Essay Writing -VSTEP

Two-part Question Essay

I. Topic Identification

Topics

1. Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In
what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a
positive or negative development?

2. It is predicted that robots are going to become increasingly important in our lives. How could
robots be used in the future? Will this development be a positive or a negative development?

3. Nowadays governments are investing more in public transport such as buses and trains rather
than in building new roads. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative
development?
Topic 1 Topic 2 Topic 3

Topic?

Question 1?

Question 3?

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II. Organization

Topic. Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of
technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has
this been a positive or negative development?

In the modern world, technology has changed the way many people connect to each other.
It has developed new various forms of relationship sin our society, and it influences significantly
how people socialize. In my opinion, this development helps many individuals to manage their
connections in a good way. However, I think that it can have some drawbacks too.

The state-of-art developments, which have provided new types of relationships have
affected societies and their way of connections. Firstly , with the advent of a virtual environment,
many people change their attention and interest in this new form. For example, chat apps are very
common among families, almost everyone tent to use them. Secondly, these new apps would
change considerably the way people make new relationships.

In my view, there are many advantages associated with modern technology in terms of
people's social life. First, it provides an environment where many people can make connections
with their friends and families from very long distances. For instance, these days, there are a lot of
People who work abroad or study. These ones can easily call their parents and be happy. In
addition, The technology expanded business relationships between countries. This means many
poorer countries can join the international trade. Finally, it's true that there can be some
drawbacks such as less interest in face-to-face connections or some criminal activities, but overall,
it can bring lots of benefits to the world.

In conclusion, modern devices have changed our social life and also affected us in various
forms. While there are some disadvantages to this situation, many people can benefit from new
types of relationships they can have.

Introduction  General statements (It is true that …/ It is a fact that …)

 Thesis ( This essay will discuss question 1 + question 2)

Body 1  Opening sentence

 Idea (s)
 Examples/ Evidences
 Closing

Body 2  Opening sentence

 Idea (s)
 Examples/ Evidences
 Closing

Conclusion  Broad statement

 Closing thoughts

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III. Topic Analysis and Language Expression

Topic. It is predicted that robots are going to become increasingly important in our lives. How could
robots be used in the future? Will this development be a positive or a negative development?
In the last 100 years, technology has advanced at an unprecedented rate. Although robots
are already a part of our lives, experts predict that they will become even more prevalent in the
coming years. This essay will outline some possible uses of robots in the future and explain why
this development will be a positive one for humanity.
It is highly likely that robots are going to play a more major role in many fields but two
important ones are dangerous jobs and healthcare. Whereas currently, it is humans that are sent
to war or to fight fires or explore space, in the future, these tasks could be performed by robots. In
addition to such roles, robots could also become more commonplace in hospitals and aged care
facilities. Not only could they be used to perform surgery in remote locations, but, as artificial
intelligence advances, they may also be able to interact with and support patients when nurses or
carers are in limited supply. Indeed, such developments are already underway.
Clearly, these advancements in robotics and AI will have a positive impact on society. By
outsourcing hazardous tasks, human workers will be less prone to injury or death. If robots are
able to extinguish fires or disarm bombs efficiently, society too will be safer. In the health sector,
even though some may worry that robots lack the empathy and understanding of a human worker,
the fact is that demand for healthcare workers exceeds supply in many places, which means there
is a dire need for extra help. This demand could well be met by robots with artificial intelligence in
the decades to come.
In conclusion, the potential of robotics is unimaginable. This essay discussed just a few
areas in which this technology could benefit us. While some caution is needed, ultimately, robots
may enhance our lives beyond expectations.

Introduction

Background statement:

Some people say/claim/opine/believe that...

There is no denying that...
These days, .../ In this day and age, … / In today’s world,...
It goes without saying that...
It is universally accepted that...
.... is one of the most important / imminent / alarming issues.
People have divided / diverse opinions about …

Thesis statement:

In my opinion,...
I strongly opine / agree / believe that...
Personally speaking,...
In my view, ...
Apparently, ...
From my point of view, ...
As far as I am concerned, ...
From my perspective, ...

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I concur with ...
To my way of thinking,...
My own view on the matter is...
This essay will examine both views before reaching a concrete decision.
The following paragraphs discuss whether ...... or ...... and reach an appropriate conclusion.
The following essay takes a look at both sides of the argument.
I oppose / support the view and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs.
To discuss / examine this issue, this essay will both … and …

Body

Body 1:

It is true that...
First / Firstly / First and foremost / First of all, ...
Initially...
To begin / start with...
Some people think / believe that...
Many support the view that...
On the one hand…
Body 2:

Second(ly)...
Then / Next / Besides, ...
In addition / Additionally, ...
Consequently...
What’s more, ...
Furthermore / Moreover, ...
Other people think / believe / opine that...
On the other hand...
Last but not least…
Another point worth noting / considering is that …

Example/ Evidence:

As an example / illustration / instance, ...

To show / give / cite an example...
Take … as an example, …
… is a prime example / evidence.
As a piece of evidence...
… is a testament…

Conclusion

In conclusion / summary, ...

To conclude / sum up / summarize / elucidate , ...
In general / Generally, ...
Overall, …
To draw the conclusion...
In a nutshell...
All things considered, ...
By and large, …
Taking everything into account / consideration...
Weighing up both sides of the argument…

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IV. Homework

1. Economic progress is often used to measure a country’s success. However, some people believe
that other factors are more important. What other factors should also be considered when
measuring a country’s success? Do you think one factor is more important than others?

2. These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to
work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?

3. Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to
a more satisfying working life. To what extent do you agree with this view? What other things can
people do in order to have a satisfying working life?

4. Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are
important in achieving happiness?

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