English-8-Q3-M6-Edited After Lay Out Evaluation
English-8-Q3-M6-Edited After Lay Out Evaluation
English
Quarter 3 – Module 6:
Use of Parallel Structures
English – Grade 8
Quarter 3 – Module 6: Use of Parallel Structures
First Edition, 2020
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English
Quarter 3 – Module 6:
Use of Parallel Structures
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Let Us Learn!
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Let Us Try!
Direction: Circle the phrase that does not belong to the group.
Example:
a) big classroom b) small park c) a friend of mine
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Lesson
Day 1
Let Us Study
Underline the parallel elements in the following sentences. Draw two parallel
lines (//) where the parallel element begins and ends.
2. Sadly, computers can’t think the way humans do, and humans can’t think
the way computers do.
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Parallelism is about expressing your point in a balanced way. It is often
used to clarify your thoughts in writing. It suggests that a certain element or
the same style of word or format should be used in all parts of your sentence.
Read the examples below and examine how non-parallel structures are
improved into a well-structured sentence.
Normal Sentence:
Marie likes running and walking, and she also likes dancing.
Although this sentence is grammatically correct, it is not grammatically
parallel, as the subject-verb-object phrase “Marie also likes dancing”
interrupts the pattern formed by the gerunds “running” and “walking.” In
order to improve this sentence, turn “Marie also likes dancing” into a gerund
in order to match “running” and “walking.”
Sentence with Parallel Structure:
Marie enjoys running, walking, and dancing.
The adjusted sentence has not lost its original meaning, but it has
gained a greater balance, improving the reader’s experience.
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Day 2
Let Us Practice
2. I should want to see the people whose kindness have made my life
worth living.
I should want to see the people whose gentleness have made my life
worth living.
I should want to see the people whose compassion have made my
life worth living.
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
_____________________
3. Joe likes biking while enjoying the sun.
Joe likes driving while enjoying the sun.
Joe likes swimming while enjoying the sun.
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
_____________________
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Activity 2: Correcting Faulty Parallelism
2. We got lot of things to do, friends to see, and spots that should be
visited.
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
__________________________
3. Her mother wrote letters, take pictures, and kept various paintings.
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
__________________________
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Day 3
Let Us Practice More
Directions: Identify which of the given choices gives the sentence correct
parallel structure. Circle the letter of your choice.
1. Joseph was excited to invite his friends over, to eat snack, and
_______________________ .
a. …a game of basketball.
b. …to play basketball.
c. ...playing basketball.
2. Mar has always adored reading the version of the book more than
_____________________.
a. …he watched the movie version.
b. …watching the movie version.
c. …to watch the movie version.
3. When the weather outside is starting to become warm and
__________________, I must stay indoors.
a. …starting to get fiery…
b. …fiery…
c. …getting fiery…
4. Watching movies, dancing hip-hop, and _____________________ are three of
Marjorie’s favorite hobbies.
a. …basketball…
b. …plays volleyball…
c. …planting trees …
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Activity 4: Complete Me!
structured sentence.
nephew’s birthday.
5. Swimming during the summer, bowling during the cold months, and
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Day 4
Let Us Remember
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Assessment Rubric
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(e.g., spelling,usually writing capitalization,
punctuation, uses conventions. usage, grammar
capitalization, them Conventions and/or
grammar, correctly. are paragraphing
usage, Paper is sometimes have multiple
paragraphing) easily handled well errors.
and uses read and and enhance
conventions errors are readability;
effectively to rare; at other
enhance minor times, errors
readability. touch- are
ups distracting
would get and impair
this piece readability.
ready to
publish.
Presentation The form and The The writer's The writer's
presentation of format message is message is only
the text only has understanda understandable
enhances the a few ble in this occasionally, and
ability for the mistakes format. paper is messily
reader to and is written.
understand and generally
connect with easy to
the message. It read and
is pleasing to pleasing
the eye. to the
eye.
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Let Us Assess
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__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
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Activity 2: Improving Faulty Parallel Structures
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Day 5
Let Us Enhance
4. Soon, wheeled vehicles were being used to haul foodstuff, they were also
used for transporting people. (and)
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_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
5. A man improved the wheel by joining a solid wheel to another by an
axle. Later, he made the spoked wheel for fast vehicles. (and)
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
6. We must produce more raw materials for industry. We can shut down
our factories. (either—or)
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
7. The invention of knives and spears increased man’s food supply. It has
made murder easier. (but)
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
8. For many years, we depended on wood for cooking. We were also
depending on wood for warmth. (not only – but also)
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
9. Man now has machineries that use gasoline for power. Other machines
are using electricity for power. (either – or)
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
10. More power spurred manufacturing and trade. It also generated a
higher standard of living. (not only – but also)
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
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Let Us Reflect
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Let Us Practice (Day 2)
Activity 1: Rewriting Parallel Structures
1. Shia beautifies the tree house, picks up her grandpa from mother’s
house, and friends are invited over for thanksgiving.
Shia beatifies the tree house, picks up his grandma from the mother’s
house, and invites friends over for thanksgiving.
2. Google can be used to find synonyms, to research medical information,
and locating best hotels in town.
- Google can be used to find synonyms, to research medical information,
and to locate best hotels in town.
3. Ping-pong needs hand-eye coordination, flexibility, and to be able to
concentrate.
- Ping-pong needs hand-eye coordination, flexibility, and concentration.
4. A parent has the responsibility of providing supplemental help and Let Us Enhance (Day 5)
material with their children. Activity 1: Combining
- A parent has the responsibility of providing supplemental help and Ideas
reviewing
Answers may vary
material with their children.
- A parent has the responsibility to provide supplemental help and to
review all test Let Us Remember (Day 4)
material with students. Answers may vary
5. Shelle threw a stone at the window pane and the glass was broken.
- Shelle threw a stone at the window pane and broke the glass. Let Us Assess
Activity 1: Developing Writing Skills
(Answers may vary)
Activity 2: Correcting Faulty Parallelism
1. Ria likes dancing, jogging, and exercises in her free time.
Activity 2: Improving faulty parallel
Ria likes dancing, jogging, and exercising in her free time.
2. We have a lot of things to do, friends to see, and spots that should be structures
visited. 1. Jose likes to drive and to
We have a lot of things to do, friends to see, and spots to visit.
3. Her mother wrote letters, take pictures, and kept various paintings. bike every morning.
Her mother wrote letters, took pictures, and kept various paintings. 2. The story is vivid, interesting
4. When I wake up every morning, the first things to do is prays to God,
and simple in plot.
make my bed, eating my breakfast and prepares my food.
When I wake up every morning, the first things to do is prays to God, 3. The maid is either lazy or ill.
makes my bed, eats my breakfast, and prepares my food. 4. Rhonyll is a man who is
5. Dancing in my class, to visit at the beach and conversation with my
friends are all things I enjoy. intelligence and who is an
Dancing in my class, visiting at the beach and conversing with my friends industrious worker.
are all things I enjoy.
Let Us Practice More (Day 3)
Let Us Study (Day 1)
Activity 3. 1.b, 2. b, 3. b, 4. c
Let Us Practice More Activity 1: Identifying Parallel
Activity 1: Sentence Combining Elements in Sentences Activity 4. (Answers may vary)
1. She left me angry, frustrated, 1. // to search for activities, to
devastated after I confront her. answer assignments, to calculate
2. I should want to see the people mathematical equation, and to Let Us Try
whose kindness, gentleness and write essays.// 1. C 6. A 11. C
compassion have made my life 2. // computers can’t think the way 2. C 7. C 12. B
worth living. humans do, and humans can’t think 3. B 8. C 13. C
3. Joe like biking, driving and the way computers do.// 4. B 9. C 14. B
swimming while enjoying the sun. 3. // to purchase and to maintain, // 5. C 10. B 15. C
Answer key to Activities
References
Gabriel, Martires and Monis (1992). ENGLISH 4 SEDD Series. Saint Bernadette
Publications, Inc.
Palma, J., Mogol, M. (1989). Grammar and Composition. Kalayaan Press Mktg. Ent., Inc.
58 Kalayaan St., Diliman, Q.C.
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