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IELTS Essay Final

The document discusses the importance of choosing between formal education and early workforce entry for career success. It highlights the benefits of a college education, such as improved skills and job opportunities, while also acknowledging the advantages of gaining practical experience through early work. Ultimately, a balanced approach combining both education and work experience is suggested as the best path to long-term career success.

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IELTS Essay Final

The document discusses the importance of choosing between formal education and early workforce entry for career success. It highlights the benefits of a college education, such as improved skills and job opportunities, while also acknowledging the advantages of gaining practical experience through early work. Ultimately, a balanced approach combining both education and work experience is suggested as the best path to long-term career success.

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IELTS Writing Task 2 Essay

The journey toward a successful career depends on the direction a person chooses early in life.

While some prefer gaining formal education to build knowledge and qualifications, others believe

that entering the workforce early develops stronger practical skills. Understanding both paths is

important when shaping one's professional future.

College education helps in building a strong academic foundation and deep subject understanding.

It improves thinking, research, communication, and teamwork skills that are useful in modern

workplaces. A degree often increases job opportunities, as many companies prefer qualified

candidates. Universities also help students grow through personal development and career

guidance. Lastly, they offer connections that can support future growth. In contrast, those who skip

college might miss these structured learning benefits. For example, my cousin completed a medical

degree after years of study and is now a certified doctor working in a top hospital - something

impossible without formal education and training.

On the other hand, starting work early helps individuals learn practical skills directly on the job. It

builds real-life confidence and allows early financial independence, avoiding student loans.

Workplace challenges teach quick decision-making and problem-solving. Some people develop

faster by learning business or trade work through hands-on experience. Many even succeed by

proving their skills rather than showing degrees. Still, long years in college may delay real-world

exposure and income. For instance, someone who began a mobile repair business after school

gained experience faster and now runs a successful workshop through self-learning.

In conclusion, both perspectives offer valuable lessons. While education builds a solid base, early

work brings real-world understanding. In the end, a balanced approach often leads to long-term

career success.

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