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Writing Eating Food Corregido

The essay discusses the increasing consumption of junk food and the need to improve eating habits for better health. It emphasizes the benefits of choosing healthy foods, cooking at home, and controlling meal portions to reduce disease risk. Ultimately, adopting healthier eating habits can lead to a longer life.

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Writing Eating Food Corregido

The essay discusses the increasing consumption of junk food and the need to improve eating habits for better health. It emphasizes the benefits of choosing healthy foods, cooking at home, and controlling meal portions to reduce disease risk. Ultimately, adopting healthier eating habits can lead to a longer life.

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Marina Sanchez
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Nowadays, the number of people who consume junk food has increased.

At the same time, their (sin


their) habits have changed. This essay will explain the benefits of improving our eating habits.
Firstly, it is a well-known fact that the food we eat has a big impact on our bodies and minds.
Because of this, people need to stop eating fast food and replace it with healthy recipes, such as
vegetables over pizza or fruits instead of sweets. Moreover, cooking at home allows you to control
the size and calories of your meals, reduce your sugar consumption, and avoid drinking alcohol or
sugary drinks, which reduces your chances of getting diseases.
To conclude, people have to improve their eating habits, including eating healthy foods, because
this helps us to reduce diseases and extend our lives.

1. Introducción
• "has increased, of the same time" → "has increased. At the same time,": Se separan las ideas
con un punto para que tenga sentido lógico.
2. Primer párrafo (argumento principal)
• "it's a well-know fact" → "it is a well-known fact": falta el adjetivo en su forma correcta..
• "stop eat" → probablemente querías decir "stop eating"
• "vegetables over pizzas or fruits over candies": reordenado para sonar más natural en inglés.

3. Argumentos adicionales
• "sugar consome" → "sugar consumption" (forma nominal correcta)
• "result drink alcohol..." → "avoid drinking alcohol or sugary drinks": más claro y
gramaticalmente correcto.
• "reduce your probablys to have diseases" → "reduces your chances of getting diseases":
expresado de manera natural.
4. Conclusión
• "this help us to reduce" → "this helps to reduce": el verbo “help” necesita concordar con el
sujeto.

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