Outline & Draft
Outline & Draft
I. Introduction:
In this ever-evolving world, parental pressure is like a storm that never stops blowing and can
manifest itself in a variety of ways, including an emphasis on athletics, music, theatre, and
even socialisation. It has a significant impact on children's self-esteem and outlook on life.
Parents must recognise that their children live in a society where they may suffer racial,
sexual, or religious prejudice, body shaming, hormone struggles, family or financial
difficulties, violence, and other issues. Nearly half (47%) of the disagreements involving the
control of adolescents' daily activities were deemed personal matters by the adolescents. Not
surprisingly, the percentage of conflicts reported falling into the "personal" domain was
considerably greater among disputes related to personal choice (67 % ). (Hasebe et al.,
2004; Helwig et al., 2009; Nucci et al., 2014)
Thesis Statement:
This report highlights the effects of parental pressure on their offspring. This will help us to
deal with issues like mental health, physical health, self-esteem and crime.
II. Body
• Insomnia
• Anxiety
• eating disorders
• Depression
Main point: Physical health
• obesity
• self-harm
• drug addiction
• Peer pressure
• Dishonesty
• Unfair means
III. Conclusion
Reworded Thesis:
This research emphasises the repercussion of the pressure created by parents on their
children. In conclusion, too much parental pressure has several harmful side effects that not
• Respect boundaries
• Remain calm
• Be willing to compromise
Group Members: Urvashi, Driti Gill, Karanveer Singh Gill, Bhavil Trehan
Introduction:
In this ever-evolving world, parental pressure is like a storm that never stops blowing and can
manifest itself in a variety of ways, including an emphasis on athletics, music, theatre, and even
socialisation. It has a significant impact on children's self-esteem and outlook on life. Parents
must recognise that their children live in a society where they may suffer racial, sexual, or
religious prejudice, body shaming, hormone struggles, family or financial difficulties, violence,
and other issues. Nearly half (47%) of the disagreements involving the control of adolescents'
daily activities were deemed personal matters by the adolescents. Not surprisingly, the
percentage of conflicts reported falling into the "personal" domain was considerably greater
among disputes related to personal choice (67 %). (Hasebe et al., 2004; Helwig et al.,
This report highlights the effects of parental pressure on their offspring. This will help us to deal
with issues like mental health, physical health, self-esteem, and crime.
• Insomnia
• Anxiety
• eating disorders
• Depression
• obesity
• self-harm
• drug addiction
• Peer pressure
• Dishonesty
• Unfair means
Conclusion:
Reworded Thesis:
This research emphasises the repercussion of the pressure created by parents on their children. In
conclusion, too much parental pressure has several harmful side effects that not only affect the
• Respect boundaries
• Remain calm
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• Be willing to compromise
References:
Chen-Gaddini, M., Liu, J., & Nucci, L. (2020). “It’s My Own Business!”: Parental control over personal
issues in the context of everyday adolescent–parent conflicts and internalizing disorders among
https://doi.org/10.1037/dev0001053
Frances Hoferichter, & Diana Raufelder. (2019). Mothers and Fathers—Who Matters for STEM
doi.org/10.3389/feduc.2019.00014
Guven, u., & sezer, B.B. (2020). The effect of parental pressure on teachers on students’ mathematics
Mekie, M., Taklual, W., Melkie, A., & Addisu, D. (2019). Parental communication on sexual
and reproductive health issues and its associated factors among preparatory school
Annotated Bibliography
Title of Article:
“It’s My Own Business!”: Parental control over personal issues in the context of everyday
Research Topic:
Parental Issues
Reference of Article:
Chen-Gaddini, M., Liu, J., & Nucci, L. (2020). “It’s My Own Business!”: Parental control over
1786. https://doi.org/10.1037/dev0001053
In-text Citation:
Annotation:
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According to research, adolescents and their parents differ conceptually in their views about the
significantly altered because of these transitions. This peer-reviewed article by Min Chen-
Gaddini, Jianjin Liu & Larry Nucci describes the harmful effect of parental pressure.
about regulating teenage everyday activities and topics that directly impacted adolescent
personal choice. Adolescents perceive most of the disputes as personal matters. Those who felt
parental control over their difficulties had much more everyday confrontations with their parents.
Furthermore, there was a link between reported genuine regular interaction and adolescent
internal disorders: The higher the adolescents' scores on the BSI subscale for depression, the
The limited method of questionnaires in previous studies makes it unclear how actual parent-
child interactions play out in adolescents' perception of parental control. This previous research
did not address whether the adolescents' responses on the questionnaires were the same as the
experiences they had daily. Internal illnesses such as anxiety, somatization, interpersonal,
sensitivity was the result of parental control over personal matters, as well as acts that overlapped
personal with conventional and prudential factors. Adolescents perceived most of these issues as
personal matters. Those who felt their troubles were within parental control had a lot more
conflicts with their parents daily. Furthermore, there was a correlation between reported genuine
Most importantly, the observations from this survey of urban Chinese adolescents explain the
fundamental claim that authority over a zone of personal power is a common psychological
necessity, and that regulations on the establishment of a personal domain, as a result, are harmful
From my study, I conclude that parents should give a decent amount of liberty to their children.
They should not always try to control them as it aggravates internal illnesses. They should
provide their children with warmth and friendliness instead of dominance. This source can help
us do well with this assignment as it helps us to understand and analyse the parental pressure put
on the youth.
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Annotated Bibliography
Title of Article:
Reference of Article:
Frances Hoferichter, & Diana Raufelder. (2019). Mothers and Fathers—Who Matters for
doi.org/10.3389/feduc.2019.00014
In-Text Citation:
Annotation:
According to this article, authoritative parenting is related to bad academic outcomes like school
academic results like school engagement, encouragement, and accomplishment. However, just a
few research look in depth at boys' and girls' perceptions of mothers’ and fathers stress and
strain. It may be especially important when it comes to girls' and boys' performance in STEM
topics, since boys and girls may benefit differentially from family pressure/support in STEM
courses, and likewise. This research attempted to throw information on the subject by evaluating
pressure/support and results in math and science. This was used to develop multigroup cross-
lagged models with self-report information from 1,088 eighth graders at T1 (Mage = 13.70, SD =
0.53, 54 percent girls) in Brandenburg, Germany. The findings show that there have been gender
disparities in the interaction of pupils' scores in math and science, as well as their perceptions of
pressure from parents and support. While maternal support is positively related with girls' STEM
accomplishment and other parental factors over time, it is inversely connected with boys'
mathematics overall performance. Within-time connections demonstrate that males, unlike girls,
do not get any parental encouragement for their achievement in mathematics or biology. Finally,
the findings indicate that the link between teenage STEM success and parental pressure/support
is more one-way than bi-directional over time. The study indicates the ways in which parents
treat boys and girls differently and put pressure on children based on their gender and
discriminate between them. I find this research useful because it helped me to know about things
going on in society and how children’s suffer due to pressure on them by their own parents and
what can be done to make this situation better and decrease gender discrimination and pressure
on children’s. This study gave me opportunity to learn further about pressure on children on
different basis.
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Annotated Bibliography
Title of Article:
Reference of Article:
Mekie, M., Taklual, W., Melkie, A., & Addisu, D. (2019). Parental communication on sexual and
reproductive health issues and its associated factors among preparatory school students
In-Text Citation:
(Taklual et al.,2019).
Annotation:
the purpose of this research was to evaluate parental communication on sexual and
reproductive health (SRH) concerns and the things that affect it as one of preliminary
interaction on sexual and reproductive health (SRH) concerns and its related variables
between many preliminary school children. The research was done at the facility level,
thus it couldn't be applied to the entire younger generation. The study was conducted
connection. For data collecting, a structured and validated tool was employed, which
may be seen as an advantage. It yielded surprising results and was undoubtedly eye-
opening for the group health of adolescents is the most neglected aspect of health
concern, and with a scarcity of youth-friendly facilities and a lack of integration, most
emerging economies' teenagers face challenges. Parents are their kid's major source of
The research, done using the hypothetico-deductive approach, discovered that while the
family situation (size, beliefs etc). In conclusion, through this institution-based cross-
sectional research, health education will be provided to preliminary school pupils on the
behaviours, as well as promoting abilities to emotional and social awareness. I find this
a proper way. In my opinion this particular article is very beneficial to our assignment
health.
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Annotated Bibliography
Title of Article:
Reference of Article:
Guven, u., & sezer, B.B. (2020). The effect of parental pressure on teachers on students’
In-Text Citation:
Annotation:
In this article parental pressure on teachers and students is being pointed out. This peer reviewed
article by Guven (2020), probe the relationship between parents and teachers.
The researcher briefs us how parents are oppressive to teachers during their relationship, the
volume of parental pressure on teachers and academic success of the 4th-grade students. The
researcher used evaluation exam of TIMSS. The data about this certain article was fashioned
using linear regression analysis which are among the quantitative research methods by the IDB
analysis program and SPSS software. The analysis stipulated a total of 25.320 students and
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roughly 1013 teachers involved in the study. The outcome of the findings flaunts that parental
that as the parental pressure on teachers increased, the mathematics achievement of these
teachers’ students increased. I find from my study that how not only students, but teachers’ also
sense oppression from parents and the same pressure is squeezed to students in the mass of
homework, increasing discipline, and using different teaching methods. Even so, there are very a
smaller number of students taking the evaluation which does not give stable research.