DLL Matatag - English 7 Q2 W7
DLL Matatag - English 7 Q2 W7
B. Performance The learners demonstrate their multiliteracies and communicative competence in evaluating Philippine literature
Standards (prose) for clarity of meaning, purpose, and target audience as a foundation for publishing original literary texts that
reflect local and national identity.
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● In writing a story, what is the first thing that you usually do?
● What should you do to make your story interesting and understandable, or
clearly written?
The discussions we had last week on the writing process will be enhanced
further this week since our focus is on revising and editing with the use of
transitional devices.
B. Developing and Revising and Editing (Using Transitional Markers for Cohesion and Coherence)
Deepening
Understanding 1. Explicitation (35 - 40 minutes)
Lead the discussion on the third and fourth steps in the writing process: Revising
and Editing. Ask students to compare the two. Then, discuss the following Venn
diagram:
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Source: http://mrsrooney.pbworks.com/w/page/94013528/Revising%20%20Editing
This can be done by pair, so
2. Worked Example students can brainstorm
Ask the students to compare the plot elements in Column A and Column B and and create mini discussion
identify which is clearer and easier to understand. to promotion collaboration.
Rising Action There were no bars in the Because there were no bars in
barrio. The farmer invited Joe the barrio, the farmer invited Joe
to his nipa hut and offered to his nipa hut and offered
lambanog. Joe got drunk. lambanog. Joe got drunk while
The farmer didn’t. the farmer didn’t.
Falling Action The American soldier became After the American soldier
delusional. He passed out. became delusional, he passed
out.
Resolution The Filipino farmer brought So, the Filipino farmer brought
the soldier back to his camp. the soldier back to his camp
where he was offered a can of
beer. However, he refused saying
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Guide Question:
Which plot clearer and easier to understand?
What words made the plot in Column B clearer? How do you say so?
How do we call these words?
Day 2
TRANSITIONAL MARKS
ACTIVITY 1: Bottle it Up (25 minutes)
Post some transitional markers around the room. Ask the students to accomplish
the worksheet which requires them to classify the transitional markers based on
their functions.
To add To
prove
TO COMPARE:
whereas, but, yet, on the other hand, however, nevertheless, on the contrary, by
comparison, where, compared to, up against, balanced against, vis a vis, but, although,
conversely, meanwhile, after all, in contrast, although this may be true
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TO PROVE:
because, for, since, for the same reason, obviously, evidently, furthermore, moreover,
besides, indeed, in fact, in addition, in any case, that is
TO SHOW EXCEPTION:
yet, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, of course, once in a while, sometimes
TO SHOW TIME:
immediately, thereafter, soon, after a few hours, finally, then, later, previously, formerly,
first (second, etc.), next, and then
TO REPEAT:
in brief, as I have said, as I have noted, as has been noted
TO EMPHASIZE:
definitely, extremely, obviously, in fact, indeed, in any case, absolutely, positively,
naturally, surprisingly, always, forever, perennially, eternally, never, emphatically,
unquestionably, without a doubt, certainly, undeniably, without reservation
TO SHOW SEQUENCE:
first, second, third, and so forth. A, B, C, and so forth. next, then, following this, at this
time, now, at this point, after, afterward, subsequently, finally, consequently, previously,
before this, simultaneously, concurrently, thus, therefore, hence, next, and then, soon
TO GIVE AN EXAMPLE:
for example, for instance, in this case, in another case, on this occasion, in this situation,
take the case of, to demonstrate, to illustrate, as an illustration, to illustrate
TO SUMMARIZE OR CONCLUDE:
in brief, on the whole, summing up, to conclude, in conclusion, as I have shown, as I have
said, hence, therefore, accordingly, thus, as a result, consequently
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In a small town in Luzon, two families lived. One was a rich family 1.
the other was poor. The kids of the poor family were healthy 2. they
would go out and play. 3. , the rich family’s children usually seldom
came out. they became pale, sickly, and anemic.
Since they were next-door neighbors, the poor family would inhale the aroma of the
rich family’s food whenever their servants cooked something delicious.
4. , the rich man accused the poor man and his family of stealing the
spirit of their wealth and food.
5. the poor father appeared in court, he collected coins from his wife
and children and jingled them inside his hat. 6. , he asked if the rich
man heard the spirit of the money and said that he had already paid with the spirit of
the money. The judge dismissed the case 7. he even came down from
his high chair to congratulate the poor man.
Day 3
REVISING (40 minutes)
Show the revised version of the sample draft. Ask the students to go over the draft and
use the Story Writing Checklist for self-evaluation on Revising. After which, ask
them to collaborate with a classmate for peer evaluation.
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lambanog." "Jungle
juice, eh?"
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"I guess that is what the
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Day 4
Source: https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/editing-marks-anchor-chart-12304895
Present and discuss how editing marks are used using the sample below.
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Edited Version
An American soldier was walking and when he saw me, he headed toward me. I stopped
plowing and waited for him. I noticed he was carrying a half-pint bottle of whisky.
Whisky bottles seemed part of the American uniform.
"I am sorry, Joe, but there are no bars in this Barrio," I replied.
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confused.
I can compose
literary texts
using appropriate
structure.
I can use
transitional
markers.
IV. EVALUATING LEARNING: FORMATIVE ASSESSMENT AND TEACHER’S REFLECTION NOTES TO TEACHERS
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2. The short stories written by our Filipino writers play a very important role in
our society they reveal our experiences and culture.
6. We need to protect our country. , what our heroes fought for will
be put to waste.
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▪ ways forward
What could I have done differently?
What can I explore in the next lesson?
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