刘洪波雅思写作真经班
IELTS Writing
Lecture 3
刘洪波
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Lecture 1 : Task 1, G & A
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G ：书信作文
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Last month you had a holiday overseas where you
stayed with some friends. They have just sent
you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter
• Thank them for the photos and for the holiday
• Explain why you didn’t write earlier
• Invite them to come and stay with you
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any address.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear …………,
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G ：书信作文
1. 编造时间、地点、人物、事件和原因
2. 要符合常识和逻辑，合情合理
3. 内容平衡，主体为 3 段，每段视句子的复杂性写 3-4 句话
4. 注意词汇和语法从句的多样性
5. 正确的书信体格式
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Dear Taufik and Lina,
I’m so glad receiving your photos when we were in
Singapore. The photos are so nice and bright. They
remind me for my special holiday with you.
I’m sorry because I don’t write a letter to you as soon
as possible. After I came back to Melbourne, my
boss asked me to had two weeks training in
wellington, New Zealand. I don’t have any time to
tell you because it happened suddenly.
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My company wants to change the system of the
computer into the online system. All of the staffs
must have training first, before the system running.
I hope you can come and stray with me during next
holiday. My address is: 888 Little Collins Street,
Melbourne, Victoria, 3000. You can contact me first
if you have a plan to visit.
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Thanks for your kindness and I’m looking forward for
your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Victor
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Score 5
The examiner’s comment:
This answer does not cover the bullets well because
there are no thanks for the holiday and giving the
address is not logical in the context. The second
bullet is given rather too much focus, so the
purpose of this letter is less clear, and the tone is
inappropriate at the end of the letter…
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Dear Taufik and Lina,
I am writing this letter to thank you for sending me
these beautiful photos.
They are so vivid and remind me of those exciting
days and nights with you guys in Sydney.
I would say that it was the most wonderful holiday I’ve
ever had thanks to your hospitality.
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建议信
A British friend of yours who is learning your
language is coming to visit you and planning to
stay for one month.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
tell him / her where you plan to take him / her
give him / her suggestions on how to learn the
language
tell him / her what he / she needs to bring
Write at least 150 words.
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Dear James
I am very much looking forward to seeing you in
Beijing soon! It will be a good opportunity for you to
try out your Chinese language skills.
I will definitely take you to the Olympics Stadium,
called the Bird’s Nest and the Water Cube, and
some of the other tourist spots in the city, including:
The Forbidden City and Summer Palace. Of course
we must make a trek out to the Great Wall, a place
you’ve said you really want to visit.
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Although it is already autumn here, the weather is still
hot and humid. Just bring some T-shirts, shorts and
light trousers. Definitely bring some comfortable
walking shoes as we will be walking a lot and taking
public transportation. Also bring your camera so
that you can take lots of pictures!
I look forward to seeing you soon!
Best wishes,
Xiao Fung
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