Please explain your reasons for transferring from your current institution and
what you hope to gain by transferring into another institution. (4150 characters)
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In 2022, after completing my studies at United World College Changshu, I enrolled in the
University of Hong Kong for a double degree psychology program. This program entailed
spending two years in Hong Kong and the subsequent two years at the University of California,
Berkeley. However, an unexpected shift to remote digital instruction prompted me to seek an in-
person university experience. Enrolling in a program that brought me immense satisfaction, the
split-degree psychology program was initially close to home. But because of this shift to remote
instruction amid the COVID pandemic, I yearned for an in-person program. Time was limited, so
I quickly attended the University of Florida (UF) because of its prestigious Honors Program. The
program's exceptional academic reputation and commitment to fostering a stimulating learning
environment aligned well with my educational goals. What particularly appealed to me were the
unique academic programs and the multicultural student population at UF. The opportunity to
engage in distinct academic environments and the university's emphasis on delivering a
comprehensive academic experience influenced my decision. The provision of specialized
classes, research opportunities, and a community that encourages intellectual growth were key
factors within the Honors Program. These factors aligned perfectly with my academic
aspirations. UF's commitment to diversity was also a decisive factor in my final choice.
Regarding the decision to transfer, my experience at UF revealed a major
misalignment between the campus atmosphere and my academic and social expectations. Despite
actively utilizing campus resources and engaging in the academic community, a palpable
disconnect prompted a reevaluation of my educational path. UF's focus on athletics
overshadowed my preference for a research-centric lifestyle, hindering my social and academic
expectations. In contrast, the University of Pennsylvania epitomizes transformative academic and
social opportunities. Beyond a mere change in location, Pennsylvania symbolizes a profound
shift in the educational paradigm, aligning impeccably with my aspirations to foster a scholarly
environment supporting academic interests and personal growth. Its rich academic legacy and
commitment to inclusivity resonate with my values, providing a platform that UF lacks for
shaping the next chapter of my academic journey.
How will you explore the community at Penn? Consider how Penn will help shape
your perspective, and how your experiences and perspective will help shape
Penn. (1020 characters - Cut in half)
P1 - Research clubs and organizations at Penn related to your interests
P2 - Add your Autism Club essay, shorten it and explain how you might want to
create something similar at Penn
At Penn, I intend to join organizations such as the Autism Connection of Pennsylvania
and ABOARD's Autism CONNECTION OF PA. The organizations will be an excellent starting
point for me to learn more about ways of engaging with and helping people living with Autism.
It will be an opportunity to learn by observing and doing. I find this a very promising experience
because I will learn new things and meet many different people with diverse levels of Autism
and diverse understandings of the world.
I intend to make Penn a more welcoming place for people with neurodiversity by creating
an autism club like the one at UF. I started the club to provide people within and outside the UF
community living with Autism a chance to explore. I incorporated art therapy at the club as a
central element in fostering communication and social skills among members. The club has
helped the UF community realize the importance of inclusivity, even to people with other
disabilities. I would want to create a club with the same mission at Penn to allow more people in
and outside Penn with Autism to explore their abilities.
Considering the specific undergraduate school you have selected, describe how you intend to
explore your academic and intellectual interests at the University of Pennsylvania. (For students
applying to specialized programs, please answer this questions in regard to your single-degree
school choice; your interest in the specialized program may be addressed through the program-
specific essay.) (2295 characters) (only 600 characters right now)
Research specific academic programs, courses, professors etc at Penn
At Penn, I want to engage in interdisciplinary research, to try to understand autism
comprehensively. Thus, I will engage in research projects in many areas, especially neuroscience
and art therapy. I want to join the Neuroscience Program at Penn taught by Mike Kaplan and
engage in research and outreach programs conducted by students in this major. I want to engage
in the Psychology program and learn and research more about how people perceive, process, and
respond to information in the world. I also intend to engage with the Autism Spectrum Program
of Excellence (ASPE) conducted by the University's Perelman School of Medicine to research
how to make the lives of people with Autism better. I will be glad to follow the lead of Edward
S. Brodkin, the co-director of ASPE’s class. Also, I will join the Adult Autism Spectrum
Program, try to interact with autistic people of different ages, to understand their cognitive
capacity and how differently autism affect them. Besides, I also want to participate in David
Mandell’s researches on Autism intervention research network for behavioral health, Clinical
algorithm for identifying adult autism, and evaluating the effects of Autism Insurance Mandates.
The Penn Autism Clinic will also be a conducive environment for me to learn and interact more
with individuals with Autism. Additionally, I want to try to use art therapy as one of the
treatment for autism. Therefore, I will engage in art therapy programs, learn how I can use it to
help autistic people across all ages learn to express themselves. Lastly, I want to create a Campus
Resource Guide for Students with Autism, which I believe I will learn with the help of the
professors in these departments.