Jannah Nuriddin
Mrs.WG
Honor English 10
07 January, 2025
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A speck in the vast ocean
Love is like a speck of sand, in a vast ocean so grand,
Finding love is hard, but not impossible to stand,
Keeping love is tough, but we hold it in our hand,
I found you in the ocean, a speck of sand so grand.
In the waves of life, I searched so far and wide,
Through the storms and tides, I kept my heart open wide,
Then I found you, a treasure in the sea,
A tiny speck of sand, you meant the world to me.
Love is like a speck of sand, in a vast ocean so grand,
Finding love is hard, but not impossible to stand,
Keeping love is tough, but we hold it in our hand,
I found you in the ocean, a speck of sand so grand.
We sailed together, through the calm and through the storm,
In the warmth of love, we kept each other warm,
But the ocean's vast, and the currents strong,
I lost you in the waves, and now I sing this song.
Love is like a speck of sand, in a vast ocean so grand,
Finding love is hard, but not impossible to stand,
Keeping love is tough, but we hold it in our hand,
I found you in the ocean, a speck of sand so grand.
Tears fall like rain, as I search the sea once more,
Hoping to find you, like I did before,
The ocean's deep, but my love is true,
I'll keep on searching, until I find you.
Love is like a speck of sand, in a vast ocean so grand,
Finding love is hard, but not impossible to stand,
Keeping love is tough, but we hold it in our hand,
I found you in the ocean, a speck of sand so grand.
Though I lost you, my heart still holds the light,
In the darkest depths, I'll keep up the fight,
For love is rare, like a speck of sand,
In this vast ocean, I'll find you again.
Love is like a speck of sand, in a vast ocean so grand,
Finding love is hard, but not impossible to stand,
Keeping love is tough, but we hold it in our hand,
I found you in the ocean, a speck of sand so grand.
So I wrote this poem when I was distraught and like all the other poems I write about
how I felt at that moment. So I wrote that poem when the person I loved had to leave and
there was not going to be any communication. I could not call him or see him and this
made me upset. He was
also upset not about leaving but about how I was going to deal with my emotions at the
time. I wanted to let him know that I was okay and that everything would be okay. So I
describe our love like a spec of sand in the ocean. We found eachother in this big world
and I wanted to let him know that we could always find each other again. The imagery
of the vast ocean and a speck of sand beautifully illustrates the idea of us finding
something precious and rare in a large, overwhelming world.
Love is like a speck of sand, in a vast ocean so grand,
This simile compares love to a tiny speck of sand in a vast ocean, emphasizing its
precious and rare nature in a large, overwhelming world.
An illustration of a couple standing on a serene beach at sunset, with golden sands and a
colorful sky, would be a graphic element that complements my poem's themes of love and
connection.
