Body 2: In my point of view, I believe that the government should encourage city dwellers to live in
suburban areas due to the benefits this trend might bring. Firstly, the migration of citizens to rural areas
will help reduce many serious traffic problems such as traffic congestion in major areas. This is because
the number of vehicles appeared on traffic roads may reduce significantly due to the decrease in the
population of city residents in those cities. Secondly, this trend can also develop the economy in remote
areas. The reason is that if more people choose to settle and work in rural areas, its economy will
develop comprehensively in many aspects. This also help the government narrow the economic gap
between rural and urban areas.
Đề: Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or
organization.
Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed? (TEST 4 – CAM14)
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Bd1: Why might this be the case?
1) Being self-employed helps people balance their life and work
Reason: Self-employed individuals can arrange their own schedule and work anywhere
They can take control of their work and life
Eg: People working in technology field such as graphic designers can adjust and set their own schedule,
also they can choose a suitable place for them to work.
2) Being self-employed can keep those people’s work interesting and dynamic.
Reason: Self-employed individual can explore various projects and roles from different fields.
They will not get bored with their jobs.
Eg: A self-employed writer may work on various projects, from blog posts to novels, which allowing them
to explore different genres and styles rather than being confined to one type of writing.
Bd2: What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
1) Financial Instability.
Reason: Income can be unpredictable
Self-employed individuals may face periods of low income or inconsistent cash flow.
Make it difficult for them to manage their finances.
Eg : A new entrepreneur launching a startup may experience fluctuating income, especially in the first
few years, making it difficult to budget for personal expenses.
2) Lack of Benefits
Reason: Self-employed individuals often do not receive benefits like health insurance, retirement plans,…
like traditional employees.
They will suffer from additional financial burdens.
Eg: A self-employed photographer must pay for their own health insurance and retirement savings,
which can be significantly more expensive than benefits provided by an employer.
Viết: In recent years, more and more people tend to become self-employers instead of working for
companies or organizations. This essay will look at some possible reasons to this trend and point out
some limitations about it.
There are various reasons why people choose to become freelancers. The first reason is that being
self-employed will help people balance between their life and work. Becoming a self-employed
individual helps them arrange their own schedule and work anywhere they want, so that they can take
control of their own work. For example, a freelance graphic designers can adjust and set their own
schedule, also choosing a suitable place for them to work, which may help them have the initiative in
their own work. Another reason is that being self-employed can keep those people’s work interesting
and dynamic. Particularly, self-employed individuals have the opportunities to explore various projects
and roles from different fields, which makes their jobs more exciting and less boring. For instance, a self-
employed writer may work on various projects, from blog posts to novels, which allowing them to
explore different genres and styles rather than being confined to one type of writing.
Besides some benefits which attracted people to this trend, there are still some drawbacks and
limitations about it. Firstly, freelancers may go through some financial instabilities. To demonstrate,
choosing to be a freelancer mean that your income will be unpredictable, face a few periods of low
income or inconsistent cash flow in your career and make you difficult to manage your finances. For
example, a new entrepreneur launching a startup may experience fluctuating income, especially in the
first few years, making it difficult to budget for personal expenses. Secondly, people will lose some
benefits if they choose to become a self-employed individual. In this case, those people often do not
receive benefits like health insurance, retirement plans,… like traditional employees, this may make them
suffer from additional financial burdens. For instance, A self-employed photographer must pay for their
own health insurance and retirement savings, which can be significantly more expensive than benefits
provided by an employer.
In conclusion, becoming a freelancer can bring both benefits and drawbacks as becoming a traditional
employer, so that they need to understand it clearly and choose which work style is suitable for
themselves and their jobs.