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Task Writing Challenge Day 4

HOW TO WRITING MAIN BODY PARAGRAPH OF IELTS

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HOW TO WRITING MAIN BODY PARAGRAPH OF IELTS

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Parents of obese children should be punished for making them fat.

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Furthermore, parents can’t be blamed for their overweight children because obesity cases are also
influenced by genetic factors. In the biological field, genetics from parents, even the grandparents,
brings matters that can be inherited by the next generation. When the parent is already overweight
before they get married, they can pass the obesity gene to their children. This gene affects the
metabolic system in the body and makes it slower. Hence, the burning of calories inside the body
becomes disturbed, and the rest of the calories will be saved as fat. Even though the children are
already controlling their food, they remain fat because of these genetic factors. A Recent study
found that 8 of 10 children suffer from obesity. The data said that 5 of the overweight children have
at least 1 parent who suffers from obesity, either the father or the mother.

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