Name: Robert C.
De Arce
Title: “My Memorable Senior High School Life”
High school life is the best memory of being student. This is the time when you
totally realized that life was full of mysteries. Mystery is term of experience because at
this stage of my life. This stage was able to know that life is not all about happiness or
sadness but this two will be part and be my bestfriend in life. I have a lot of experience
that mould my personality. That I can use to treasure through the journey of my life. And
this is my simple story during my senior high school life.
This is how my senior high school life started , first day of school. I felt excited
and nervous. Excited in such a way that I will be able to experience another journey of
my life. Nervous in the sense that I will be facing new classmates , new teachers and
new friends . Nevertheless , the nervous I felt in the first day slowly gone and filled with
happiness. I was able to gained new friends . Most of them are my schoolmate and
some of them are transferees from other school. I really thought that my senior high
school would be very boring ,but I was wrong. I don’t expect that I would be enjoying
with my new friends and my classmates. I really treasure every single days with them ,
with their craziness in life.
As the days passed by, I experienced lots of new things in my life . I was able to
eat with my classmates and teacher in what we called “bodol fight”. You’ll be eating with
your bare hands only ,no using of spoons and forks. The foods are placed together in a
big banana leaves. I really enjoy eating with them.
During our mass demonstration ( mass demonstration), we are so busy . Putting
makeup on our faces. Taking pictures. Also, that day is our founders day. That day, will
be performing our modern folk dance. I am quite nervous at that day. To be honest , I
am not a good dancer. After we perform, I felt relieve. And the good news our dance is
the best. We won that time.
Another memories in my senior high is I was one of the top honor. I made my
parents proud. And of course, I am very thankful to our Almighty God that he never
leave me no matter what. Actually, I never thought I that I’ll be one of them . I was quite
shocked that day. Suddenly, I realized all my handworks and patience gives me a big
honor in my life.
This school year, I was able to joined road trip with my friends. I really enjoy
and had fun with them. First in my life that I would be seeing myself hanging out with
friends. Going some places that are strange to me.
As the days passed by, we’ve planned to have a group study and group making
of project. As the time passed by, one of classmates told us what if we a little break.
Break to enjoy ourselves first. Some of our subjects are stressing us. Our project
making end up swimming on the beach. First time that I would be with my classmates
swimming on the beach.
The most exciting part of my senior high school life is our Christmas party .
That day, I was able to enjoy and felt the presence of Christmas. Lots of games
happened on that day. All of my classmates really enjoyed that day . That day also,
we’ve planned to have the last bonding on that year. So , we went to the beach. We
spent half of the day for the Christmas party and half for our beach bonding. That day
was so memorable to me. I realized something (secret). I really treasure every single
days , hours , minutes,and seconds that I was with my classmates and friends.
Reminiscing the memories in my senior high school was a good idea. Times
pass very quickly . Some things may fade but not my memories, memories in my senior
high. I do believed that if you’ll miss high school life , you’ll miss the half part of your life.
High School life you’ll experience lots of new things and memories that you will bring in
your entire life.
Commentary Critique
My Memorable Memory Senior High School is an inspiring story of a young man
who looks back on his high school years with fondness and nostalgia. The narrator
reminisces about his time as a student, recalling his friends, his teachers, and the
overall atmosphere of the school. He remembers the feeling of camaraderie, the
excitement of learning new things, and the sense of accomplishment he felt when
graduating. The story is a great reminder that the high school experience can be a
source of strength and joy, even years later. This story is a great example of how
nostalgia can provide us with a sense of comfort and satisfaction. It is also a reminder of
the lasting impact of our high school experience and the memories we make during
those years. The story encourages us to remember the good times and to cherish the
relationships we had with our peers and teachers. Ultimately, this story is a reminder
that our memories of high school can provide us with a source of strength and joy, even
years later.
The only suggestion I would make is to add more specific details. For example,
what were some of the classes that they enjoyed? What were some of the moments
with their friends that were especially memorable? Adding in more of these specific
details would make the essay more engaging and would help the reader better
understand the author's experience.
