SHS Raw Q2 Module1 WK1-6 030217
SHS Raw Q2 Module1 WK1-6 030217
Credits: N.J.Bulacan
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Reading and Writing Skills – Grade 11/12
Alternative Delivery Mode
Quarter 2 – Module 1: Context of Text Development- Hypertext and Intertext
First Edition 2020
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Reading and Writing
Skills
Quarter 2 – Module 1:
Context of Text Development- Hypertext and Intertext
Division of Bohol
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INTRODUCTORY MESSAGE
Welcome to the second quarter of the course Reading and Writing Skills! There
are two modules for the second quarter. In this first module (of Quarter 2), you will
have a new set of lessons to discover in yourself relative to the Reading and Writing
Skills. While learning about how you can enhance your skills, you will also be able to
grasp familiar reading contexts such as Boholano culture and heritage for you to have
something to write about.
GENERAL INSTRUCTION
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Lesson Context of Text Development:
1 Hypertext and Intertext
When writing about literature, the text is the primary source of evidence. To
present a convincing and persuasive analysis, the essay writer must demonstrate a
thorough knowledge of the text by presenting carefully chosen, pertinent quotations
which support each point the essay writer makes. A text is neither written nor read in a
vacuum; its meaning and interpretation are affected by a given set of circumstances.
Thus, it must include the understanding that texts are always developed with a certain
context.
WHAT I KNOW
Pretest
1. Context is the inspiration behind the writing of a text. Which of these does not
correctly define CONTEXT in writing?
A. Backdrop
B. Reality
C. Segue details
D. Situation
2. The following are the contexts in which text can be developed EXCEPT _____ .
A. Argumentative
B. Expository
C. Narrative
D. Rhetoric
3. In text development, these are the important details to consider EXCEPT _____ .
A. Audience
B. Content and Meaning
C. Monetary benefit to the writer
D. Purpose
4. Intertext and hypertext are contexts in which text can be developed under the
EPOSITORY type. Which is not a characteristic of hypertext?
A. Information can only be accessed with internet connection
B. Speed of information is easily read thru gadgets
C. Words are rerouted to the web page where further detail is provided
D. Whole picture of the text is elaborated more than intertext
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WHAT’S IN
Recapitulation
Context is the inspiration behind your written output. It also reflects the
reading experiences you have as a reader and as a writer of your would-be-
written output.
Text development have several ways like descriptive, narrative, expository, and
argumentative.
WHAT IS IT
Discussion
Today, let’s learn two more contexts in developing your write-up. These are the
hypertext and the intertext.
HYPERTEXT
-can be read from the written output from technological advancements tablet, desktop
computer, laptop and smartphones
-is manifested by the texts that have hyperlinks (normally underlined and in blue
color)
- hypertext is unique because of the speed at which you can shift to different texts; all
you have to do is to click the hyperlink and the other page will load
-allows readers to shift to different web pages almost instantly
-provides a greater chance of getting a better picture of the entire scenario in a fast
manner
- helps the reader get a better understanding of the whole story.
INTERTEXT
-draws origin from literature and asserts that texts can only be understood in relation
to other texts
-has applications for academic and technical reading (academic is for school; technical
is for work)
-has benefits: further reading can widen the reader’s knowledge
-can view different texts and different perspectives
- allows readers to be more certain of what is already known
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WHAT YOU WILL DO
Activity 1.1. Compare and contrast the terms hypertext and intertext thru the
notes using a Venn diagram below.
HYPERTEXT INTERTEXT
WHAT’S MORE
Enrichment
WHAT
WHAT YOUYOU WILL
WILL DO DO
Activity 1.2
Directions: Search in the internet or from any available sources of information you
have. Write three references of each topic.
1. Climate change
a. ________________________________________________
b. ________________________________________________
c. ________________________________________________
2. Social media
a. ________________________________________________
b. ________________________________________________
c. ________________________________________________
3. Bullying
a. ________________________________________________
b. ________________________________________________
c. ________________________________________________
4. Study habits
a. ________________________________________________
b. ________________________________________________
c. ________________________________________________
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WHAT I HAVE LEARNED
Generalization
Reflection:
On a separate sheet of paper, draw a circle. Write inside it a word or phrase
that is a new learning to you in this lesson. Outside, write relevant details to
the concept you wrote.
WHAT I CAN DO
Application
Activity 1.3
Directions: Pick one topic from Activity 1.2. This would be the context of your
written text. Develop a text using the references that you have listed. (50 points-
see rubrics for the output scoring reference).
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ASSESSMENT
Posttest
A. Put a tick (/) mark on good practice for both reading and writing, or an X mark for
something that’s not.
______ 1. Stick to one source of information.
______ 2. Consider other references as invalid.
______ 3. Be open to other ideas.
______ 4. Look at an author’s references and read them, too.
______ 5. Acknowledge your sources.
______ 6. Add as many sources as possible to your work.
B. Write T if the statement is true and F if false.
______ 1. The meaning of a text is dependent on the other texts.
______ 2. Authors tend to build on what previous authors have published or started.
______ 3. We can gain full understanding of a concept by referring to one text.
______ 4. A well-written research paper has several references.
______ 5. If you want to know more about the topic, you need to read references
tackling the same thing.
Test source: https://tinyurl.com/yyd52gul
ADDITIONAL ACTIVITY
Directions: You are a blogger who has been hired by the Department of Tourism to
promote tourist spots in your locality. The agreement is for you to create an account
on the blog site WordPress.com, and post an entry—complete with text and graphics
about tourist spots found in your locality. You also need to use hyperlinks in order to
help the reader go to websites that will (1) show more pictures; (2) provide travel
packages, with services and cost; and (3) book flights or ferry trips.
Your blog entry will get you retained in your job—even promoted—if the blog entry has
high-quality graphics, has a well-written promotional text, and has active hyperlinks
to all the required web information. (See sample blog on Appendix C. )
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APPENDICES:
Activity 1.1.
1. C 2. D 3. C 4. A
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Purpose
Clear purpose to share Share information and The blog is mostly The blog appears to be
and collect opinions opinion about an about one topic, but about unconnected
and information about important topic sometimes gets off the topics and events
an important and subject
interesting topic
Content
The blog is fair and The blog is fair. The Pieces of information Presents one viewpoint
balanced. pieces of information present are missing on my topic.
Information/s is/are are from more than one critical content. Conclusions are drawn
from variety of viewpoint and drew Conclusions are drawn about the research, but
viewpoints and drew original conclusions but sometimes, not just repeat what other
original conclusions based on research based on research. sources have said
based on research about the topic.
Writing
Writing style is Writing style is for Writing style is for Writing style is
interesting and readers to understand. readers to understand, confusing and often
appropriate for the Any errors in but sometimes writing does not make sense to
readers. There are no conventions did not does not make sense readers.
errors in grammar, take away from is in because of errors in
spelling, punctuation, the content. conventions.
capitalization or
sentences.
Hypertext
There are two or more There is one hypertext There is one hypertext There is no hypertext
hypertexts present present which is present which is not present in the blog.
which are utilized utilized appropriately utilized that
appropriately and and correctly. appropriately and
correctly. correctly.
Extra Features
Blog features are Blog features are Blog features are Blog features are not
included such as included such as included such as included, or the
graphics, photos, and graphics, photos, and graphics, photos, and features present do not
links to enhance the links links, but sometimes make sense.
content of the blog. they take away the
blog’s purpose
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CRUISING DOWN LOBOC RIVER, BOHOL PHILIPPINES
April 29,2019
Thinking about joining in on a Loboc River cruise on your next Bohol trip? Read
this quick guide on what to expect, as well as some useful tips on how to get the best
experience.
For many, a Loboc River cruise is a highlight for their Loboc adventures.
Personally, this was one of my favorite activities on Bohol Island due to the amazing
natural beauty of the Loboc river and surroundings.
Loboc River is a jungle that snakes itself all the way from Carmen near the
Chocolate Hills, to the beaches of Southernn Bohol. For those looking to jump on a
Loboc River cruise, you can head to the small town of Tay Tay.
To get to Tay Tay, it will take approximately one hour and 20 minutes by
tricycle. Expect around an hour depending on Tagbilaran traffic if you’re looking to
ride here yourself.
Alternatively, many tourists visiting Bohol choose to just book a Land Tour
which includes a full-day guided tour and transport to all of the Bohol highlights
including:
Alternatively, if you are in Cebu and planning your Bohol trip, check out this
private trip to Bohol from Cebu which includes a trip down Loboc River.
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References:
Garcia, C. (2018) Prezi presentation on Hypertext and Intertext, retrieved January 22,
2018 at https://tinyurl.com/y3mjvxlo
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Lesson Explaining Critical Reading as
2 a Form of Reasoning
How do you practice critical reading? A senior high school student like you will be
faced with reading activities that will ask you to not just read to know what the author
is saying. Most importantly, you need to go further from reading various sources of a
topic and reflect on the different authors’ viewpoints. From there, you make your own
judgement based on what you have read. This is critical reading as a form of reasoning.
So, let’s head on and warm our brains up!
WHAT I KNOW
Pretest
Identify whether the question in each item guides you in critical reading of a text.
Write C if it involves critical reading and N if not.
WHAT’S IN
Recapitulation
Text and context connections refer to critical reading which is the technique
for discovering information and ideas within a text.
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WHAT IS IT
Discussion
Critical Reading
- means engaging in what you read by asking yourself questions such as, ‘what is
the author trying to say?’ or ‘what is the main argument being presented?’
- means being able to reflect on what a text says, what it describes and what it
means by scrutinizing the style and structure of the writing, the language used
as well as the content.
What the text says: after critically reading a piece you should be able to take
notes, paraphrasing - in your own words - the key points.
What the text describes: you should be confident that you have understood the
text sufficiently to be able to use your own examples and compare and contrast
with other writing on the subject in hand.
Interpretation of the text: this means that you should be able to fully analyze
the text and state a meaning for the text as a whole.
The following questions are categorized as questions about: the overall text,
the truth claims made within the text, how the text could be different, political
statement, and personal engagement.
Note: You do not need to use all of these questions every time you read. Choose two or
three which make the most sense to you, and start there.
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(m) Is anything being used out of context in the text?
Political Questions
(n) Is there anything problematic in the text?
(o) Are any groups being excluded or marginalized in the text or in the
implications of the claims?
(p) Is there any exclusionary language used in the text?
(q) What would the implications be, if we were to take the claims seriously? i.e.
What would happen next?
Personal Engagement
(r) How does this text relate to my personal experience?
(s) How does my personal knowledge and experience affect the way I read the
text?
(t) Can my personal experience help me to evaluate the claims?
(u) What status does my personal experience have, in relation to the published
research?
(v) Can I find anything in the literature to help me relate this to my personal
experience?
Activity 1.1. Mark up the Text Activity. Read the following article about an
environmental issue in Bohol province. Analyze the statements and take down
important concepts on a separate sheet the following table format:
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need to look up) examples)
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Campaign vs. coal-fired power plant in Bohol mounts
Source: The Bohol Chronicle retrieved on March 5, 2018
The campaign against the establishment of an island-based power plant using coal as fuel is gaining traction.
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Bishop Patrick Daniel Parcon of the Diocese of Talibon and Bishop Albert Uy, Diocese of Tagbilaran, are said to
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oppose the plan to establish of coal-fueled power plants in the province, according to Clean Energy Advocates
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(CEA), a loose organization of non-government organizations, religious, academe, and faith-based groups.
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The CEA has met with the prelates separately as it intensifies its campaign against the move of the provincial
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government in considering the coal-powered power plant to be put up in the province. During the meeting,
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Bishop Uy expressed his stand against coal-fired power, saying that the plan might contradict with the vision
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and mission of the provincial government. Bohol envisions to be “a prime eco-cultural tourism destination and
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a strong balanced agro-industrial province, with a well-educated, God-loving and law-abiding citizenry, proud of
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their cultural heritage, enjoying a state of well-being and committed to sound environmental management.”
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Its mission is “To enrich Bohol’s social, economic, cultural, political and environmental resources through
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good governance and effective partnerships with stakeholders for increasing global competitiveness.” Its Goals:
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Environmental protection and management; social equity, delivering quality services; local/regional economic
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development and strategic wealth generation; responsive, transparent and accountable governance.
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He said he will talk to Bishop Parcon to come up with separate campaign statement, saying “let’s walk the
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talk” with this endeavor. According to Emmie Roslinda of PROCESS one of the convenors of the CEA, “I’m
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happy to inform you that Atty. Nunag, Argeo Melisimo, Atty. John Vistal and PENRO supported our advocacy.
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They, in fact, elaborated the potential effect when pushed through.”
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Recently, CEA released to the media a statement interposing opposition to the coal plant for environmental,
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health and cost grounds.
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WHAT’S MORE
Enrichment
WHAT
WHAT YOUYOU WILL
WILL DO DO
Activity 1.2 List five questions from the concept notes that guide you in reading
the text about the environmental issue in Bohol.
2. ____________________________________________________________________
3. ____________________________________________________________________
4. ____________________________________________________________________
5. ____________________________________________________________________
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WHAT I CAN DO
Application
Activity 1.3 Using the questions you listed in Activity 1.2, provide your own
answers and indicate the line number/s where the evidences are located.
Question 1: ____________________________________________________________________
Answer: ____________________________________________________________________
Evidence: ____________________________________________________________________
Question 2: ____________________________________________________________________
Answer: ____________________________________________________________________
Evidence: ____________________________________________________________________
Question 3: ____________________________________________________________________
Answer: ____________________________________________________________________
Evidence: ____________________________________________________________________
Question 4: ____________________________________________________________________
Answer: ____________________________________________________________________
Evidence: ____________________________________________________________________
Question 5: ____________________________________________________________________
Answer: ____________________________________________________________________
Evidence: ____________________________________________________________________
ASSESSMENT
Posttest
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______ 5. Critical reading is reading with an open mind.
ADDITIONAL ACTIVITY
Write-up Activity: Write a paragraph about your reaction to the article presented in
Activity 1.1. You may make use of the questions you listed on Activity 1.2.
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APPENDICES:
1. C 2. N 3. N 4. N 5. N
Posttest
1. F 2. T 3. F 4. T 5. T
References:
Critical Reading Activities from the Florida State University. Writing Resources: The
English Department retrieved from https://tinyurl.com/yxce7tvr
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Lesson Formulating Evaluative
3 Statements
In the previous lesson, you were able to understand that critical reading as a
form of reasoning involves creating a reasoned argument when analyzing and
evaluating a text read. How can you use critical reading as a form of reasoning?
Formulate evaluative statements. Let’s learn how to from these evaluative statements in
this lesson.
WHAT I KNOW
Pretest
Write T if the statement is true and F the statement is false. Write your answer on the
space provided.
_____8. Using hedges is a way to discreetly express your disagreement to the author’s
idea.
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WHAT’S IN
Recapitulation
Evaluative statements are crafted after reading a text. You cannot evaluate
what you do not know. Unless it is a fake news that you are bringing. But we are
taking this subject to learn not to write something with lack of textual basis. Thus, the
very important initial step to formulating an evaluative statement is through a critical
reading of the text. It is by grasping the essence of the text and checking for possible
fallacies in the argument.
WHAT IS IT
Discussion
This lesson will give you tips on how to write evaluative statements in two ways:
assertions and counterclaims.
- is done in the same way you do any other writing except that the statement is
about your judgement of the text’s content and property
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TYPES of ASSERTION can be used in formal or informal writing. This includes: Basic
Assertion, Emphatic Assertion , I-Language Assertion.
Basic Assertion is a statement used to express the writer's feelings, beliefs, and
opinions directly. This type of assertion is usually used in writing formal papers
like thesis and dissertation.
Example: Upon reading that the ancient Filipino civilization is divided into
three social classes namely the ‘maharlika’, ‘timawa’ and ‘alipin’, I feel proud
because of the civilization social advancement and at the same time sad
because of the promulgation of social differentiation. With this finding, I want
to do further research on the existence of these social classes’ stigma.
Explanation: The example given is divided into three parts that includes the feelings
and preference of the writer.
Counterclaim is the opposition you make about the claim of a writer. You must
recognize the value of hedges when you state your counterclaims. A hedge is a word or
phrase that minimizes negative impact of a criticism. When you are presenting your
counterclaim, you are providing criticism since you are stating that the claim is not
true. Hedge is used to give a courteous tone in your writing.
Example:
Obesity is caused by the bad food choices being offered by the food industry.
Counterclaim: Obesity is probably caused by the bad food choices being offered by
the food industry
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WHAT YOU WILL DO
Activity 1.1. Based on the text below, the following evaluative statements may come up in
your mind as a reader. Identify whether the statement expresses an assertion or a
counterclaim.Write A for assertion and C for counterclaim.
______ 1. This organization has presumably overlooked the economic progress that coal-
based power could bring to the province.
______ 2. It is important to notice the strong statements of urgency of the author which is
an implication that these coal-based projects in the province bring destruction to the
environment.
______ 3. I feel that there is a need for the offices called upon to take an action because
the environmental problems we experience now may be worsened if these coal-projects
will be pushed through.
______ 4. Generally, this type of appeal hampers the potential development that the coal-
based projects could give to the community.
______ 5. This article is insightful especially that it mentioned the Eco-cultural Tourism
Zone under Republic Act No. 9446 which protected the natural resources and cultural
heritage of the Boholanos that is why I support this article.
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No to Coal in Bohol
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Source: GreenPeace retrieved at bataris.org.ph
WHAT’S MORE
Enrichment
WHAT
WHAT YOUYOU WILL
WILL DO DO
Activity 1.2. Marking up the Text. Read the following text about the GreenPeace’s stand
on the issue. Then, list the line number statements in the text following the format:
Alarmed that there are sectors in the Provincial Government along with investors and power
providers who are poised to endorse a backward idea of a coal-fired power plant in the island,
we demand that our leaders to lead us in achieving Bohol’s Goals that include, among others,
Environmental Protection and Management; and, Responsive, transparent and accountable
governance.
Drawing from our earlier manifesto, we echo the call, this time, taking a firm stand against
whatever plans and machinations there might be to utilize coal in generating power within our
province. We have united behind the following arguments:
1. THAT COAL IS DIRTY AND DEADLY. Coal damages both people and planet. Existing
and proposed coal power plants in the Philippines can cause up to 2,410 premature
deaths annually according to a 2015 Harvard study. Coal burning emits substances
which contribute to smog, haze, lung disease, and respiratory illnesses; as well as
neurological and developmental damage in humans and other animals (US Energy
Information Administration, 2017). Coal mining contributes to soil erosion, water
pollution and loss of biodiversity. It is directly linked with climate change as it is
responsible for 46% of carbon dioxide emissions worldwide, inducing natural disasters.
2. THAT COAL IS COSTLY. While there is still a popular perception that coal is sold
cheaply, a research by the International Institute for Sustainable Development (IISD)
revealed that coal use actually brings with it additional costs that are not traditionally
taken into account such as: (1) Subsidies to coal producers; (2) Air pollution estimated
to cause more than 6,000 global deaths annually; and, (3) Greenhouse Gas emissions
that undermine targets under the Paris Agreement on Climate. If we monetize these
impacts the total cost of coal is estimated to be around USD 11 cents per kilowatt hour
(kWh), more than double the cost of competing renewable energy based on recent
renewable auction results.
3. THAT GLOBALLY COAL IS NO LONGER A VIABLE OPTION. The recent falls in solar
Photo Voltaic prices have led India to cancel new coal capacity, in addition to rising
concern about the impacts of coal use on air pollution. In China, this concern led to a
moratorium on new coal plants in 28 out of 31 provinces. With the tide turning against
coal across the world, there is real concern that investments made today could soon be
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impossible to operate on environmental, public health and cost grounds, leaving a
legacy of stranded power stations as the last monuments to the age of coal. (IISD, 2017)
WE DECLARE that renewable energy is the way forward. A 2013 World Wide Fund for Nature
(WWF) report said that in 2011, at least 384 renewable energy service contracts were awaiting
approval from the Department of Energy, equalling to 6,046 MW of generation capacity.
Currently, there are 13 operational coal-fired power plants with a combined installed capacity
of 4.937 MW;
WE STRONGLY SUPPORT the development of renewable energy sources as the way forward for
our beloved Bohol that claims to have ecological and cultural tourism as its main path for
sustainable development being one of its primary economic drivers.
WE ENJOIN our fellow Boholanos and residents to join us in this worthy cause to save our
environment from this threat of destruction for our sake and the future generation.
WE DEMAND as citizens and voters that the Sanggunian Panlungsod of Tagbilaran City and
the Sangguniang Panlalawigan of Bohol shall recognize the negative impact of coal-based
power generation and the need to shift to renewable energy sources by passing Resolutions to
support calls for “a moratorium on the establishment of carbon-intensive and fossil-based
technologies”; and interpose its objection on any proposed coal-fired project within our
province;
WE ALSO URGE on the Office of the Secretary of the Department of Environment and Natural
Resources and the Office of the Secretary of the Department of Energy to deny any applications
for coal-fired and other fossil-based power plants within Bohol; and implement the mandate for
the development and use of renewable, sustainable energy sources and technologies.
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WHAT I CAN DO
Application
Activity 1.3 Express your thoughts about the article presented in Activity 1.2. Formulate
evaluative statements by writing it on the space provided. Afterwards, kindly underline the
type of evaluative statement you have written on the blank.
1. Evaluative statement:
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2. Evaluative statement:
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3. Evaluative statement:
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ASSESSMENT
Posttest
Read each item carefully and select the best answer. Write your answer before the
number.
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4. What type of evaluative statement is the statement “This organization has
presumably overlooked the economic progress that coal-based power could
bring to the province” is what type of assertion?
A. basic B. counterclaim C. emphatic D. I-language
5. What type of evaluative statement is the statement: “It is important to notice the
strong statements of urgency of the author which is an implication that these
coal-based projects in the province bring destruction to the environment.” ?
A. basic B. counterclaim C. emphatic D. I-language
6. What type of evaluative statement is the statement: “I feel that there is a need for
the offices called upon to take an action because the environmental problems
we experience now may be worsened if these coal-projects will be pushed
through.”? A. basic B. emphatic C. evaluative D. I-language
7. The statement “This article is insightful especially that it mentioned the Eco-
cultural Tourism Zone under Republic Act No. 9446 which protected the
natural resources and cultural heritage of the Boholanos that is why I
support this article.” ?
A. basic B. emphatic C. evaluative D. I-language
ADDITIONAL ACTIVITY
Using the evaluative statements you made in the previous activity, write an article
review on the text “No to Coal in Bohol”. Please see the rubrics for scoring (100 points).
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APPENDICES:
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(86-100points) (75-85 points) (50-74 points) (0-49 points)
Purpose
Clear purpose to share Share information and The review is mostly The review appears to
and collect opinions opinion about an about one topic, but be about unconnected
and information about important topic sometimes gets off the topics and events
an important and subject
interesting topic
Content
The review is clear and The review is clear. The Pieces of information Presents one viewpoint
balanced. pieces of information present are missing on my topic.
Information/s is/are are from more than one critical content. Conclusions are drawn
from variety of viewpoint and drew Conclusions are drawn about the research, but
viewpoints and drew original conclusions but sometimes, not just repeat what other
original conclusions based on research based on research. sources have said
based on research about the topic.
Writing
Writing style is Writing style is for Writing style is for Writing style is
interesting and readers to understand. readers to understand, confusing and often
appropriate for the Any errors in but sometimes writing does not make sense to
readers. There are no conventions did not does not make sense readers.
errors in grammar, take away from is in because of errors in
spelling, punctuation, the content. conventions.
capitalization or
sentences.
Evaluative Statements
There are two or more There is one evaluative There is one evaluative There is no evaluative
evaluative statements statement present statement present statements present in
present which are which is utilized which is not utilized the review.
utilized appropriately appropriately and that appropriately and
and correctly. correctly. correctly.
Extra Features
Review features are Review features are The review features are The review features are
included such as included such as included such as not included, or the
introduction, body and introduction, body and introduction, body and features present do not
conclusion to enhance conclusion conclusion, but make sense.
the content of the sometimes takes away
output. the review’s purpose
References:
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Critical Reading Activties retrieved at https://tinyurl.com/yxce7tvr
Formulating Evaluative Statements retrieved at https://tinyurl.com/y8ylom6f
When writing about literature, the text is the primary source of evidence. To
present a convincing and persuasive analysis, the essay writer must demonstrate a
thorough knowledge of the text by presenting carefully chosen, pertinent quotations
which support each point the essay writer makes.
In the previous lesson, you were able formulate assertions and counterclaims
based on the article read. Now, let’s learn how to strengthen the evaluative statements
you formulated by backing them up with textual evidences.
WHAT I KNOW
Pretest
Write T if the statement is true and F the statement is false. Write your answer on the
space provided.
_____1. Textual evidences are opinions which need not be cited from the source.
_____2. Assertions and counterclaims called evaluative statements are valid as long as
there is one textual evidence presented.
_____3. Textual evidences are formulated using the statements: According to… The text
says.. It is explicitly expressed in the text that…
WHAT’S IN
Recapitulation
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Textual Evidences support the evaluative statements expressed by writer.
WHAT IS IT
Discussion
When writing and citing evidences, you may use these stem to express your thought:
Paraphrase:
The text stated that…. The author (of the text) stated that… According to
the text…A detail from the text that supports this is… An example from the text
is…
Direct Quote:
[Author’s name] states that… The author [of the text] wrote… On page ___ ,
the author stated … This is shown when the author says..
Activity 1.1. Find the Evidence. Read the given text and copy the table on a separate
sheet that follows to indicate the text’s claim, the text evidences and the evaluative
statements.
Boholanos are proud to say that the sweetest ubi in the world is grown in Bohol. But in
this article, ubi has another adjective attached to it- Ubi is sacred in Bohol. Read it
carefully and find evidences of this claim.
Ubi is sacred in Bohol. That was the first, striking one-liner statement I've read from a
pack of ubi powder when I set my foot in Bohol province, the largest producer of ubi in
the country. Yes, that one-liner is true as confirmed by the Boholanos themselves and
the ubi farmers we interviewed during a site visit in Guindulman, one of the sites for the
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Bureau of Agricultural Research's (BAR) Community-based Participatory Action Research
(CPAR) project on “Ubi Agribusiness Development Project”.
In Bohol, “ubi” as they call it, is different from “ube”. Ubi is what most Filipino call
purple yam, while ube is the adjective which is the Tagalog translation for purple.
Meanwhile, “kinampay” is a variety of ubi which is native to Bohol. Its flesh is a marbled
purple color and is well-known for its aroma. There are also other ubi purple varieties in
the rest of the country but not as venerated and advertised as that of kinampay in Bohol.
Ubi is not only the Boholanos’ staple rootcrop but was also venerated as a sacred crop
during ancient times in Bohol. During a famine, it is said that ubi was the only crop that
grew in Bohol soil that saved the Boholanos from death, thus their great respect for it, so
much so that it's the only staple food included in their Bohol Hymn.
When one speaks of "ubi" to a Boholano, there is always a story to tell that until today,
when anyone accidentally drops an ubi to the ground or table, they would utter an
apology and kiss it as a sign of reverence.
They also have an Ubi Festival wherein they hold the Miss Ubi Beauty Pageant. It is
usually set during early January, the harvest season for ubi. This annually-held event is
attended by exhibitors from different local government units (LGUs) to display their
different ubi varieties like the traditional, aromatic kinampay, kabus-ok, iniling,
tamisan, baligonhon, binanag, gimnay, and binato. This activity provides agri-
entrepreneurs a venue for promoting quality, high-value, and sustainable ubi products
and services to generate income for the local producers. This year's Ubi Festival will be
held on the 2nd week of December.
Source: https://tinyurl.com/yxolthtx
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WHAT’S MORE
Enrichment
WHAT
WHAT YOUYOU WILL
WILL DO DO
Activity 1.2. The power of 3 (Three pieces of text evidence). When expressing an
assertion or a counterclaim, make it a habit to point out 3 evidences to support any
evaluative statement. Based on the text presented in the previous activity, write the
evaluative statement or claim of the author. Then, provide the evidences.
__________________________________________________________________________
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Evidence #1
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Evidence #2
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Evidence #3
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________________________________________________________________________.
________________________________________________________________________.
________________________________________________________________________.
WHAT I CAN DO
Application
Activity 1.3. Analyze the text evidences found in the text. In the first column are direct
quotes from the text. Try to paraphrase the statements. The first one is done for you.
1. Ubi is sacred in Bohol. That was the Ubi, according the farmers of Bohol confirmed that
first, striking one-liner statement I've ubi is sacred in the province.
read from a pack of ubi powder when I
set my foot in Bohol province, the
largest producer of ubi in the country.
Yes, that one-liner is true as confirmed
by the Boholanos themselves and the
ubi farmers we interviewed during a site
visit in Guindulman, one of the sites for
the Bureau of Agricultural Research's
(BAR) Community-based Participatory
Action Research (CPAR) project on “Ubi
Agribusiness Development Project”.
ASSESSMENT
Posttest
Read each item carefully and select the correct answer. Write your answer on a
separate sheet of paper.
1. These are statements that support the evaluative statements.
D. assertion B. counterclaim C. evaluative D. text evidence
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2. This the way of citing text evidences by stating word for word from the source the
information taken from the text.
A. Direct B. evaluative C. Quota D. Paraphrase
3. This is the way of citing sources of information by getting the thought of the information
without changing the meaning of the original text.
A. Direct B. evaluative C. Quota D. Paraphrase
4. The following are ways to gather textual evidences EXCEPT:
A. Color coding B. gossips C. taking notes D. underlining
ADDITIONAL ACTIVITY
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Activity 1.4. Ask and Answer. If you were to ask a question to the author in the text
presented in Activity 1.2, what would it be? Write the question in the table. Then, provide
_____________________________________________________________________________________
at least two answers to your own question. Do not forget to cite sources. Also, provide
_____________________________________________________________________________________
some evidence of the answers to the questions as potential text evidences.
(Note: For Yes-No Questions, provide explanation.)
_____________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________
Question: _________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________
Answer Details, Related Quotes, Line from the
Text
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_____________________________________________________________________________________
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_____________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________
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APPENDICES:
Activity Pretest
1. F 2. F 3. T 4. T 5. T 6
Activity 1.1
Evaluative statement:
Ubi is sacred in Bohol. (assertion)
Text evidences:
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There are also other ubi purple varieties in the rest of the country but not as venerated
and advertised as that of kinampay in Bohol.
During a famine, it is said that ubi was the only crop that grew in Bohol soil that saved
the Boholanos from death, thus their great respect for it, so much so that it's the only
staple food included in their Bohol Hymn.
… until today, when anyone accidentally drops an ubi to the ground or table, they
would utter an apology and kiss it as a sign of reverence…
There is an Ubi Festival in Bohol. (Note: Fiestas in Bohol is usually offered to the saints,
but Bohol also celebrates a festival for ubi, thus, making it sacred)
Assessment/Posttest: 1. D 2. A 3. D 4. B
References:
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Lesson Identifying the Unique Features in
5 Academic Writing
WHAT I KNOW
Pretest
Kindly read the following items carefully. Select the best answer by writing the letter
on the space provided.
3. Which academic writing is composed when the goal is to discover the top tourism
activities that both local and foreign visitors engage when in your province?
A. literature review B. position paper C. project proposal D.
research report
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4. It is the process of gathering a comprehensive body of knowledge that has bearing
on the research study. A. article critique B. literature review C. project
proposal D. research report
5. What type of academic writing is developed when one gathers relevant articles on
his topic about diving which would contribute to one’s grasp of the topic at hand?
A. article critique B. literature review C. project proposal D.
research report
WHAT’S IN
Recapitulation
It has a formal tone and style, but it is not complex and does not require the
use of long sentences and complicated vocabulary.
WHAT IS IT
Discussion
Today, let’s learn more about the definition and parts of each type of academic
writing.
ACADEMIC WRITING
-depends on each subject written output
- each subject discipline will have certain writing conventions, vocabulary and types of
discourse that you will become familiar with over the course of your degree. However,
there are some general characteristics of academic writing that are relevant across all
disciplines.
- types of academic writing include: position paper,
An analytic or critical review of a book or article comments on and evaluates the work
in the light of specific issues and theoretical concerns in a course.
Literature Review
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A literature review is a survey of scholarly sources on a specific topic. It provides an
overview of current knowledge, allowing you to identify relevant theories, methods, and
gaps in the existing research.
Writing a literature review involves finding relevant publications (such as books and
journal articles), critically analyzing them, and explaining what you found. There are
five key steps:
Position paper
The purpose of a position paper is to generate support on an issue. It describes a
position on an issue and the rational for that position. The position paper is based on
facts that provide a solid foundation for your argument.
Project Proposal
A project proposal outlines the purpose and scope of a project. This is helpful before a
project takes place since it ensures both parties agree about what the project itself will
include. It states to the decision-maker or stakeholder that the service provider
understands the scope of the project (blog.mavenlink.com)
Research Report
Research reports are recorded data prepared by researchers or statisticians
after analyzing information gathered by conducting organized research, typically in the
form of surveys or qualitative methods.
Activity 1.1. The following are the unique features of an academic writing. Tick ( / )
the box if such feature is observed in each type of the academic writing.
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Literature
Review
Project
WHAT’S MORE
Enrichment
Activity 1.2
Based on the table that you have accomplished on Activity 1.1, pick phrases or
statements from the notes of the academic writing.
1. Objective
a. ________________________________________________
b. ________________________________________________
c. ________________________________________________
2. Formality
a. ________________________________________________
b. ________________________________________________
c. ________________________________________________
3. Precision
a. ________________________________________________
b. ________________________________________________
c. ________________________________________________
4. Hedging
a. ________________________________________________
b. ________________________________________________
c. ________________________________________________
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WHAT I HAVE LEARNED
Generalization
________________________________________________________________________.
________________________________________________________________________.
________________________________________________________________________.
________________________________________________________________________.
WHAT I CAN DO
Application
Activity 1.3
Pick one topic from Activity 1.2. How would you describe an academic writing
based on the features and the steps in each type?
_________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
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________________________________________________________________________________
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________________________________________________________________________________
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ASSESSMENT
Posttest
Kindly read the following items carefully. Select the best answer by writing the letter
on the space provided.
____ 1. The following are suggested parts of the research report which part
summarizes the intent of the research, the significant findings, conclusion, and
recommendations?
A. abstract B. conclusion C. methodology D. references
____ 2. Which part of the research report contains the rationale for conducting
research?
A. introduction B. references C. results and discussion D. title
____ 5. The purpose of this academic writing is to create a readable synthesis of the
best resources available in the literature for an important topic , text or a current area
of inquiry.
A. article review B. literature review C. project proposal D.
research report
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ADDITIONAL ACTIVITY
In each type of academic writing, enumerate at least two personal situations when you
can use each type - 2 points each)
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Literature Review
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Position Paper
_____________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________
Project Proposal
_____________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________
Research Report
_____________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________
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APPENDICES:
Pretest
3. D 2. B 3. B 4. D 5. A
References:
Position Paper
https://www.xavier.edu/library/students/documents/position_paper.pdf
Procter, Margaret (n.d.) University of Toronto. Book Review and Article Critique
retrieved from https://advice.writing.utoronto.ca/types-of-writing/book-review/
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