                                                         /YES             / NO
1                            The Title
1.1    Title is sufficiently clear and concise to facilitate         
       indexing
1.2    Title identifies what was evaluated                           
1.3    Author(s)' names and affiliations are identified              
2                         The Abstract
2.1.   Abstract is clearly and concisely written and                                   
       includes purpose, methods, results, and
       conclusions.
2.2    Summarizes the whole experiment in one                        
       paragraph.
3                      The Introduction
3.1     Provides a context for the research.                         
3.2     Synthesizes information from the literature tracing          
        the development of knowledge of the problem and
        summarizes its present state.
3.3     Identifies gaps and inadequacies of current                  
        knowledge.
3.4     States the hypotheses as statements that can be              
        supported or refuted, and the prediction.
3.5     Briefly presents the approach used in the research.          
3.6     Excludes background information not directly                                   
        related to the problem.
4      The Materials and Methods
4.1    Research design and rationale, population studied,            
       sampling method, data collection, data analysis.
4.2    Completely, accurately and precisely presents an              
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      exact process description used in the research in
      paragraph form
4.3    Provides enough details of the experimental            
       procedure to allow someone else to replicate the
       experiment.
5                    The Results section
5.1   Results section that includes pertinent tables or           
      graphs and that are responsive to research
      questions(s) and methods used.
5.2    Presents the data I obtained. (NB. Report your             
       data even if it is contrary to the hypotheses or
       expectations.)
5.3    Summarizes the data using means,                           
       frequency tables, percentages, or other
       descriptive statistics. Figures/tables/graphs
       are used if they enhance clarity of
       presentation of information.
5.4    Makes a reference to the relevant self-                    
       explanatory figures/table/ graphs in the text
5.5    Has captions above tables but below                        
       figures/graphs
5.6    Does not contain the same data presented twice in          
       different figures/tables/graphs.
5.7    Does not interpret the data.
6                       The Discussion
6.1   Critical analysis and interpretation of findings,           
      including consideration of strengths and limitations
      of research design and methods
6.2   Starts with 1-2 sentences summarizing the overall           
      trend of the findings.
6.3   Discussion section includes a critical, insightful,         
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      well-reasoned and thorough review of findings,
      interpretation of principal findings in relation to
      prior   research,    discussion    of   methodological
      weaknesses and limitations of the study, as well as
      strengths, and significance of study.
7                       The Conclusion
7.1   Conclusions (either as separate section or merged               
      with Discussion section as appropriate for the
      specified journal) are supported by data and include
      recommendations for future research.
8                  The References Section
8.1   Contains accurate documentation of sources used.                
8.2   Follows convention of documentation of the field                
      consistently.
9     The Overall Quality of Presentation                             
9.1   The manuscript is well-organized, attractively                  
      presented with grammar and spelling that is
      consistently correct
      Evaluator Name -----------------------------------Sign----------------------Date----------------------------
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           Conclusion: Using From Evaluation Checklists 1And 2
      Evaluation Summery for Paper of Effects of Processing Parameters on
                     Wire Arc Additive Manufactured Inconel® 718
1.   Abstract is clearly and concisely written and includes purpose, methods, results, and
     conclusions.
2.   Introduction/background section that includes well-written description and critique of
     pertinent literature, rationale for study, and research question(s).
3.   Methods section that includes concise, clear and appropriate description of population
     studied, research design, sampling method, data collection technique and data analysis.
4.   Results section that includes pertinent tables or graphs and that are responsive to research
     questions(s) and methods used.
5.   Discussion section includes a critical, insightful, well- reasoned and thorough review of
     findings, interpretation of principal findings in relation to prior research, discussion of
     methodological weaknesses and limitations of the study, as well as strengths, and
     significance of study.
6.   Conclusions (either as separate section or merged with Discussion section as appropriate
     for the specified journal) are supported by data and include recommendations for future
     research.
7.   References are sufficient in breadth and depth for topic and consistent and correct in
     format according to journal specifications.
8.   The manuscript is well-organized, attractively presented with grammar and spelling that is
     consistently correct.
     But
     Not summarizes the whole experiment in one paragraph.
     Summarizes the pertinent details in an imprecise or inaccurate manner.
     From the above conclusion the paper effects of processing parameters on wire arc
     additive manufactured Inconel ® 718 is ‘Very Good’ Research Papers
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     1.1 Evaluation Summery for Paper of Recent Advances in the Prediction of
                     Weld Residual Stress and Distortion — Part 1
  1) Abstract is clearly and concisely written and includes purpose, methods, results, and
      conclusions.
  2) Introduction/background section that includes well-written description and critique of pertinent
      literature, rationale for study, and research question(s).
  3) Methods section that includes concise, clear and appropriate description of population studied,
      research design, sampling method, data collection technique and data analysis.
  4) Conclusions (either as separate section or merged with Discussion section as appropriate for
      the specified journal) are supported by data and include recommendations for future research.
  5) References are sufficient in breadth and depth for topic and consistent and correct in format
      according to journal specifications.
  6) The manuscript is well-organized, attractively presented with grammar and spelling that is
      consistently correct
      But
1.    Not summarizes the whole experiment in one paragraph.
2.    Summarizes the pertinent details in an imprecise or inaccurate manner.
3.    Discussion section not present in this paper. demonstrates inadequate critical reasoning and
      interpretation or lacks sufficient depth; or methodological weaknesses and limitations and
      significance of study omitted
4.    Results section does not include
         From the above conclusion the paper Recent Advances in the Prediction of Weld
         Residual Stress and Distortion — Part 1is ‘Poor’ Research Papers
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                               Reference
1.   Research Papers - 2018
2.   Research Papers – 2021
3.   Sujit Singh Dr.2021 handout
4.   : https://www.researchgate.net/publication/296485584
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