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Chapter#3 Rain On The Roof.

-Coates Kinney

Introduction to the Poem


From the title of the Poem-‘Rain on the Roof’, we can make out that the poem is
about the rain. The poet is telling us about the memories he has of the rain. The
sound of the raindrops falling on the roof of his house brings back sweet
memories of the past.

Literary Devices in the poem


Rhyme scheme of the poem: abcbdefe

Stanza 1
[Link]: The repetition of a consonant sound in two or more consecutive
words.
‘Humid Hover’ - ‘h’ sound is repeating.
‘starry spheres’ - ‘s’ should is repeating.
‘press pillow’- ‘p’ sound is repeating.
‘lie listening’ - ‘l’ sound is repeating.
ii. Onomatopoeia: The use of sound words to create a dramatic effect and auditory
imagery.
‘Patter’ is the use of sound word. It is the sound made by the rain drops falling on
the roof top.
iii. Personification: Treating a non – living thing as a living being.
darkness has been personified when he says that it is sad.
iv. Transferred Epithet: The use of an adjective with a noun when it refers to another
noun.
In ‘melancholy darkness’, the darkness is not melancholy, but it refers to the sad
people.

Stanza 2
[Link]: The repetition of a consonant sound in two or more consecutive
words.
‘busy being’ - ‘b’ sound is repeating
‘their thread’ - ‘th’ sound is repeating
‘rain roof’ - ‘r’ sound is repeating
ii. Onomatopoeia: The use of sound words to create a dramatic effect and auditory
imagery.
‘tinkle’, ‘patter’ – sounds made by the raindrops
iii. Personification: Treating a non – living thing as a living being.
recollection is personified when he says that they weave dreams.
iv. Transferred Epithet: The use of an adjective with a noun when it refers to another
noun.
‘dreamy fancies’ – it does not mean that the fancies are dreamy but refers to the
people who have dreams.

Stanza 3
[Link]: The repetition of a consonant sound in two or more consecutive
words.
‘memory my mother’ - ‘m’ sound is repeating
‘Darling dreamers’ - ‘d’ sound is repeating
ii. Onomatopoeia: The use of sound words to create a dramatic effect and auditory
imagery.
‘patter’ – sound of raindrops falling on the shingles of the roof.

Question and Answers


[Link] do the following phrases mean to you? Discuss in class.
(i) humid shadows
(ii) starry spheres
(iii) what a bliss
(iv) a thousand dreamy fancies into busy being start
(v) a thousand recollections weave their air-threads into woof
Ans:
(i) ‘humid shadows’ refers to the dark clouds which are full of water.
(ii) ‘starry spheres’ refers to the sky at night time which is full of stars.
(iii) ‘bliss’ means a blessing.
(iv) ‘a thousand dreamy fancies into busy being start’ means that people start
having varied sweet dreams.
(v) ‘a thousand recollections weave their air-threads into woof’ means that when
people are asleep, the memories of the past come back into their mind in the form
of dreams.

2. What does the poet like to do when it rains?


Ans: When it rains, the poet likes to lay in bed and hear the rain falling on the
roof of his room.
3. What is the single major memory that comes to the poet? Who are the “darling
dreamers” he refers to?
Ans: The poet has memories of his beloved mother. When he was a child, she
would put him and his siblings to bed and allowed them to sleep till late. They had
sweet dreams in their sleep. “Darling Dreamers” refers to the poet and his siblings
when they were children and had sweet dreams. They were loved by their mother
and so, were her ‘darlings’.

4. Is the poet now a child? Is his mother still alive?


Ans: No, now the poet is not a child. He is an adult. His mother is not alive anymore.

[Link] does the poet describe the sky before the rain falls?

Ans: There are dark clouds hovering around in the sky. They hide the stars with
darkness all around. The poet compares the darkness with sadness, as these
humid shadows gently weep which pours down as rainy tears.

6. What does each sound of shingle create ?

Ans: Every raindrop on the tiles of the roof creates a rhythm with the poet's
heartbeat. This evokes thousands of dreams making his thoughts busy. While he
focuses on the sound of the pitter-patter on the roof, his mind starts weaving
recollections of fond memories of yesteryears.

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Kinney employs various literary devices such as alliteration, onomatopoeia, personification, and transferred epithet to evoke nostalgia. Alliteration creates a musical rhythm, as seen in phrases like 'humid hover' and 'starry spheres', enhancing the sensory experience. The onomatopoeic words like 'patter' mimic the sound of rain, triggering auditory memories. Personification, such as 'melancholy darkness', imbues non-living elements with human emotions, deepening the emotional ambiance. Transferred epithets, like in 'dreamy fancies', shift emotional attributes, emphasizing the connections between memories and feelings .

The use of transferred epithet in phrases like 'melancholy darkness' and 'dreamy fancies' shifts emotional qualities between words, intensifying the poem’s emotive depth. By attributing human sadness to 'darkness', a non-human element, the poet emphasizes the pervasive mood of nostalgia and longing. Similarly, 'dreamy fancies' taps into the imaginative states of individuals rather than the fancies themselves, highlighting the profound connection between environment and personal introspection .

The 'dark clouds' imagery suggests an emotional heaviness and sadness linked with loss, reflecting the poet's somber mood before the rain begins. Contrastingly, 'starry spheres' evoke a sense of wonder and vastness, offering a glimpse into more hopeful memories, or the potential for optimism. This juxtaposition between darkness and light in the sky metaphorically mirrors the emotional tapestry of memories—some somber, others bright— contributing to the poet's reflective state .

The poet personifies the dark clouds and recollections to deepen the emotional narrative and create a more vivid sensory experience. By giving human attributes to 'dark clouds' and 'recollections', Kinney creates an emotional depth that resonates with readers. The 'sad darkness' and 'recollections weaving' suggest that these entities possess emotions and actions, which help symbolize the internal emotional state of the poet, linking weather patterns and human feelings in a profound manner .

The poem conveys a tapestry of feelings interwoven with nostalgia, longing, and tenderness. These emotions collectively create a reflective and contemplative mood, as the poet oscillates between memories of familial love and the sorrow of loss. The 'patter' of rain serves both as a comforting lullaby and a poignant reminder of times past, striking a balance between solace and melancholy. This dichotomy fosters a mood steeped in the gentle sadness of reminiscence, deepening readers’ engagement with the poet's emotional journey .

The poet uses the imagery of raindrops to connect dreams and memories. As the rain falls, it evokes 'a thousand dreamy fancies into busy being', indicating that the auditory stimulus of rain prompts an active dreaming state. Furthermore, it weaves 'a thousand recollections' into a tapestry of thoughts, suggesting that memories are inherently connected to the dreamlike state created by the rain's rhythm. These elements together underscore how the past is revived in the mind during restful moments .

The poet's mother plays a central thematic role, serving as the anchor of childhood memories. Her presence is evoked through the rain's sound, symbolizing maternal love and security. The 'darling dreamers' reference underscores her nurturing influence, allowing her children to sleep soundly and dream positively. Her memory creates a nostalgic longing in the poet, framing rain as a conduit to reconnect with past familial warmth and love, thus enriching the poem's themes of nostalgia and loss .

The poet achieves the shift from external nature to internal reflection through vivid sensory language and suggestive prompts. He starts with the immediate sensation of rain, 'patter', drawing attention to the external scene. As the poem progresses, this auditory stimulus becomes a catalyst for inner contemplation, with 'a thousand recollections' weaving into threads of thought. This transition is facilitated by personifying nature’s elements, making them mirrors of internal emotive states, thus linking the natural world and human psyche seamlessly .

The rhythmic pattern of raindrops on the roof is significant as it symbolizes both the passage of time and the poet's emotional state. It mirrors the heartbeat, a rhythmic connection to life and memory. It conjures dreams and recollections, transforming into a mental space where past experiences are relived. This rhythm serves to stabilize emotional flux, creating continuity between past and present, thereby offering a meditative solace amid life's turbulence .

'Rain on the Roof' depicts the passage of time through the evolution of memories induced by rain. For the poet, rain is a trigger that bridges past childhood experiences with present reflections. This interweaving of temporal lines shows the rain’s consistent influence across different life stages, reflecting constancy amid change. By focusing on 'darling dreamers', the poet highlights the transformative nature of these experiences over time, suggesting that while external conditions remain unchanged (rain), internal interpretations and feelings about them evolve .

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