2017 national curriculum tests

Key stage 2

English reading
test mark schemes
Reading answer booklet

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Contents
1. Introduction 3

2. Structure of the key stage 2 English reading test 3

3. Content domain coverage 4

4. Explanation of the mark schemes 6

5. Mark schemes for the English reading test 7

Section 1: Gaby to the Rescue 7
Section 2: Swimming the English Channel 13
Section 3: An Encounter at Sea 19

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1. Introduction
The Standards and Testing Agency (STA) is responsible for the development and delivery of
statutory tests and assessments. STA is an executive agency of the Department for Education.

The 2017 tests assess the 2014 national curriculum. This test has been developed to meet the
specification set out in the test framework for English reading at key stage 2. It assesses the
aspects of comprehension that lend themselves to a paper test. The test frameworks are on
[Link] at [Link]/government/publications/key-stage-2-english-reading-test-framework.

A new test and mark schemes will be produced each year.

The key stage 2 tests will be marked by external markers.

Scaled score conversion tables are not included in this document. Conversion tables will be
produced as part of the standards maintenance process. Scaled score conversion tables for
the 2017 tests will be published at [Link]/guidance/scaled-scores-at-key-stage-2 in July
2017. The standards confirmation meeting will take place in June 2017.

The mark schemes are provided to show markers and teachers how the tests are marked.
The pupil examples are based on responses gathered from the test trialling process.

2. Structure of the key stage 2

English reading test
The key stage 2 English reading test comprises:
• a reading booklet containing three texts which increase in demand throughout the booklet
• a reading answer booklet containing questions totalling 50 marks.

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3. Content domain coverage

The 2017 test meets the specification set out in the test framework. Table 1 sets out the areas of the content
domain that are assessed in the test.

Table 1: Content domain coverage for the 2017 key stage 2 English reading test

2a 2b 2c 2d 2e 2f 2g 2h
Give / Retrieve Summarise Make Predict Identify / Identify / Make
explain the and record main ideas inferences what might explain how explain how comparisons
meaning information from more from the happen information meaning is within the
of words in / identify key than one text / explain from details / narrative enhanced text.
context. details from paragraph. and justify stated and content is through
fiction and inferences implied. related and choice of
non-fiction. with contributes words and
evidence to meaning phrases.
from the text. as a whole.

Qu. Section 1: Gaby to the Rescue

1 1
2 1
3 1
4 1
5 1
6 1
7 1
8 1
9 1
10 2
11 1
12 1
13 1
14 1
Qu. Section 2: Swimming the English Channel
15 1
16 1
17 1
18 2
19 2
20 1
21 1
22 1
23 2
24 1

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2a 2b 2c 2d 2e 2f 2g 2h
Give / Retrieve Summarise Make Predict Identify / Identify / Make
explain the and record main ideas inferences what might explain how explain how comparisons
meaning information from more from the happen information meaning is within the
of words in / identify key than one text / explain from details / narrative enhanced text.
context. details from paragraph. and justify stated and content is through
fiction and inferences implied. related and choice of
non-fiction. with contributes words and
evidence to meaning phrases.
from the text. as a whole.

25 1
26 1
27 1
28 1
Qu. Section 3: An Encounter at Sea
29 1
30 1
31a 1
31b 1
32 1
33 3
34a 1
34b 1
35 1
36 3
37 2
38 1
39 1
Total 10 14 2 22 0 1 1 0

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4. Explanation of the mark schemes

The range of marks available for each question is given at the side of the page in the reading answer
booklet. Incorrect or unacceptable answers are given a mark of 0. No half marks are awarded.

The mark schemes contain acceptable points, which are indicated either by a numbered list or a square
bullet point (if there is only one possible answer). These must be treated as marking principles, not the
exact response a pupil needs to give.

They also contain examples of some frequently occurring correct answers given by pupils in the
trials (these are shown in italics and are introduced by round bullet points). Many pupils will, however,
have different ways of wording an acceptable answer. In assessing each answer, markers must focus
on the content of what has been written and not on the quality of the writing, expression or
grammatical construction.

For ‘find and copy’ questions, the correct answer is indicated by the word(s) outside the brackets. The
word(s) inside the brackets indicate the maximum quotation that is allowed. Copying must be accurate
but minor copying errors or introductions such as ‘The answer is…’ / ‘It’s…’ will be permitted.

The mark schemes may also indicate commonly occurring but incorrect answers that should not be
accepted.

Qu. Requirement Mark

36 Look at the paragraph beginning: Carefully, Michael leaned... Up to

3m
What does this paragraph tell you about Michael’s character?
Explain two features of his character, using evidence from the text to support
your answer.
Aspect of reading
assessed by Content domain: 2d – make inferences from the text / explain and justify inferences with
this question evidence from the text
Acceptable points:
Acceptable points (AP): 1. curious / interested
These are to be treated
as marking principles and 2. observant
should guide marking. 3. brave / daring
Pupils do not have to use
the exact wording. 4. respectful / gentle
5. cautious / calm.

Criteria for the Award 3 marks for two acceptable points, at least one with evidence, e.g.
award of marks
• He’s careful because instead of screaming or running to the side of the boat,
he went carefully and calmly. He’s also very aware of the things around him.
Examples of responses [AP5 + evidence, AP2]
produced in the trials and • Michael is daring because he tried to touch the whale not knowing what
awarded 3 marks would happen. He is very interested. [AP3 + evidence, AP1].
Award 2 marks for either two acceptable points, or one acceptable point with
Examples of responses evidence, e.g.
produced in the trials and
• It tells you he is quite curious about things as a normal person would stay
awarded 2 marks
away, but he leaned over the boat so he could see it better.
[AP1 + evidence]
• It tells us that he is a gentle kind character and cautious. [AP4 + AP5].
Examples of responses
produced in the trials and Award 1 mark for one acceptable point, e.g.
awarded 1 mark
• He is very inquisitive. [AP1]
• He is very brave and adventurous. [AP3].
Do not accept general responses relating to Michael liking animals.

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5. Mark schemes for the English reading test

Section 1: Gaby to the Rescue
Qu. Requirement Mark

1 A Siamese cat crouched on a tree branch, peering down at Gaby with brilliant blue eyes. 1m

Which word is closest in meaning to crouched?

Tick one.

Content domain: 2a – give / explain the meaning of words in context

Award 1 mark for:

balanced
squatted ✓
trembled
pounced

2 Look at the first paragraph, beginning: A Siamese cat... 1m

Gaby pulled the cardigan tighter around her.

Why does Gaby do this?

Tick one.

Content domain: 2d – make inferences from the text / explain and justify inferences with
evidence from the text

Award 1 mark for:

She is thinking of wrapping the cat in her cardigan.

She is worried about damaging the cardigan. ✓
She is feeling cold.
She is worried the cardigan will be difficult to climb in.

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Section 1: Gaby to the Rescue

Qu. Requirement Mark

3 In the paragraph beginning: Mind made up... Gaby says to the cat, ‘You’re out of luck...’ 1m

In what way does Gaby think the cat is out of luck?

Content domain: 2d – make inferences from the text / explain and justify inferences with
evidence from the text

Award 1 mark for reference to any of the following:

1. Gaby’s mother wasn’t there, e.g.

• Gaby’s mum wasn’t back
• because the cat rescuer isn’t there.

2. Only Gaby is available, e.g.

• that Gaby is the only one here for the cat.

3. Gaby’s mother is the expert, e.g.

• her mum could get cats out of trees easily
• because it says her mum is a master tree climber and cat rescuer.

4. Gaby is inexperienced at rescuing cats, e.g.

• because she wasn’t as experienced at getting cats
• she has never climbed up a tree to rescue a cat before.

Do not accept reference to the cat being stuck up a tree.

4 When Gaby pulls herself up on the branch on page 4, the cat meows. 1m

What does Gaby think that the cat is trying to say when it meows?

Content domain: 2d – make inferences from the text / explain and justify inferences with
evidence from the text

Award 1 mark for references to the cat wanting Gaby to hurry, e.g.

• hurry up
• get me down from here quickly
• it’s being impatient.

Do not accept ‘I am hurrying’.

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Section 1: Gaby to the Rescue

Qu. Requirement Mark

5 Why had Gaby climbed the tree the previous summer? 1m

Content domain: 2b – retrieve and record information / identify key details from fiction
and non-fiction

Award 1 mark for reference to either of the following:

1. to have a water fight / to attack the boys, e.g.

• to have a water-balloon game with the boys
• so she could beat the boys in a water-balloon fight
• to get the boys with water bombs.

2. it was a good position for the game, e.g.

• because it was the perfect spot for a full-blown assault on the boys
• she could throw balloons better from up there.

Also accept quotations that meet an acceptable point.

6 Gaby secured her feet and hands and climbed higher... 1m

What does secured her feet and hands mean?

Content domain: 2a – give / explain the meaning of words in context

Award 1 mark for reference to either of the following:

1. getting a good / firm hold, e.g.

• she gripped her hands and feet onto the branch.

2. adjusting her feet and hands, e.g.

• she got her hands and feet into place.

Also accept references to ensuring that she doesn’t fall / is safe (with no reference to
hold / adjustment), e.g.

• she checked her hands were in a safe place on the tree.

7 Gaby thinks she makes two mistakes while trying to rescue the cat. 1m

What is the first mistake that Gaby makes while trying to rescue the cat?

Content domain: 2b – retrieve and record information / identify key details from fiction
and non-fiction

Award 1 mark for reference to Gaby looking down.

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Section 1: Gaby to the Rescue

Qu. Requirement Mark

8 Look at the paragraph beginning: She knew the universal rule... 1m

What does the word universal tell you about the rule?

Content domain: 2a – give / explain the meaning of words in context

Award 1 mark for reference to either of the following:

1. it is something everyone knows / agrees on, e.g.

• it is a rule that everybody should keep
• that this rule applies to everyone in the universe
• the rule is global because everyone knows that rule.

2. it is something that is known / agreed on everywhere, e.g.

• it is known all around the world.

Also accept references to it being a rule that all climbers should know / agree on, e.g.

• it is known by all tree climbers.

Do not accept reference to it being the only rule / the one rule.

Do not accept answers which qualify everyone and everywhere, e.g.

• many people know it.

9 Look at the paragraph beginning: Well, she’d just have to not fall... 1m

The cat was too shiny. Too chubby.

What conclusion does Gaby draw from this?

Content domain: 2b – retrieve and record information / identify key details from fiction
and non-fiction

Award 1 mark for references to the cat having an owner / being looked after, e.g.

• it wasn’t a stray
• somebody loved it
• it’s well fed.

Do not accept answers which do not sufficiently recognise human care for the cat, e.g.

• it looks glossy / fat.

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Section 1: Gaby to the Rescue

Qu. Requirement Mark

10 Look at page 5. Up to
2m
What are three ways the cat shows it does not enjoy Gaby trying to rescue it?

Content domain: 2d – make inferences from the text / explain and justify inferences with
evidence from the text

Award 1 mark for reference to any two of the following.

Award 2 marks for reference to any three of the following.

1. it arched its back

2. it hissed, e.g.

• the cat hissed to tell her to go away.

3. it showed its teeth, e.g.

• it snarled at Gaby
• it bares its teeth.

4. it dug its claws into her / latched onto her, e.g.

• it scratches Gaby
• the cat attacked her.

11 She resettled on the branch, considering her options. 1m

What does considering her options mean in this sentence?

Tick one.

Content domain: 2a – give / explain the meaning of words in context

Award 1 mark for:

thinking about what to do ✓

changing her mind
looking at it from the cat’s point of view
wishing her mother was there

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Section 1: Gaby to the Rescue

Qu. Requirement Mark

12 Look at page 5. 1m

Give one piece of advice that Gaby’s mother gives her for dealing with cats.

Content domain: 2b – retrieve and record information / identify key details from fiction
and non-fiction

Award 1 mark for reference to either of the following:

1. speak softly to them, e.g.

• talk gently to it.

2. pick them up by the loose skin / by the back of their neck, e.g.
• to take hold of their loose skin
• hold a cat by the scruff of their neck like its mother would have.

Do not accept anything that Gaby’s mother does that is not offered as advice, e.g.

• to giggle and sweet talk the cats.

13 Gaby uses the Spanish word gato for cat. 1m

Who else in the story speaks Spanish?

Content domain: 2b – retrieve and record information / identify key details from fiction
and non-fiction

Award 1 mark for any reference to Gaby’s mother, e.g.

• Mum.

14 Number the following events 1–5 to show the order in which they happened. 1m

The first one has been done for you.

Content domain: 2c – summarise main ideas from more than one paragraph

Award 1 mark for the correct sequence:

Gaby breaks the universal rule of tree climbing. 4

Gaby notices the cat. 1
Gaby tries to pick up the cat. 5
Gaby remembers the water-balloon fight. 3
Gaby takes her cardigan off. 2

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Section 2: Swimming the English Channel

Qu. Requirement Mark

15 Nearly twenty-two hours later, the exhausted man staggered onto French soil at Calais 1m
and became an instant hero.

Find and copy two different words from the sentence above that show how tired
Matthew Webb was.

Content domain: 2a – give / explain the meaning of words in context

Award 1 mark for both of the following:

1. exhausted (man)
2. staggered (onto).

16 What event made Matthew Webb want to swim the English Channel? 1m

Content domain: 2b – retrieve and record information / identify key details from fiction
and non-fiction

Award 1 mark for reference to the (unsuccessful) attempt, e.g.

• J.B. Thompson failed to swim it in 1872 which inspired him to swim it

• someone failed in 1872
• J.B. Thompson’s attempt.

Do not accept reference to J.B. Thompson alone, e.g.

• he was inspired by J.B. Thompson.

17 Look at the paragraph beginning: Twenty-seven-year-old Webb… 1m

Find and copy one word from this paragraph that is closest in meaning to ‘motivated’.

Content domain: 2a – give / explain the meaning of words in context

Award 1 mark for:

■■ inspired.

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Section 2: Swimming the English Channel

Qu. Requirement Mark

18 Using information from the text, put a tick in the correct box to show whether each Up to
statement is true or false. 2m

Content domain: 2b – retrieve and record information / identify key details from fiction
and non-fiction

Award 1 mark for three correct or 2 marks for all four correct:

True False

Matthew Webb’s first attempt to swim the

✓
English Channel was not successful.

The first successful swim of the English

✓
Channel was in 1872.

J.B. Thompson and Matthew Webb swam

✓
the English Channel in 1875.

Matthew Webb took twenty hours to swim

✓
the English Channel.

19 Name two of the hardships that Matthew Webb faced in swimming the English Channel Up to
and explain how he dealt with them. 2m

Content domain: 2b – retrieve and record information / identify key details from fiction
and non-fiction

Award 1 mark for any of the following combinations of hardship and action up to a
maximum of 2 marks:

Hardship How he dealt with it

■■ cold / hypothermia ■■ coated himself in oil

■■ jellyfish / stings ■■ coated himself in oil

■■ limited access to food / drink ■■ accompanied by friends / boats
■■ food from his friends / boats
■■ danger / need for protection ■■ accompanied by friends / boats
■■ protection by his friends / boats

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Section 2: Swimming the English Channel

Qu. Requirement Mark

20 Find and copy a group of words that tells you that the drinks of ale, brandy and beef tea 1m
given to Matthew Webb would be considered unusual today.

Content domain: 2a – give / explain the meaning of words in context

Award 1 mark for:

■■ (are) not standard (for today’s cross-Channel swimmers)

21 Why do slow Channel swimmers swim further than faster swimmers? 1m

Content domain: 2b – retrieve and record information / identify key details from fiction
and non-fiction

Award 1 mark for reference to either of the following:

1. faster swimmers are more direct, e.g.

• The faster you are, the more direct your swim will be.

2. tides and / or currents, e.g.

• because of the tides and currents.

Also accept references to being pushed / pulled off course, e.g.

• waves take them off course.

22 Look at the section headed: Frequently asked questions. 1m

How long did the fastest swim across the Channel take?

Content domain: 2b – retrieve and record information / identify key details from fiction
and non-fiction

Award 1 mark for:

■■ 7 hours.

Do not accept 7 without ‘hours’.

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Section 2: Swimming the English Channel

Qu. Requirement Mark

23 Look at the section headed: Frequently asked questions. Up to

2m
Put a tick in the correct box to show whether each of the following statements is a fact
or an opinion.

Content domain: 2d – make inferences from the text / explain and justify inferences with
evidence from the text

Award 1 mark for three correct or 2 marks for all four correct:

Fact Opinion

The temperature of the water in the

✓
Channel can range from 12˚C to 18˚C.

Water with a temperature of 18˚C is

✓
too cold to swim in.

The direct distance across the

✓
Channel is approximately 21 miles.

Faster swimmers do not swim as

✓
many miles across the Channel.

24 In what year did the French authorities make it illegal for people to swim from France 1m
to England?

Content domain: 2b – retrieve and record information / identify key details from fiction
and non-fiction

Award 1 mark for:

■■ 1993.

25 Look at the section headed: Safe to swim? 1m

Find and copy one word which shows that swimming the Channel is illegal in France.

Content domain: 2a – give / explain the meaning of words in context

Award 1 mark for:

■■ outlawed.

Also accept ban.

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Section 2: Swimming the English Channel

Qu. Requirement Mark

26 David Walliams was determined to be successful in his attempt to swim the 1m

English Channel.

Give one piece of evidence from the text which shows this.

Content domain: 2d – make inferences from the text / explain and justify inferences with
evidence from the text

Award 1 mark for reference to either of the following:

1. he did not miss a training session, e.g.

• David showed up to all the training sessions.

2. he trained for nine months.

27 Which of the following would be the most suitable summary of the whole text? 1m

Tick one.

Content domain: 2c – summarise main idea from more than one paragraph

Award 1 mark for:

The Life of David Walliams

A Sporting Challenge ✓
Sailing the Channel
Training for Survival

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Section 2: Swimming the English Channel

Qu. Requirement Mark

28 Draw lines to match each section to its main content. 1m

One has been done for you.

Content domain: 2f – identify / explain how information / narrative content is related and
contributes to meaning as a whole

Award 1 mark for all correctly matched:

Section Content
summarises key
The first Channel
information about
swimmer
swimming the Channel

shows contrasting
Frequently asked
viewpoints about
questions
swimming the Channel

gives information about

Safe to swim? the origins of swimming
the Channel

highlights the continuing

Celebrity
attractions of swimming
swimmer
the Channel

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Section 3: An Encounter at Sea

Qu. Requirement Mark

29 …like a toy sitting on a glass table. 1m

What does this description suggest about the boat?

Content domain: 2g – identify / explain how meaning is enhanced through choice of

words and phrases

Award 1 mark for reference to either of the following:

1. small / insignificant, e.g.

• it was small in a big ocean.

2. still / unmoving, e.g.

• it created no ripples.

30 Look at page 8. 1m

What was unusual for Michael about this day?

Content domain: 2d – make inferences from the text / explain and justify inferences with
evidence from the text

Award 1 mark for reference to Michael seeing no dolphins.

Do not accept references to the weather / temperature.

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Qu. Requirement Mark

31 …the ‘putt-putt’ of her engine was lost in the big, quiet stillness of the afternoon. 1m

Choose the best words to match the description above. Circle both of your choices.

Content domain: 2a – give / explain the meaning of words in context

Award 1 mark for:

The boat was chugging smoking racing roaring

Content domain: 2d – make inferences from the text / explain and justify inferences with 1m
evidence from the text

Award 1 mark for:

bubbling smooth rocking

along on the cold sea.
ripples. waters. tide.

32 Look at page 8. 1m

Find and copy two different words that show Michael enjoyed the feeling of the
cool water.

Content domain: 2a – give / explain the meaning of words in context

Award 1 mark for both of the following:

1. savouring
2. delicious (coolness).

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Section 3: An Encounter at Sea

Qu. Requirement Mark

33 Look at page 9. Up to
3m
How is the whale made to seem mysterious?

Explain two ways, giving evidence from the text to support your answer.

Content domain: 2d – make inferences from the text / explain and justify inferences with
evidence from the text

Acceptable points:

1. unexpected / unidentified / unfamiliar sound it makes

2. unexpected appearance / disappearance
3. Michael’s shock / confusion
4. it describes parts of the whale / the whale is only partly visible
5. it doesn’t immediately say what it is
6. it uses familiar things to describe the unrecognisable
7. rules out what it is not rather than telling you what it is.

Award 3 marks for two acceptable points, with at least one supported with
evidence, e.g.

• the whale is made mysterious because out of the blue, there is a

‘ppppfffffwwwraa’ noise. It is also mysterious as it seems to appear out
of nowhere ‘A black shape much, much bigger than the biggest dolphin,
showed about five metres from the boat’.[AP1 + evidence, AP2 + evidence]
• because of the unusual sound it makes and it doesn’t say it’s a whale until
Michael realises – a whale! That’s what he had seen. [AP1, AP5 + evidence].

Award 2 marks for either two acceptable points, or one acceptable point supported
with evidence, e.g.

• a black shape much much bigger than the biggest dolphin. It doesn’t tell
you what the shape is but you know it isn’t a dophin which creates mystery.
[evidence + AP7]
• something takes Michael by surprise and he keeps you in suspense by not
saying what it is yet. [AP3, AP5].

Award 1 mark for one acceptable point, e.g.

• it only describes a bit of it so you don’t know what it is [AP4]

• by describing it as being like something you know to help you
understand. [AP6].

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Section 3: An Encounter at Sea

Qu. Requirement Mark

34a When Michael touched the whale it felt smooth. 1m

(a) According to the text on page 9, why might he have expected it to feel smooth?

Content domain: 2d – make inferences from the text / explain and justify inferences with
evidence from the text

Award 1 mark for reference to it looking polished / like a polished rock.

Do not accept reference to it being shiny / wet.

34b (b) According to the text on page 10, why might he not have expected it to feel smooth? 1m

Content domain: 2d – make inferences from the text / explain and justify inferences with
evidence from the text

Award 1 mark for reference to either of the following:

1. the whale’s damaged skin / scars, e.g.

• it had bits of skin missing
• it had scars all over it.

2. the whale’s head looked like a patchwork / wreckage.

Also accept quotations which meet an acceptable point.

Do not accept reference to the crease of skin / it having creased skin.

Do not accept reference to injury without referring to scarring / skin damage.

35 Look at the paragraph beginning: Carefully, Michael leaned... 1m

Where was the whale?

Tick one.

Content domain: 2d – make inferences from the text / explain and justify inferences with
evidence from the text

Award 1 mark for:

in front of the boat

at the side of the boat
under the boat ✓
five metres from the boat

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Section 3: An Encounter at Sea

Qu. Requirement Mark

36 Look at the paragraph beginning: Carefully, Michael leaned... Up to

3m
What does this paragraph tell you about Michael’s character?

Explain two features of his character, using evidence from the text to support
your answer.

Content domain: 2d – make inferences from the text / explain and justify inferences with
evidence from the text

Acceptable points:

1. curious / interested
2. observant
3. brave / daring
4. respectful / gentle
5. cautious / calm.

Award 3 marks for two acceptable points, at least one with evidence, e.g.

• He’s careful because instead of screaming or running to the side of the boat,
he went carefully and calmly. He’s also very aware of the things around him.
[AP5 + evidence, AP2]
• Michael is daring because he tried to touch the whale not knowing what
would happen. He is very interested. [AP3 + evidence, AP1].

Award 2 marks for either two acceptable points, or one acceptable point with
evidence, e.g.

• It tells you he is quite curious about things as a normal person would stay
away, but he leaned over the boat so he could see it better.
[AP1 + evidence]
• It tells us that he is a gentle kind character and cautious. [AP4 + AP5].

Award 1 mark for one acceptable point, e.g.

• He is very inquisitive. [AP1]

• He is very brave and adventurous. [AP3].

Do not accept general responses relating to Michael liking animals.

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Section 3: An Encounter at Sea

Qu. Requirement Mark

37 The whale did not seem to be alarmed by meeting Michael. How can you tell this from Up to
its actions? 2m

Give two ways.

Content domain: 2d – make inferences from the text / explain and justify inferences with
evidence from the text

Award 1 mark for reference to any of the following, up to a maximum of 2 marks:

1. the whale stayed / left and came back

2. the whale allowed Michael to touch it, e.g.
• the whale stayed to be touched
• the whale didn’t draw away.

3. the whale looked Michael in the eye / allowed Michael to look it in the eye
4. the whale came close to Michael / close enough to touch the boat, e.g.
• the whale came near the boat.

5. the whale slowly went away / caressed the boat.

Also accept quotations which meet an acceptable point.

Do not accept answers referring to possible aggression by the whale, e.g.

• the whale didn’t attack him

• the whale didn’t swallow him / the boat.

Do not accept reference to the whale remaining calm without further explanation.

38 Like a sleeper waking from a dream, he looked around, dazed. 1m

This tells us that at the end of the story Michael felt that…

Tick one.

Content domain: 2d – make inferences from the text / explain and justify inferences with
evidence from the text

Award 1 mark for:

he wanted the experience to continue.

he had experienced something similar before.
the experience was unreal. ✓
the experience was worrying.

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Qu. Requirement Mark

39 Tick one box in each row to show whether each statement is true or false. 1m

Content domain: 2b – retrieve and record information / identify key details from fiction
and non-fiction

Award 1 mark for all four correct:

True False

Michael was in an unfamiliar area of sea when he

✓
saw the whale.

The boat was still motoring forwards when the

✓
whale appeared.

The whale felt warm and soft when Michael

✓
touched it.

Michael could not name the colour of the whale’s

✓
eye.

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